Heartbroken

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on January 1, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 300
• Final notes:
  Congrats to all

Contest Winners

1. The Hardest Game to Play

   It's about a guy whose lover has turned him/her down in a cruel way.

   by C.I.M.A Punk 21 lines, 19 comments, on Oct 17 10:14 AM 2007. In Sad, Love, broken heart
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Heart broken by your lies

   You lied to me and broke my heart you made me believe that you were true

   by Jeremy0826 52 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 30 7:46 PM 2006. In Love, Life, Pain, Sad, Thoughts
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3535056, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
4. Cracking

   I was lonely I was never in love

   by nannalishious 49 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 25 11:16 AM 2007

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
5. Seven Times The Colour Of Fire

   "I am so happy to see the unbelonging Child
   Has found the Sun."

   by Justin3 47 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 15 4:58 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Other

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3644024, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
7. these tears

   I see things in you that I saw in me the pain and torture, realize love is misery

   by Bgant84 18 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 25 8:09 PM 2007

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3638378, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
9. Age Old Despair

   Do not leave me lingering in false hope
   And cradle the child that's torn the years apart.

   by Rana 21 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 2 2:19 PM 2007

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
10. The Days of Wine and Roses

    The days of wine and roses
    The winter of my soul

    by BluesMan 49 lines, 74 comments, on Jan 18 3:49 PM 2008. In Dark, Love, Pain, Personal, Addiction [remove]
11. Sick love

    I watched
    the hurt

    by bigsister1 28 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 4 6:14 PM 2007

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
12. standing over the crib side

    Rocking my baby down to sleep,
    Singing a lullaby star light,

    by Pureisolation 57 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 27 5:39 AM 2007

    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
13. Drowning

    Just one brief moment
    To live a lifetime

    by Purplesuze 24 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 31 7:11 AM 2007. In Angst, Life, Sadness, Depression, Longing, Lost love, Emo, Loss, Depressed

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [44]

• Love Me!

  i love you, for crying out loud,

  by forever-alone 33 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 19 2:27 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Personal, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• she cried

  A life without love,
  fills her days with sorrow.

  by brokenangel13 18 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 8 1:31 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Just another ghost

  I am the ghost in the life of the one I wrote this poem for...my...4th poem ever. See, I do remember! And I wrote it during history class.

  by masky 19 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 28 3:33 PM 2007. In Weird, Spiritual, Thoughts, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Without You My Love (My Heart Will Decay)

  Late nights and depressng songs = a lady pouring out words she doesnt undertand

  by Lady Nightshade 43 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 22 6:34 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Heartbreak

  I don't see why I even wished,
  I don't see why I cared,

  by Sticks-And-Stones 14 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 21 6:31 PM 2007

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• Burning Love

  You broke my heart in two, so I stitched it back together.

  by DarkAngel2991 6 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 29 6:51 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Personal, Pain, Life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Diamond

  I was like a diamond / beautiful and bright, / Full of fire and brilliance / and pleasing to your sight, / You showed me off to everyone /

  by jesseramsey 20 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 28 6:36 PM 2007. In Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• There can be none

  Glistening spines and charred interpretations
  Eyes glaze over then well up in the night

  by dairycheezecow 17 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 25 6:31 PM 2007. In Pain, Angst, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Don't Be Mine

  You can call me a stoner or even an alcoholic,
  But you can't look at your own addictions, it seems a bit ironic.

  by BigE 18 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 1 8:57 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• one day

  one day your opinion changes in one day you lose your mind

  by Brandoninloveandlies 14 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 26 12:48 AM 2007. In Pain, break up

  • Commented on by judge.
• Goodbye Kisses

  Do you remember before when we could smile,
  wiping away the teardrops of sadness?

  by Yours-To-Have 30 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 23 4:17 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Depression, Love, Goodbyes

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I Know, Now You Don’t Like Me

  I know, now you don’t like me It’s hard for you to speak out the truth & tell me directly

  by Shuberth 33 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 26 8:19 AM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Life, Personal, Pain, Love, Other, Break-up

  • Commented on by judge.
• Escaping Your Decaying Eyes

  Leaving behind the past
  Sealed in your decaying eyes

  by tala18 133 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 2:35 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Story ...

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• Haunted sanity

  I lay upon my bed Tired and week

  by Wingsy 45 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 15 6:16 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Hope, Sad, Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• So Different To Yesterday

  Tears rolling for I know what's in store,
  A heart pounding so different to yesterday

  by Girl With Guitar 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 5 9:13 PM 2007

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• [ as i sit here with my hands over these ]

  as i sit here with my hands over these eyes of mine the ones filled with the tears

  by Purple-Meow 16 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 6 10:38 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Tear Me to Pieces

  by Luv n fate09 23 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 12:34 PM 2007. In sad, thoughts, personal

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• Twenty two and nine months.

  Twenty two and nine months
  A gulping tyrant wave

  by twentysecond 101 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 5 4:41 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love, Personal, Sad

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• Disaster Dream

  Disaster Dream, Catching me.

  by no-way-ap 7 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 21 4:22 PM 2007. In dream, bf boyfriend, realtionship

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• I know

  by SchoicesKmadeG 27 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 12:10 AM 2006. In Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• My Sunshine - Oct 10th 07

  Your wonderful smile and the bow of your head,
  I wish i could fix us with a needle and thread.

  by MelodicMagpie 47 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 8 9:12 AM 2007. In Love, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Heartache.

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• The Other Hand

  building fragile bridges to tomorrow
  to my relief and endless sorrow
  

  by jervoodoo 29 lines, on Dec 8 1:57 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Pain, Life

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• No Cinderella Story

  The sound of shattering glass
  Wakes me

  by Shadows and Fables 37 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 19 4:53 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Black Bird

  by Death by Murder 127 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 4 9:27 PM 2007. In Other, Sad, Love

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• The Clock Which Runs In Reverse

  My eyes drift to the window
  So lonely it seems

  by Sara the Stray 35 lines, on Nov 4 12:28 PM 2007. In life, loss, love, drugs, Personal

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• Beautifully Broken

  And when I break
  You won't care

  by JulietteArielle 55 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 21 8:53 PM 2007. In Angst, Love, Pain, Sad

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• Crash

  The smile you show Is so contagious

  by ThatONEweirdChick 27 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 19 3:43 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Longing, Sadness, My own style

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• This life

  If only i had a family If only i had more friends

  by XXnathanxx20 19 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 7 5:20 PM 2007

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• To I

  What do I write
  To a tormented soul

  by rosecourts 53 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 7 2:34 AM 2007. In Personal, Inner Stuggle

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• forever-alone
  November 25, 2007
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  what do you think, please let me knows

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