Almost... anything. I'm all out of inspiration, been that way for a while. I would prefer something non-religion, NOTthat I am against religion just do not want it in this contest. So many people confuse inspiration with religion, and that is not what inspires me. I want pain, anger, secrets. Not something you just want to jump up and sing along to. I want great. Mediocre will not fly in this contest! It has to move me for it to win so hop to!
No major rules. Just try to stay away from religion! Good luck to all! And I will be reading all entries. PRE-WRITES ARE ALLOWED! Only one pre-write per person anything else is game!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 12, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: Well I want to Thank everyone for thier entries. Sorry it took so long to judge this contest, but we started out with 105 entries. I read and commented on every single one, and hopefully helped some with my comments. I am very pleased with the way this contest turned out. Thanks again to everyone.
Contest Winners
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This nightmare is becoming even more hellish
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Go ahead and let your dick lead you over the edge of a cliff- we both know you'd follow it anywhere.by The CheshireKat 59 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 10:38 PM 2007. In Anger, Assholes
Bronze trophy winner
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My melancholy demeanor, is merely a masquerade of my malevolent tears,
The cries of a culling that came to quick, calling out to cold coveby NueteredBuddah 16 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 20 12:24 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Personal, Sad, Tragedy, Evil, Unholy, Devil, Masquerade
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My safe place is mostly colored in pearl white.
The cleanliness of the basin gives it an appealing little shine.by malevolent 43 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 5 11:56 AM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Emo, My life, Depressed, Self, Suicide, Thoughts
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by jamiedoring 95 lines, 66 comments, on Oct 27 10:43 PM 2007. In betrayal, revenge, adult, infidelity, divorce, personal, anger
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Watching my funeral, / As if I am awake, / Looking at all the sad faces, / That are in the crowd. / Some I know, / Some I don't care to see, / But glad they showed. / I hear my mom's voice, / Saying she was to• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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"For everyby twistedstranger 20 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 27 12:14 AM 2007
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Silver trophy winner
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"As the silence fades away I gather strength for another dayby blutig 43 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 13 10:58 PM 2007. In love & exile, pain, hate, l'ame immortelle, another day, evanescence, the only one• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If life was a road, then I've come to the end If not the end, then, at least, the last bend.• Commented on by judge.
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If you want to know just how to fry
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FORGOTTEN AND ALONE I Once Knew A Girl,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You sleep cushioned in silky confines,
blanketed with an innocenceby karmicanomaly 33 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 17 11:30 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Would you have still kissed her
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On ground, can't get up.by leslielovesthomas 8 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 13 4:51 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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in her twilight world
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Hear our words you effeminate fiend, What you accomplished is not as it seems.by Lgny44 23 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 14 3:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Hear our words you effeminate fiend, What you accomplished is not as it seems.• Viewed by judge.
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I wish I could turn back the clock And see what we did wrong• Commented on by judge.
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Have you ever stumbled over words you meant to say longby Madison Mary 29 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 13 6:25 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"Find the giver of life and embrace him
He can be found in the deepest reaches of the well."• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Inside a bubble... that somebody blew...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Drunken, foolish rage / lead us to the courtroom / to learn of your fate. / Eyes and ears absorb / each detail. / "twelve / inch / blade... / numerous / stab / wounds... /by forever dreaming 46 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 26 4:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by rocklover91 84 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 10 7:41 PM 2007. In Suicide, Sad, Erotica, Sadness, Depression, Message, Escape, Depressed, Goodbyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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From the that weird guy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A wasted space
Forgotten faceby ThatONEweirdChick 26 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 10 10:13 AM 2007. In Sadness, Message, Life, Society, Lost in thought, Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I had skin like plastic, and goiters that me look like a cobra,
I was covered in blisters from flying to close to a super nova,by jessebyrons 8 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 23 11:34 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wrote this one during a spell of writers blockby dcpoetmusician 47 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 24 10:10 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your smoke filled hair
Wraps around my eyelashes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So many tears upon the Earth
a mothers cry in need of helpby Angelo di Luce 27 lines, 18 comments, on Nov 8 2:59 PM 2007
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Cross my heart,
and hope to die.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Cant find inspiration? Your lookin to hard. Its all around you!by Kooler-Den-Ice 148 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 25 12:33 PM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dad you'll always rest in my heart, Even through we're heavens apart,by psychiatrists dream 32 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 26 3:43 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Layers of pudding on rose petals, ice cubes poured over stained glass.• Commented on by judge.
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A High Priestess of power
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i looked down into the coffin of the girl i thought i knewby LetsBeJack-n-Sally 28 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 24 11:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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it's early november and the sun has sunkenby WishMeAway--x 59 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 9 5:35 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The little girl on the chair
slipped the noose around her headby Dazed N Life 69 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 31 11:12 AM 2007. In Abuse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Synthetic-Nightmare 44 lines, 21 comments, on Oct 25 10:09 PM 2007. In pain, weird, sad, dark, industrial, suicide, cutting, blood, depression, life, thoughts, other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You're building up a case against me.
Prosecutor, judge, and jury.by X iMPERFECTiON x 57 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 12 6:20 PM 2007. In Life, Sad, Pain, Personal, Anger, Depression, Family• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I’m sorry that I’m broken,
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"Come, Icarus," my father said
And fastened on the wings he'd crafted.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Never try, never fail, never cry, never feel
Always thinking but never doing, always wishing but never perusingby Voximation 30 lines, 45 comments, on Nov 7 12:32 PM 2007. In thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Rain pours down as the lovers lay upon the dark cold ground. Hands joined quiet rest. Neither one makes a sound.by consumedbythenight 9 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 2 11:29 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I will enter tomorrow, right now I'm overwhelmed with homework.
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I hope you enjoy this poem. First one I ever wrote
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I hope this will inspire you to write.
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