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The real World.......prewrites allowed so ENTER

This picture is of my dad been sent to australia whe he was 9 to have a better life they said ......he was abused by the brothers of this christian school......this is a real world




I would like real stories on heartbreak PLEASE NOT LOVE SAPPY CRAP....

eg; your drug habit you kicked
you lost a child or friend who was your life
you got out of a abusive relationship

things like that please

also it would be nice to read at least 1 other poets
work. u dont have to but it would be nice....

1st 300
2nd and 3rd TBA

rules; No writing like tHiS Please
No bashing other poets
No emo stuff please


Ok thankyou

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 24, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    great contest well done to all it was very hard to judge and i will be running another one soon for the ones who didnt win trophy s......

Contest Winners

  1. Too Late Daddy
    You said you would always protect me,
    Keep me safe from harm,
    by aligurl 88 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 10 5:47 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. I Hate It
    I hate everything about you
    by DarkestAngel68 45 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 19 11:40 AM 2007. In Hate, Anger, Pain, Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. The Parasite City
    Take me of the parasite city
    Where glass pipes gleam
    by light insight 68 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 8 10:42 AM 2006. In Sad, Lyrics, Society
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Loss of a Family
    Now a lay me down to sleep, I pray the Lord my soul to keep
    Oh, God, when I awake, take me to my father,
    by Hatshepsout 38 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 23 7:16 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. True heartbreak
    True heartbreak, is something I must face everyday.
    A disease so unrelenting, stealing moments of my life away.
    by parntsoftwins 23 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 11 4:32 PM 2007. In Contest, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, My life, Sadness, Depression, Depressed [remove]
  6. Full of Lies
    Some say I’m a broken soul,
    Some say I am a sweetie.
    by takemypainaway 44 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 5 5:58 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts, Weird, Other, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Stories You Wish Weren't True
    you ignore a world of pain and broken innocence
    to retain your blissful ignorance
    by HisFavoriteMistake 39 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 11 5:18 PM 2007. In angst, life, sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3635118, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  9. Drugs
    Four years ago we were normal pot smoking teens.
    Now we are addicted intoxication fiends.
    by Drinking Mercury 37 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 18 3:23 AM 2007. In drugs personal sad expirience
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Left Behind
    She huddles in the shadows, fumbling with a packet of cigarettes
    by travis34dietC 21 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 23 8:45 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. My Own Way
    Watch my shady footsteps fade away / Into the bleak world this day / 'Cause you can't tell me who to be / I live my own life my own way / You know you have no right to say / That I'm your slave, not really me /
    by Felissa 12 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 7:05 PM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Contest, Angst, Escape
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • takemypainaway
    November 12, 2007
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    If you deside to allow PW please let me know!