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Inspiration Windows...Two

Inspiration Windows...Two. I won a PIF contest hosted by Laura Lamarca, thank you Laura,

http://allpoetry.com/poem/3580722

I am pleased to host this contest and I simply ask the Gold Award Winner to consider hosting a similar contest. The theme of this contest is the poem “A Clear Midnight” by Walt Whitman, one of the great American [ U.S. ] poets. The poem is considered a model of brevity, using but a few words to say some important things.

Please let the Whitman poem inspire you to write, no limit on length, and no limit on entries, I will add more prizes if the contest grows larger than fifteen entries. The contest will close in five days.

Judging: will reward free verse styles and devices - imagery, metaphor, alliteration, assonance, consonance, use of lines and stanzas, internal rhyme, flow, and brevity[using few words, to do the job]. MOST the poem is the message, looking for the poet with something to say.

Free verse preferred
Five prizes [ more if contest grows beyond 15 entries]
Closes in five days at the end of November 14, 2007.


A Clear Midnight

THIS is thy hour O Soul, thy free flight into the wordless,
Away from books, away from art, the day erased, the lesson done,
Thee fully forth emerging, silent, gazing, pondering the themes thou
lovest best.
Night, sleep, death and the stars.

By Walt Whitman


Please let this poem inspire you to write

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 15, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    The contest Inspiration Windows …Two is over; my thanks to the poets who embraced the moment of Whitman and wrote so very well.


    My selections for Awards are as follows:

    A Hungry Soul- Gold Award Winner
    So true to the ideals of Whitman, the poet has a role of consequence. Excellent.

    Scattered Petals- Silver Award Winner
    A journey is made of moments of touching and meanings that seem to make our lives.
    Very spiritual and so very well done.

    Last Line - Bronze Award Winner
    a concise and excellent interpretation, a lingering message; very well done.

    Across My Echoed Wails of Canyon - Emerald Award Winner
    Might easily been silver or bronze, an excellent use of imagery and wonderful insights into the Uncle….

    Look into the eyes of my Soul - Emerald Award Winner
    a gentle telling of Whitman ideals here well done.

    Flight to the Wordless World - Emerald Award Winner
    a heartfelt poem, wonderful imagery, deeper feelings and soul connections, very expressive writing.

    My thanks to all who entered, and until the next time[ might be a while] please be safe and well…PK

Contest Winners

  1. When last you exhale
    Will your poetry be
    by Mallig 35 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 14 6:45 PM 2007. In Life, Poetry
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. ~
    by poet2angels 28 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 10 10:23 AM 2007. In life, love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. I will never dot the last lines,
    and journal till the pen drops;
    by LadyLavender 12 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 9 6:39 PM 2007. In life, love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Such an uncle,
    to bare my soul,
    by kaibab 81 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 9 5:31 PM 2007
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. " I did not refrain from my pen and its' ink recording my thoughts . They will be for you and history to reflect upon"
    by Rose Angel 10 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 9 7:38 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Nature, Thoughts, Spiritual. Reward
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [7]

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  • by Shenton 6 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 10 5:02 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • The Dork Knight
    November 9, 2007
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    I shall return to this one later. I would like to enter this one. I like it.

  • Ruby34
    November 15, 2007
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    Thank you for the wonderful inspiration and the honorable mention
    Amarige

  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 15, 2007
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    Thank you for the emerald award dear Peteskid, and your most encouraging comments...You do warm my heart with optimism...and hope for my poetry.....

  • poet2angels silver member
    November 15, 2007
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    TY for another inspiring contest as always...
    COngrats to al and ty for recognizing my poem for silver