Hey, welcome to my 1st contest
SO FOR MY 1ST CONTEST I WOULD LIKE TO FIND AN AP FAMILY;I AM NEW TO THE CONCEPT OF WHAT EXACTLY A AP FAMILY IS AND DOES; JUST SO YOU KNOW, THIS IS SOMETHING I HAVE BEEN WANTING TO TRY FOR A WHILE!!!
YOU CAN BE ANYTHING YOU WANT
-Brother
-Sister
-Cousin
-Girlfriend
-Aunt
-Uncle
-Mom
-Dad
-Grandparents
-Dog
-Cat
-----Whatever you would like to be.
ALL I ASK IS THAT YOU TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT TO BE IN YOUR AUTHOR'S COMMENT BOX, OR MESSAGE ME WHATEVER ONE YOU WANT!!!
A LITTLE ABOUT ME--
I am 18 years old, 6"1, dirty Blond hair. I am currently going to school for Culinary Arts, so I can cook(I can even clean and sew a little lol). I love Music; it is a big part of my life along with sports. I am shy yet outgoing and I LOVE being outside AND I LOVE RAIN AND EYES (something you can write about). Not sure what to really write. I don't have a picture at the moment but below is my Myspace page with pic's and more info about me.
http://www.myspace.com/OpiumForLlamas
-----NOW FOR THE OPTIONS----
1- Write about what you want to be, or convince me why you should be whatever you pick.
2-- If you choose Girlfriend;make me pick you, make me fall for you, something in that area. if you choose this please put you AP name so I can read your stuff and find out about you. And if you dont mind...tell me a bit about yourself kk if you dont' mind of course!!
3--- Titles; pick one and go for it.
=Lost in your eyes
=Unforgiven look
=Mistaken
=Emotionless
=Empty Love
=Hidden passion
=Raining Tears
4---- I love EYES write about them whether it be happy, sad, pain whatever as long as it is about eyes!
5----- Picture Inspired. Send me a message and i will give you a link. Just make sure you put the picture in with your poem, If you can't leave the link... thanks!!
NOW FOR THE RULES
1- DoN't wRIte LiKe thIS please
2- You can swear just not every other word thanks!
3- Try to comment on at least 1 piece(It wont kill you)
4- I prefer new poems, But pre-writes wont hurt you!
5- Place your option #, and what you would like to be in the author comment box.Please and thanks!!
I WILL COMMENT ON ALL OF THE PIECES AS SOON AS I AM ABLE TO.
IF YOU HAVE AND QUESTIONS;ABOUT THE CONTEST OR ME FEEL FREE TO ASK.
Thanks and enjoy!!!!!
SO FOR MY 1ST CONTEST I WOULD LIKE TO FIND AN AP FAMILY;I AM NEW TO THE CONCEPT OF WHAT EXACTLY A AP FAMILY IS AND DOES; JUST SO YOU KNOW, THIS IS SOMETHING I HAVE BEEN WANTING TO TRY FOR A WHILE!!!
YOU CAN BE ANYTHING YOU WANT
-Brother
-Sister
-Cousin
-Girlfriend
-Aunt
-Uncle
-Mom
-Dad
-Grandparents
-Dog
-Cat
-----Whatever you would like to be.
ALL I ASK IS THAT YOU TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT TO BE IN YOUR AUTHOR'S COMMENT BOX, OR MESSAGE ME WHATEVER ONE YOU WANT!!!
A LITTLE ABOUT ME--
I am 18 years old, 6"1, dirty Blond hair. I am currently going to school for Culinary Arts, so I can cook(I can even clean and sew a little lol). I love Music; it is a big part of my life along with sports. I am shy yet outgoing and I LOVE being outside AND I LOVE RAIN AND EYES (something you can write about). Not sure what to really write. I don't have a picture at the moment but below is my Myspace page with pic's and more info about me.
http://www.myspace.com/OpiumForLlamas
-----NOW FOR THE OPTIONS----
1- Write about what you want to be, or convince me why you should be whatever you pick.
2-- If you choose Girlfriend;make me pick you, make me fall for you, something in that area. if you choose this please put you AP name so I can read your stuff and find out about you. And if you dont mind...tell me a bit about yourself kk if you dont' mind of course!!
3--- Titles; pick one and go for it.
=Lost in your eyes
=Unforgiven look
=Mistaken
=Emotionless
=Empty Love
=Hidden passion
=Raining Tears
4---- I love EYES write about them whether it be happy, sad, pain whatever as long as it is about eyes!
5----- Picture Inspired. Send me a message and i will give you a link. Just make sure you put the picture in with your poem, If you can't leave the link... thanks!!
NOW FOR THE RULES
1- DoN't wRIte LiKe thIS please
2- You can swear just not every other word thanks!
3- Try to comment on at least 1 piece(It wont kill you)
4- I prefer new poems, But pre-writes wont hurt you!
5- Place your option #, and what you would like to be in the author comment box.Please and thanks!!
I WILL COMMENT ON ALL OF THE PIECES AS SOON AS I AM ABLE TO.
IF YOU HAVE AND QUESTIONS;ABOUT THE CONTEST OR ME FEEL FREE TO ASK.
Thanks and enjoy!!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 18, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 65, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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I returned from the world after seeing what's what
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Hello, Brother, how are you?
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As fellow poets, there is a sense of family more
than meets the eye on any given page.• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
He looks into my eyes and touches my face
Wraps me in his arms completely embraced• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [26]
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All we see in sight.
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As the tears fall from my eyes
I sit there and look at the skyby Samantha-. 45 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 5 3:11 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A deep sigh brushes your cheek
and from your slumber you wakeby danceswsquirrels 29 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 7 8:51 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
When I look in the mirror,
The reflection is not my own,by katie-jo 25 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 12 10:10 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Hidden away, Where no one can seeby musik-freek 41 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 25 1:35 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Look at her-
Her big blue eyes,by Dancing the Rumba 29 lines, on Nov 25 8:05 PM 2007. In Little Sister, contest, AP Family, application, Fun, sweet, to many categories• Viewed by judge. -
Hey there friend Why don't you sit a spellby dcpoetmusician 22 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 26 8:02 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Stop the corny pick up lines
And give me someone to go withby Daizy21 24 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 17 1:56 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
These eyes see all everything thats going onby Purple-Meow 21 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 28 7:04 PM 2007. In Sad• Viewed by judge.
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by Cry Little Sister 18 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 29 12:40 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A bond, really, is what it is
A life long bondby Tom The Invader 7 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 4:51 PM 2007. In Family• Viewed by judge. -
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In the corner I sit in an earthenware pot,
twisting to the sun with all I have got,by jessebyrons 22 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 10 11:16 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If you look into my eyes...
by BeautifullyBroken42 35 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 29 12:43 PM 2007. In My own style, Lost in thought, My life, Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I watched as the girl was thrown to the floor I could do nothing, so I just watched her painby iheartjohnlennon 28 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 15 6:20 PM 2007. In Friendship, Abuse, Society, Sad• Viewed by judge.
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Lost when I kiss your lips When I pull you nearby PureRomance 18 lines, on Nov 9 6:27 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i wish to be a cat--- SEE?! MEOW MEOW MEOW MEOW!!
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The funny thing is, I had a contest a lot like this...it was my first contest, too. If you want to see it, here's the link:
www.allpoetry.com/contest/2369428
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I cant seem to come up with anything at this moment but i want to wish you the best of luck and have fun with your first contest!
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thanks, appreciated
david
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