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Goodbye, My Love.

 

 

Guess what?! You're in another of my contests!!

Haha, I feel sad for you guys...

But c'mon, it can't be that bad now, can it?

Well, this time it's special.

And this time, we've also got

 

*drum rolls*

 

Trista!

Yes, she will be helping me judge! Splendid, no?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well now, I will be giving you some very beautiful options [don't you dare tell me they aren't beautiful]

But this is what I want:

 

  • Heartbreak - nothing cliché
  • Leaving but still loving
  • Leaving but completely hating
  • Regrets/mistakes
  • Goodbye to your love [explain what you feel]
  • Anything that is dark/sad/morbid

 

Basically, I want emotion. NO he-broke-my-heart-shall-I-die poems. If you do, I might as well tell you to go die.

Do you want the options now? Or shall I ramble more and more?

I guess you're telling me to ramble. Okies.

 

You see, personally, I've closed a chapter of my life. No I do not regret it. And I refuse to leave it all behind.

I have a poem called - A Chapter's end - [ http://allpoetry.com/poem/3534358 ]

Which will explain more.

 

Shall I ramble more? okok, The options.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Pictures

 

 

 

If you choose one of these, please make it known which picture you chose. Use the pictures however you wish under whatever topic. SHOULD BE RELEVANT.

 

 

 

 

Quotes 

 

  • People say hate is a strong word, but so is love.
    And people throw it around like it's nothing.

 

  •  "Someday you'll see what a fiction this world is, but the way I love you is a fact.
    You'll want to know why, and that is why,
    when the trial begins I'll be smiling at you from the witness stand,
    why I'll smile when they announce the verdict,
    and why I'll still be smiling, in the darkness under my hood,
    when they hang me for everything I've ever done."

 

  • "In deep sadness there is no place for sentimentality. "
     -William Burroughs

 

  • To lose your
    love, is to have a
    thousand lives. & have
    them die, all at once

 

  • As it happens sometimes a moment settled and hovered
    and remained for much more than a moment. 
    And sound stopped and movement stopped for much, much more than a moment.
    And then the moment was gone.

 

  • Letting go isnt a one time thing, its something you do everyday, over and over again.

 

  • You're just not worth the breath to waste
    You're just not worth the time
    You're barely worth the time it takes
    To scribble out these lines

 

  • Face it.
    Juliet was a whore.
    And Romeo was just desperate.
    But they still made the best love story ever.

 

  • You wanna know what the truth is?
    I still love you, and I probably will love you for a very long time
    but I can't just be your buddy
    because as much as I enjoy the concept of being "just friends",
    in reality its a bizarre form of torture and i'm not willing to participate in it
    so right now what i want to do is just move on and get over you,
    and the only way for me to do that is to not be around you anymore

 

  • It's not up to me anymore
    if you want me in your life ..
    you'll find a way to put me there

 

 

For this option, you're also to tell me which quote you used. Let it inspire you, use it in the poem, alter it - whatever,

 

 

 

Titles

 

  1. Devoid of Tears
  2. Bouquet of Thorns
  3. A Fairytale's End
  4. I Still Don't Love You
  5. Goodbye, My Love
  6. Forever - a joke
  7. Emotional Disaster
  8. Three-Worded Lie
  9. Heartless Eternity
  10. Fracas of Memories

 

 

For this option, you're to use the title as the title of your poem! obvious, I know, but you'd be surprised.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now the very very very well liked rules. You'll love them, we know.

 

  1. For the sake of my sanity, please do not give me a love poem. It has to relate with saying goodbye - and unless your poem is wickedly evil and so goddamn happy about leaving - you're not to give me a happy love poem. Understand?
  2. You have to let me know what you chose. I know my options - but they aren't obvious. If you fail to let me know. I will remind you once, and only once. not ninety-ten times. I am not an arsehead.
  3. You may rhyme or so free verse, or whatever you want. Just make it good. Don't want to? NO problem at all. You just won't win.
  4. I should add this too - "Incomprehensibility does not equal depth of thought"
  5. Bash any poet as much as your little brain wills. I'll be more than content to report you to the mods.
  6. none of this - its called capitalization.
  7. NoNe oF tHiS mAdNeSs eItHeR
  8. DEFINATELY NONE OF THIS
  9. And even if you're a madman, you're not welcome to do this
  10. One write per person - it's only fair.
  11. No whining, bitching or complaining of any sort. Use some maturity that you may claim you have and prove it by acting sensibly. And if you wish not to - I'm an awefully easy person. I just block you.

 

Points will raise. [if it's worth it]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This background was made by me. You may use it as long as you give me credit.

And trust me, I'll track you down.

 

 

Are you still looking at what I've written?

Go and choose and write!

The text is not going to magically move around forming animation to please you.

 

All the best to everyone ♥

 

 

 


I don't know what catches my attention until it does - Never Fall in Love

 

 

 

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 14, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    First of all, I'm sorry about how long this contest has been running. It's been increased in date and deleayed in judging as well - so thank you everybody for having the patience.

    The finalists right there, within those I could give some extra top three trophies and that was the hardest part to judge. We chose our winners on a voting system and both of us had some different views - so it was the fairest way out.

    I'm also surprised at the comments that have been returned. Maybe I managed to keep the whiners away this time as everyone accepted whatever criticism was given and that itself is something to be proud of.
    Congratulations to everybody and thank you so much for entering!
    Never ♥

    Final Notes:
    I just want to thank each and every one of you for your entry in the contest, and a special thanks to Never for allowing me to be a part of this.

    Congrats to our winners - you definitely earned those trophies!
    Best wishes to all,
    ~J.

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3559832, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3561130, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. The dark clouds did not surprise me turmoil existed since the start,
    by Ethereal One 15 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 18 9:33 PM 2007. In Love, Thoughts, Life, Other
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. It was within a few seconds
    that my brain developed
    by alexandrathegreat 73 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 1 11:26 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Thoughts, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by Darkened Seraph 22 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 1 2:31 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by forgottenagainNagain 79 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 1 12:59 AM 2007. In Personal, Pain, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. My heart scattered, across the water, Shifting with the heavy flow,
    by ForNever.x 21 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 12 5:35 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Other, Love, Life, Contemporary, Contest, Thoughts, Hope, Humor
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Don't tell me that you love me or
    stare me down with your bedroom eyes.
    by PerVirtuous 34 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 20 4:43 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • PerfectSolitude
    October 30, 2007
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    I absolutely love the pictures. They're just so captivating. Anyway, I like the contest, and I'll see waht I can do. No promises, though. I'll try to give you something though. Good luck with your contest. It is a lovely one indeed.


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    October 30, 2007
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    Well hun give me a few days to think of something and ill enter your contest Have fun juding and hope you enter mine.


  • Bedroom Eyes
    October 30, 2007
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    This is interesting, and I am going to try to come up with something stunning for you. Love the options, and I am bookmarking


  • JustADutchie gold member
    November 1, 2007
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    I'm away for a week, so I have to pass on this one.
    Would be very difficult for me anyway, because I'm an optimistic person en don't write dark/sad or morbid. But good luck anyway.


  • FransB gold member
    November 1, 2007
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    This page just motivates. Shall see what I can do.

  • piccola silver member
    November 1, 2007
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    too many options for me to cope with. I love the pics on your page though and the ones in the contest as well. Hope you get lots of entries and the contest is a great success


  • Darkened Seraph
    November 1, 2007
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    well i know what i will be writing probably tonight dont fully understand rule three does that mean rhyme or your gonna fail?


  • Zerstort
    November 2, 2007
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    Are we able to combine options....because I'm in the midst of someting, but for me to do it I'd have to combine a few so...can I?

    Aden Recreated


  • Death of the Author
    November 4, 2007
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    Bloody hell Chandni, that has to be the longest contest ever!

    Nice pictures and quotes and such. I may enter if I can kick my brain into gear. Not sure how likely that is!


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 8, 2007
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    may we enter more then once?


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 8, 2007
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    oh never mind. I missed that rule. never mind that question sorry, I just didn't catch that.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 16, 2007
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    beautiful background

    Sounds like a great contest! You chose some beautiful pictures too. Good luck with the contest and judging.

    Hopefully I will be able to write something appropriate.

    Ethereal One


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    November 28, 2007
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    I love this contest..!!!
    The photos are incredible..
    Adore this background as well..
    Best wishes to all that enter..
    Peace and many blessings
    ~A~


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 14, 2007
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    Thank you so much for the gold!!! Congrats to ALL & thank you both for hosting!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    December 14, 2007
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    Thank You

    I am honored to have won the Bronze in this contest where there were so many wonderful poems. I appreciate the trophy and the points.

    Congrats to all the winners.



    Ethereal One

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