BE INSPIRED BY ANY OF THESE LYRICS , JUST STATE IN YOUR NOTES WHICH SONG YOU CHOOOSE ! XOOX
Pick apart
The pieces of your heart
And let me peer inside
Let me in
Where only your thoughts have been
Let me occupy your mind
As you do mine
- Gotye , Hearts a mess
I want a lover i dont have to love.
- bright eyes.
I wont mistake you for problems with me
I wont let my moods ruin this youll see
i wont take everything good and move it away
-Tegan and sara, i wont be left
Long nights spent with your most obvious weekness
you start shaking at the thought
you are everything i want cause you are eveything im not
and we lay we lay together just not to close
how close is close enough ?
-Taking back sunday , make damn sure
Maybe im a girl , maybe im a lonley girl whose in the middle of something that she dosnt really understand
Baby wont you help me understand.
-Jem , Maybe im amazed
OR IF YOU DONT FEEL VERY INSPIRED AT THIS POINT RIGHT ANYTHING ON THESE TOPICS
- Body Dismorphic Disorder (like anorexia but just about your image you dont starve yourself.)
- Loving someone , liking someone too
- Suicide in the family
THATS IT SORRRY FOLKS
ENJOY , AND AMAZE . ! or else
Pick apart
The pieces of your heart
And let me peer inside
Let me in
Where only your thoughts have been
Let me occupy your mind
As you do mine
- Gotye , Hearts a mess
I want a lover i dont have to love.
- bright eyes.
I wont mistake you for problems with me
I wont let my moods ruin this youll see
i wont take everything good and move it away
-Tegan and sara, i wont be left
Long nights spent with your most obvious weekness
you start shaking at the thought
you are everything i want cause you are eveything im not
and we lay we lay together just not to close
how close is close enough ?
-Taking back sunday , make damn sure
Maybe im a girl , maybe im a lonley girl whose in the middle of something that she dosnt really understand
Baby wont you help me understand.
-Jem , Maybe im amazed
OR IF YOU DONT FEEL VERY INSPIRED AT THIS POINT RIGHT ANYTHING ON THESE TOPICS
- Body Dismorphic Disorder (like anorexia but just about your image you dont starve yourself.)
- Loving someone , liking someone too
- Suicide in the family
THATS IT SORRRY FOLKS
ENJOY , AND AMAZE . ! or else
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 19, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: sorrry about taking so long to judge i just had to be sure , there were some amazing poems and a few that deserved a place but the winners poem was amazing
thanks you everyone xoox
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3617838, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Long nights spent with the thought of holding me so close• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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BDD: Body Dysmorphic Disorder,
a mind that hates its body.by ExpensiveThinker 46 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 30 12:54 AM 2007. In BDD: Body Dysmorphic Disorder
Bronze trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
Entries [27]
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I wish things were different.I wish it weren't this way.I wish too much.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I love you so much / I wish you didn't live so far away / you make me feel so special• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Fim Fivver 36 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 16 7:48 PM 2007. In Adult, Life, Love, Other, Weird, Personal, Society, Dedication, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i walk around an i can't feel a thing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am all there is to know - I am all that you’ve forgotten I am enigmatic now - you never even knew my nameby TheFalseReality 22 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 22 5:45 PM 2007. In Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I based this partly on fantasy and my own life. I have loved people to the point of killing myself for them, and they always "pushed me awaby King Nothing 40 lines, 21 comments, on Nov 14 9:38 PM 2007. In Lyrics• Viewed by judge.
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I've been strapped into a rollercoaster
of perpetual hate and happiness.by BonaFidePoet 24 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 21 3:33 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Emotional trauma hiding inside
Behind past regressionsby shtrdglassheart 57 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 17 12:39 PM 2007. In anerexia, Abuse, My life, Contest, Depression, Personal., Message• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Awaken to sights of doves
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by unbroken record 19 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 26 8:45 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge.
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And all I wish from you
Is to be understoodby ThatONEweirdChick 18 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 18 5:49 PM 2007. In Contest, Lost in thought, Life, Teenage thinking, My life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I just kept / Talking / Clenching my hands into skin / Please… / I kept my eyes closed / Wished I could shut my ears / Need me… / Through hby Exuses 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 7:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i don't want you to kiss myby GirlAnachronism 28 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 26 9:25 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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