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What makes the heart beat

As the heart beats what is it that brings it most to your atention . Love, fear ,excitment, temper
I want poetry that gives me you noticed your heartbeat give me your story .
nO StICkY CAPS
No swearing
No eratica
make it where anyone can read it
Make it funny or sad
Please join us this is my first contest and its only on for a day but please join in
contest for all but follow the rules
please for those who dont wont be commented on . I am new at this but would love to learn more about it .

Put heartbeat in the beginning of your notes


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 28, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Never Too Old gold
    My Heart Is Beating For You silver
    A Heartbeat ( acrustic shadow ) bronze
    The rest get honorable mention
    They were all truly great

Contest Winners

  1. Never To Old { Gold }
    Perfect moments are only a heart beat away,
    Flutters the wings touched by my inner soul,
    by Reptile Lady 12 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 28 5:57 PM 2007. In Never to old to care, Love, Contest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. My Heart Is Beating For You
    My heart is beating
    Beating for your attention
    by Angelic Princess21 14 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 28 2:12 PM 2007. In Contest, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. A Heartbeat [Acrostic Shadow]
    by Poetic-Theorem 13 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 28 5:30 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Love, Life
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Heart Beat
    What makes my heart beat? It's a girl I chose to love from a distance.
    by SecretAdmirer4U 11 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 28 2:15 PM 2007. In Love, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. my heart beat
    my life makes it hard for me to breathe
    trying to catch my breath
    by passionate-poet 76 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 28 3:46 PM 2007. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Beat Of Life
    Life is full of many special things
    in the beat of your heart is where it sings
    by Roaddog Wolf 21 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 28 4:24 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Spiritual, Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • SecretAdmirer4U
    October 28, 2007
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    I love your contest! Good luck to you as the host and for those who participate!

    SA4U

  • passionate-poet
    October 28, 2007
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    good luck to everyone in this contest

  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 28, 2007
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    Thank you sooooo much for the Bronze
    Brightened my day with many
    Congrads to all the winners and to everyone, all the entries were fantastic.
    KEEP WRITING & HAVE FUN
    Much love,
    Many Blesssings

    David

  • midnight eyes
    October 29, 2007
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    aw man I missed it.
  • SecretAdmirer4U
    October 29, 2007
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    I want to thank everyone for the comments on my poem. Congrats to everyone.

    SA4U
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