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cookies and cream ice cream (for you)

you people are lazy.

pre-writes too

note: image got nothing to do with contest. I just love fall, and made that pic :-P


So, yeah... it's not about ice cream. If that's what you were hoping for... GET OUT NOW!! RUN RUN RUN

I haven’t been on AP in a while now. Sorry, life got in the way….
So WAMMMM!!! contest
Here’s what I want:
Love

I feel in a lovey mood.
So:
-tell me about love far away-make it personal (if not personal to you... make it up. You're a writer for devil's sake. Be Creative!)Love that you have not been able to touch, but maybe only feel. Get it? No? well... try harder
-how easy or how hard it is to forget about someone you love.
-what you would do for them
come on, you get the point. No need for me to say more.

I would rather not read poems like...
OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH,
AND I MISS YOU SO MUCH,
AND I FEEL LIKE BURNING MYSELF WITH MATCHES
UNTIL MY SKIN SCREAMS YOUR NAME
WHICH IS ALSO TATOOED IN BLOOD ALL OVER MY Oh SO FUCKED UP HEART
OH BABY COME TO ME!

by the way, no caps.... and no cursing. I cursed because it's my contest, my points, my rules.

I am honest with my comments, so if you cry easily.... STAY AWAY

The best poem will win!
Now, that "best" is subjective, you would say. But NO! my dear friend. Not in my contest. What is "best" is determined by.... me!

I swear, i'm a sweet person, i am just tired and slightly drained out of life. Tiramisu, anyone?

I wanna read some nice things while i procrastinate on my school work.


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 22, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for entering...
    and thank you all (well... most of you) for accepting the ...rather to critical comments.
    I know, i was oftena little mean and too picky.
    AND AND AND thank you to the ones that actually considered my long long comments and made changes to the poems :-) It means a lot

    So, most likely you will not all agree with my decision, but once again... this is my contest, so my decisions rule :-)

    I originally had 7 favs, so i cut it down to four.

    That's the way I feel

    White Chocolate

    Till you come back

    Dew Drop Falls


    I chose these because maybe i can relate to them. Or just because i like them :-)

    Thank you to all.


    Happy Thanksgiving to whoever celebrates it :-)
    Avoid family arguments, get stuffed, and enjoy the holidays

Contest Winners

  1. That's the way I feel
    That’s the way I feel.
    by Phoenix Renaissance 38 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 23 9:39 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Cold Noses and White Chocolate
    You tasted slightly like uncertainty,
    by Monkei 41 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 15 9:22 PM 2003. In Personal, Love, Hope
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Till you come back
    If I fly and write
    something int he corner of the horizon
    by Kram 16 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 22 8:06 AM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. HM - Dew Drop Falls
    x 2
    by RedwingSpirit 0 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 15 10:17 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • -Tesoro-
    October 23, 2007
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    lol your contests are so entertaining to even just read the description of i love it and i love you


  • sunny day
    November 26, 2007
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    Alba, Thank you for hosting this lovely contest. I thoroughly enjoyed being a part of the competition. My heartiest congratulations to the winners and everyone who participated. Love and God bless all of you, Joyce