you people are lazy.
pre-writes too
note: image got nothing to do with contest. I just love fall, and made that pic :-P
So, yeah... it's not about ice cream. If that's what you were hoping for... GET OUT NOW!! RUN RUN RUN
I haven’t been on AP in a while now. Sorry, life got in the way….
So WAMMMM!!! contest
Here’s what I want:
Love
I feel in a lovey mood.
So:
-tell me about love far away-make it personal (if not personal to you... make it up. You're a writer for devil's sake. Be Creative!)Love that you have not been able to touch, but maybe only feel. Get it? No? well... try harder
-how easy or how hard it is to forget about someone you love.
-what you would do for them
come on, you get the point. No need for me to say more.
I would rather not read poems like...
OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH,
AND I MISS YOU SO MUCH,
AND I FEEL LIKE BURNING MYSELF WITH MATCHES
UNTIL MY SKIN SCREAMS YOUR NAME
WHICH IS ALSO TATOOED IN BLOOD ALL OVER MY Oh SO FUCKED UP HEART
OH BABY COME TO ME!
by the way, no caps.... and no cursing. I cursed because it's my contest, my points, my rules.
I am honest with my comments, so if you cry easily.... STAY AWAY
The best poem will win!
Now, that "best" is subjective, you would say. But NO! my dear friend. Not in my contest. What is "best" is determined by.... me!
I swear, i'm a sweet person, i am just tired and slightly drained out of life. Tiramisu, anyone?
I wanna read some nice things while i procrastinate on my school work.
pre-writes too
note: image got nothing to do with contest. I just love fall, and made that pic :-P
So, yeah... it's not about ice cream. If that's what you were hoping for... GET OUT NOW!! RUN RUN RUN
I haven’t been on AP in a while now. Sorry, life got in the way….
So WAMMMM!!! contest
Here’s what I want:
Love
I feel in a lovey mood.
So:
-tell me about love far away-make it personal (if not personal to you... make it up. You're a writer for devil's sake. Be Creative!)Love that you have not been able to touch, but maybe only feel. Get it? No? well... try harder
-how easy or how hard it is to forget about someone you love.
-what you would do for them
come on, you get the point. No need for me to say more.
I would rather not read poems like...
OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH,
AND I MISS YOU SO MUCH,
AND I FEEL LIKE BURNING MYSELF WITH MATCHES
UNTIL MY SKIN SCREAMS YOUR NAME
WHICH IS ALSO TATOOED IN BLOOD ALL OVER MY Oh SO FUCKED UP HEART
OH BABY COME TO ME!
by the way, no caps.... and no cursing. I cursed because it's my contest, my points, my rules.
I am honest with my comments, so if you cry easily.... STAY AWAY
The best poem will win!
Now, that "best" is subjective, you would say. But NO! my dear friend. Not in my contest. What is "best" is determined by.... me!
I swear, i'm a sweet person, i am just tired and slightly drained out of life. Tiramisu, anyone?
I wanna read some nice things while i procrastinate on my school work.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 22, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering...
and thank you all (well... most of you) for accepting the ...rather to critical comments.
I know, i was oftena little mean and too picky.
AND AND AND thank you to the ones that actually considered my long long comments and made changes to the poems :-) It means a lot
So, most likely you will not all agree with my decision, but once again... this is my contest, so my decisions rule :-)
I originally had 7 favs, so i cut it down to four.
That's the way I feel
White Chocolate
Till you come back
Dew Drop Falls
I chose these because maybe i can relate to them. Or just because i like them :-)
Thank you to all.
Happy Thanksgiving to whoever celebrates it :-)
Avoid family arguments, get stuffed, and enjoy the holidays
Contest Winners
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That’s the way I feel.
by Phoenix Renaissance 38 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 23 9:39 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Love
Gold trophy winner
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"golden words flew past you as i sang my fruitless song."• Commented on by judge.
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I tell myself that I've only seen you once And you for me likewiseby beenjammin 27 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 25 1:30 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Robert Frost told me he took the road less traveled.
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by Hashnah Sheviatte 33 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 11 5:40 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love conquers all...• Commented on by judge.
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Me letting go;I never could.
But you loving me;I knew you never would.
And me expecting you to; Is something I never should.by this is how i deal 19 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 14 11:13 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Weary I walk this wintry night,
snowflakes falling so pure and white.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i'm standing alone wondering how it could have happened,
trying hard not to cry, wanting only to hide,by Vienna110 16 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 1 12:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Swimming in the memories of a yesterday, That can never return.by joelegy 26 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 14 6:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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A poem I wrote for a close friend• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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lol your contests are so entertaining to even just read the description of
i love it and i love you
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Alba, Thank you for hosting this lovely contest. I thoroughly enjoyed being a part of the competition. My heartiest congratulations to the winners and everyone who participated. Love and God bless all of you, Joyce


