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My First Contest Judged

DO NOT USE THIS PICTURE FOR YOUR POEMS IT IS MINE FROM MY COUSIN HE IS IN THIS PICTURE ITS COPYRIGHTED
This is My first Contest...
Hope You enjoy

PLEASE FOLLOW RULES:
1. NO PROFANITY: I think it ruins a poem
SUCH AS: Fuck, Shit, Piss
YOU CAN USE: Hell, or Damn things in a funny nature
2. NO EROTICA: Unless used in a beautiful way I'll give You an example.
3. PUT OPTION # in Your Author Notes
4. NO TROPHY WINNER'S ON PREWRITE POEM'S PLEASE (HM's Allowed though)
5. 60 LINE MAXIMUM
6. COMMENT ON OTHER'S: Please comment on other's poems in this contest, to help me decide which is best. Just comment as you normally would. Besides you get point's for commenting. And those people may read yours.
7. ENTRIES: One per person please
Anyway Have Fun Here Are Your Options

I will only comment on your poems no claps till Contest is over.


Option #1 Something Erotic
Here's an example of the way I want You to write it.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3322138
What I want is no use of private part's. I want You to Describe the emotion's in making Love.

Option #2 I want to write about falling in love with a stranger you've never met yet. Tell me how it feels to long for a person, to want to met the person.

Option #3 Write about the War and What You Think, Write a Poem about A loved one that has died, or is in the War. My Cousin Joey is in the picture above, He's in the back but not with the gun the one holding the hat.

Option #4 Write a descriptive Poem about nature. Pretend You are in Nature. Describe yourself as something in Nature and how You perceive Your Surroundings

Option #5 Write a memory of Your Grandparent's. Go back in time pretend Your a kid again.

Option #6 Write a poem about your children, How they are special to you.

Option #7 Make Me Laugh Tell me your funniest story. Must be written well though

Option # 8 Write about a romantic breakfast in bed served by either man or women

Option #9 Write about how you think it feels to be in Love at 80. Talk About the years spent together. How you think they made it through all the rough times and good time's. Describe the emotion's You think were felt between the Two.

Option # 10 Pretend your 100 and describe your life through all it's twist and turns

P.S. I'm not an ASS please don't take my comment's the wrong way sometimes its hard for me to get a message across, without sounding like one. I am a very Shy Person and This site and My poem's are to help me overcome my problems, As well as for Learning and Fun. I was abused severally as a child
I only have been Writing since 9/17/07

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 24, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    I got tired of waiting for more entries So I told my Husband DrunkenRam To go Ahead In Judge These are his Picks in the order of the way he Likes
    1st place goes to Apart
    2nd place goes to Dreaming
    3rd place goes to Foolish Dreamer;'s

Contest Winners

  1. Although I cannot see you, / I know that you are there, / But being so very far apart, / Is more than I can bear, / I know I've never seen
    by Ilma 28 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 4 5:28 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. by Me a poet-maybe 27 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 29 10:38 AM 2007. In Adult, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. I filled in all the blanks with notions of my choice
    by poetsruletheworld 24 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 22 9:05 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2072718, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Mysterious hard-candy life
    Unwrapped by shaking hands with child-like exuberance
    by SquarestCheerio 21 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 10:18 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by Barry Hodges 29 lines, 22 comments, on Jul 14 6:45 AM 2007. In Adult, Abuse, Humour, Urlaub in Deutschland
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • CherryOnTop
    October 22, 2007
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    First contest

    Sounds like everything has been covered.


  • BluesMan gold member
    October 22, 2007
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    I took option #6 I recently got custody of my five year old daughter This poem was inspired by a day in the park with her and my parents and the emotions I precieved from them and myself!


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    October 24, 2007
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    nice contest you have going! good luck with it

    GBY
    Silverbutterfly