I want poems about Heartbreak
any type of heart ache
and my rules are like the usuals so
No FuCkEd TyPeInG
and thats it so have fun
any type of heart ache
and my rules are like the usuals so
No FuCkEd TyPeInG
and thats it so have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 8, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: thanks for entering my contest i had so much fun runing it i hope you had fun entering it i loved all of your entries and i hope you enter my futor contests thank you all
lil
Contest Winners
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A little girls heartbreak, alone and scared
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January brings back porcelain memories, / Just as the blizzard surges out from behind winter’s sky / He left a glacial dagger in my humbledby perfectsunset 77 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 27 4:28 AM 2007. In Pain, Heartbreak, Personal
Silver trophy winner
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my heart walked out the door
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You kept me warm when I was cold You held me tight and I was soldby Tsukikage 31 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 17 12:48 AM 2007. In sad, love, heartbreak
Honorable mention
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by elemental angel 99 lines, 39 comments, on Sep 27 11:29 AM 2005. In Humor, Dark, Hope Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [56]
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When I look into your eyes What I see is picture perfectby thecrow94 14 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 17 12:23 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Why do they call it heartbreak? It still beats.by samara11278 23 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 28 1:30 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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love the four letter word / that people hear everyday / its something they're use to / hearing from love ones and boyfriends / and girlfrie• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I just wanna let go,
I didnt know it would be this hard,by xTomorrowx 38 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 1 5:46 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I love you so much it hurts.Like a cemetary without the dead i am not whole.Complete me,don't just watch me die.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I can't seem to see all the colors anymore.
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Whenever I see your happy face, / A tsunami occurs in my heart. / But it dies down in my heart, / Cause there is someone behind your happin• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I haven't heard that voice for such along time. / But when I heard it to day it started hunting my mind. / I miss you so much I long for yo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You told me you cared and loved me
You told me I a precious treasureby Beauty Of Silence 13 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 16 6:18 AM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I break her heart every day As I wander every wayby AnthonyLavin 13 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 17 7:01 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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My passion for you is real My love for you can't be sealedby iloveEdwardCullen17 14 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 11 7:00 AM 2007. In Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Personal, Depressed, Goodbyes, Teenage thinking, Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My weakness, is for worshiping the delicate music of gorgeous goddesses of summer beauty, crying for I am powerless. / When I sleep, they place me in a dream of bitter lust. / In this voided symphony of love, my screby SchweinJunge57 4 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 29 5:28 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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option 3by dreamweaver08 22 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 18 1:56 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I went out with my boyfriend one weekend night
for some dancing and grand karaoke delight.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Into the darkness where I reside.
The sorrows of life, they come alive.by Legasyofblood 7 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 5:39 AM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
About a girl's hurt when she sees her childhood friend in hands with another girl.by Silenced Tears 112 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 5:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Can't be bothered, can't get hot, Must control the anger I've got.by Sundance 64 lines, on Oct 17 10:08 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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An empty core for an empty shell The thoughts that flow by cause whistling soundsby danceswsquirrels 27 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 17 11:55 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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How a girl broke a guy's heart and she still loved him.
by rainy-day-suicide 28 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 17 5:44 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
If your friends become monsters, it's their problem.
When you miss their company, it's your problem.by AutumnsFlame 33 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 14 6:31 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see you, your eyes so full of hatred, I feel my heart crumble as you touch my arm,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She waited... for hours
Days,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
~Saffron yellow rose, friendship~
Beginning with ringing laughterby tigress3737 19 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 31 10:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Pulling off fingernails is a type of torture• Commented on by judge.
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The dagger in which he held,
Pierced the soft flesh of my chest,by SexySaphire 44 lines, 42 comments, on Jul 21 1:24 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Are you ashamed of me?
What did I do?
Am I being punished?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Disappointed, that's what I am.
You make me so many promisesby leslielovesthomas 46 lines, 26 comments, on Oct 17 4:25 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
there is a few words that i really wanna hear,
i see and feel fear,by wings from god 28 16 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 11 8:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A teardrop falling, A woman sobbing, The child dying.
Teardrops fall in to the river of pain.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I stare across the room,
I wonder why it had to endby wonderbandalice 47 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 12 3:59 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She kissed him slowly
With so much passionby teenagefailure 21 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 27 1:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This pain in my chest, this lump in my throat;
I cannot hold a thing for my hands are shaking,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If I told you that I loved you Would you say you loved me too?by SatanicTemptation09 62 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 29 2:55 PM 2007. In Lost in thought, Forbidden Love• Commented on by judge.
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All I do is feel.
My world is drugged and surreal.
You don't know how your words slice me.by JustSimplyLissa 44 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 30 11:21 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hmmm...GaY TyPeInG. I'm not sure if I should be pissed off about this or not. I am gay and I don't appreciate the use of the word in such a negative way.
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Thank you so much for the silver trophy & thanks for holding such a great contest! Congrats to all the winners
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Thank you so much for the Hm and the points! Wonderful Diwali gift from AP.
Charishma
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