This is my first contest.... so please make it a good experience for me 
Write a poem about a friend that is going through some kind of pain and that will either let you help them or will not let you help them.
1. Write about a friend who is going through depression
2. Write about a friend who harms themselves
3. write about someone who hides behind a mask
or right about all 3 of these things
Write a poem about a friend that is going through some kind of pain and that will either let you help them or will not let you help them.
1. Write about a friend who is going through depression
2. Write about a friend who harms themselves
3. write about someone who hides behind a mask
or right about all 3 of these things
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 26, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 80, Bronze: 60, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: This contest was an amazing sucess... thank you all for your hard work. I really enjoyed reading all of your poems...
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3499034, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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I ask you everyday If you are okay• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I could have stopped her.
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She never had a simple life, I didn't know this for awhile.by StarxCrossed 28 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 12 4:35 PM 2007. In Other, Life, Hate, Friendship, Depression, Sadness, Contest• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Sarah was my best friend ever / She promised me it would be forever / So I’m lying here in this toxic nightmare / Waiting for her to come back / And fix my dreams that she shattered / I watched her drift away from m• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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A friend who hurts is a friend in need But what do you do when words no longer comfortby Darkstorm207 53 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 25 10:09 PM 2007. In Contest• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I feel like I'm losing you,
Trapped behind that open door.by Dark Edge 25 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 12 9:49 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Love, Life, Sad, Pain, Lost in thought, Personal., Teen issues• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [18]
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She was happy, knew what she wanted.• Commented on by judge.
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I remember the last time we met / And as you gaze at me, / I could see pain and suffering in your eyes. / Even though, / You said that all• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Theres a knife next to your bed
blood stained and marked of all the times you've felt this lost.by love turned violent 20 lines, 18 comments, on Aug 3 2:24 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by ears2hearyou 118 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 6 11:28 AM 2007. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Love, Spiritual, Pain
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You were always the strong one The one with all the answers• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I can't help but worry,
Although you say you're ok,by xTomorrowx 23 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 30 4:59 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The judgement of thousands, too many to name The unbearable pain of it all, falling on one's shoulders.• Commented on by judge.
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You know me not / I'm long forgot / By the people of this world / If you saw me on the street / I'm just another girl / But look a little d• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm worrried You've changedby flipflopinTM 12 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 25 7:50 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Sorry, it was written for her in first person.
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