make me feel

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on October 29, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 40, Bronze: 20
• Final notes:
  loved every poem that was entered thanks for your time! xx

Contest Winners

1. burn to live

   burn the bridges that keep you away
   burn the voices that won't go away

   by XInsanity-FairX 42 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 17 9:02 PM 2007
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. (My Heart Won't Let Me) Let You Go

   Please take me back
   To when I couldn't feel

   by BeAuT1FuLlyXxBrOkEn 41 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 25 4:42 PM 2007
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. freaking society

   scared out of my mind
   that you will hurt me once again

   by ExpectingMommy18 19 lines, 19 comments, on Oct 1 12:57 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Moon Dancer

   / MOON DANCER / / A prose poem by / / ROBERT DAVIDSON / / / Tonight I walk the beach to the stone jetty where my&n

   by robert davidson 18 lines, 22 comments, on May 5 4:20 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Love, Longing, Romance

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Emotions washed away

   by kim5519 27 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 11:04 AM 2007. In Sad, Life, Personal, Pain, My life, Longing, Sadness, Anger, Self, Teen issu

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. Afterglow.

   Just expressing my feelings through the power of poetry.

   by Bazza 28 lines, 34 comments, on Dec 22 4:25 PM 2006. In Life

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. Eternal Skies

   I'll make you hear me.

   by Black Rose Cat 23 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 8 7:00 PM 2007. In Dark, Love, Lyrics, Personal

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
8. Violent Nights

   Violent Nights.
   Flighty menacing display

   by MaMa-2-be-Cindy 28 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 29 8:56 PM 2007. In Dark, Nature, Thoughts

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
9. with or without...........

   You ache to concur Desire from within and without,
   Quench the thirst,of life with or without

   by jacinta 20 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 25 4:44 AM 2007. In passionate

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
10. Your Crowd

    I never know what to do
    I don't know what to say

    by beenjammin 27 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 24 12:42 AM 2007

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
11. Nobis Donem Pachem

    Once upon a mattress I lay, undressed
    Thinking of ways to unwind...get some rest;

    by liquidmindforever 60 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 10:13 AM 2007

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
12. Our Distance

    This ongoing despondency
    Has left me oppressed and exhausted

    by Morgan M 27 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 4 11:40 AM 2007. In Personal

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [28]

• The Healing Garden II

  Frustrated by the noisy / cackle the inconclusive / chattering, mindless / selfishness, distorted / scenes / I wander off / a little hidden door / curiosity overcomes, / peeping inside / astounding /

  by myorama 43 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 15 1:53 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• What We Say So Clearly That No One Else Knows

  We have something going on,
  That Mr. Webster could not even explain,

  by lesbian-in-love 22 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 10 6:59 AM 2007. In Personal, Life, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• [ If you could feel the beating of my heart, ]

  by FireNymph 26 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 11 5:21 PM 2007. In Adult, Erotica, Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Spin That Heart Like A Record

  Put that bloody record on the player,
  Play the music, hear it loud.
  Remember the singer is just the sayer

  by Demonikvampire 40 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 8 7:00 PM 2007. In Weird, Strange, Dark, Love, Thoughts.

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• You cannot rush the gale

  Nor can you hide from the shadows
  Nor can you forget the sorrow

  by Rockwell 74 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 5 9:24 PM 2007. In Life, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Discreet Abuse

  A promise she made to herself, a secret she must keep.
  She planned it out so perfectly;
  She set the date and time.

  by Erin200 51 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 10 4:24 PM 2007. In Abuse, Pain, Sad, Dark, Beat, Hate, Depression, Sadness, Anger

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I'll dream

  I'll dream of princesses princes and stars...

  by poetrylife 17 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 11 5:45 PM 2007. In other, personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Race

  All crouched at the starting line Racing for what is so divine

  by aerop7n 39 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 30 6:09 PM 2007. In dark, thoughts, other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Vacation I Never Had

  Sometimes I wonder Did I ever have a vacation?

  by Sabir Abdus Samee 21 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 12 12:42 PM 2007. In Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• Did I Kill My Father

  I didn’t bruise Right away....
  And my skirt Covered the outward aftermath.

  by algoressister 121 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 28 12:28 PM 2006. In Abuse, Angst, Life, Pain, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• TheSnowPrincess

  Her realm was frigid icy wind like the breath of a cruel servant.

  by carole21 19 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 22 3:09 PM 2007. In Contest, Imagery, Nature, Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Pins for faded wings

  Rainbow pins Drilled through my limbs

  by SicTransitVictoria 16 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 25 11:31 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge.
• my funeral

  I lay where i fell.
  I can tell I'm going to hell.

  by Lost-My-lover07 25 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 13 9:35 AM 2006. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• mystery

  The life around me speaks in strange words that flutter around my ears and dive into my soul, Life’s odd way of getting my attention, Submitting my allowance to the great Giver and Borrower, offering all my assistanc

  by GreeneArrows 17 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 17 12:21 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Personal, Hope, Nature

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Hangmans noose

  It's a hangman's noose,
  We'll make a deal,

  by koppaspider 30 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 6 8:31 PM 2007. In Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

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  xCandieKissesx
  October 11, 2007
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  This sounds like fun!
  I'll find pre-write soon.
  Good luck! I hope you get lot's of entries!
  Jackie

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