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Waiting and Being Faithful

I want a poem for my husband who is about to deploy for the second time telling him that I love him and I will be waiting for his safe return and will be faithful to him during the wait. Help me out here

StIcKy KeYs will be DQ'd.

Have respect for the military men and women defending your freedom. No bashing please. If entered will be DQ'd.

Look at other entries in the contest and feel free to comment on them. Don't be rude.

Not too short.

Doesn't have to rhyme, but that is a plus.

I'd also like to use some/all of them to send to my husband while he is deployed. If you don't want me to use your entry please let me know so I don't. Thank you all!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 6, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 40, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to all of those who entered this contest. I only had the points for 6 people otherwise everyone would have at least got HM. Great work to all and a heartfelt thanks!

Contest Winners

  1. by pearl-dragon 35 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 5 9:41 PM 2007. In Love, Hope, Thoughts, Contest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Aye, thy kiss shall haunt my dreaming,
    whilst my tears in want are streaming.
    by Arrianna MacEwan 32 lines, 18 comments, on Feb 18 6:58 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Hope
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3475856, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. My dearest husband,
    I love you so,
    by islekine 54 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 6 1:40 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Of all we've been through,
    this has been the most difficult,
    by pattyann4500 32 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 6 4:42 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. To the stars I cry, that you will be fine.
    by Pachanga 20 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 5 11:36 PM 2007. In Love, Duty, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 5, 2007
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    ok girlie, i think you need to get to work and write your own poem to him


  • pattyann4500
    October 6, 2007
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    I love our military men and women, and they have my utmost respect. I should hope there would be no doubt of fidelity, but I can understand your desire to make sure he knows. I hope you can find your own words, but I also hope you find the right ones here in case you don't. I haven't written much lately, but I will keep this in my favorites.

    God bless your husband, God bless you, and God bless all our military. Patricia


    • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
      October 6, 2007
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      Thank you for your comment! All the support they can get is welcome! Lord knows they need it. Thanks again.


  • pattyann4500
    October 6, 2007
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    Thank you for the HM. I will keep your brave husband in my prayers. Patricia