Prompt: I'll be your mentor..; be addicted to me.
"I'll break you down, and mold you to perfection in my hands."
Temptation, unfaithful, 20 reason to break hearts, old flames, heartbreak, raw emotion, sacrifice, death.dark
Rules: Worthy of reading, no sticky cap, bashing
Sixty places, reserve yours. New writes will have advantage.
I’m only good for those nights when the violence in his dreams turn on him, and he wakes in a cold sweat,
it’s one of those nights, that I’ll get a call that breaks my heart in two;
I miss you, she’s not home.
"I'll break you down, and mold you to perfection in my hands."
Temptation, unfaithful, 20 reason to break hearts, old flames, heartbreak, raw emotion, sacrifice, death.dark
Rules: Worthy of reading, no sticky cap, bashing
Sixty places, reserve yours. New writes will have advantage.
I’m only good for those nights when the violence in his dreams turn on him, and he wakes in a cold sweat,
it’s one of those nights, that I’ll get a call that breaks my heart in two;
I miss you, she’s not home.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 12, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 8 people
- Final notes: Thank you for entering, but I have found the group that I require for this experiment. It is offical, the chosen eight will be taken under my poetic wing for mentoring, and improving their poetry, and eventually completely adopted as my fellow collaborator.
I would like to take a moment to point the spotlight to a few poems.
First Place: A Craving Of Yourself by ImMud
It was a mishap that I even discovered who wrote this piece of poetic beauty. After my first initial comment, this young man took the time to take my commment into consideration and tweaked this piece not once, but twice. Normally, I would not have been so...lenant, but his words and verse I devoured hungrily, greedily. Please check this piece out. If I could, I would reward all of you something, but this is the most powerful one I've gotten.
Tuxedo and Fruitless Longings
This two had a beautiful way with words that infact inspired me to write, though I was to be cursed by writer's block. Definitely two poems to look to for inspiration and talent.
All the others, I would like to congradulate and thank. To those who did not place, feel free to enter my other contest, and I thank you very much for taking the time to entering. I love you all, and wish you continued writing!!!
Contest Winners
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Pleasure is a weakness that consumes all those who grace this earth.I have fallen.by Lady Nightshade 44 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 18 3:51 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Dark
Bronze trophy winner
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Last night I dreamt you were with me. / That you held me, / Loved me, / wanted me. / I could almost hear your voice, / feel your warmth, /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Yes to the day that you went away, leaving me so low, my emotions too strong to show,
barely bearable, you left me so, heart stings of bitby StayStrongX 5 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 4 4:02 PM 2007. In Sad, Emo, Teenage thinking, Thoughts, Lost love, Suicide, Other• Commented on by judge. -
A jealous rage comsumes me.
A blade in handby breakdown-beatdown 31 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 16 10:03 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i feel the water rising up in my lungs
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Throw away all your misery Let your heart beat againby MagazinesFall 19 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 9 6:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Gathered like wraiths around a fire the soldiers, they sing to the chthonic gods for victory.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Unimaginable Creativity
I just wanted to post something to not only the poets but to the host of this contest...I have read most of the submitted poetry, as I have also entered the contest as well. My thoughts to everyone else who has entered are scattered, like always, but they generally are good thoughts. After reading most of the poetry posted I was able to come away with positive points for each poem. Now, there were a few that needed some work, I my self revised mine and will probably do so again before the contest is over, but that doesnt mean it was horrific. I just wanted to tell everyone that even though not everyone gets a trophy, it doesn't mean you aren't still champions or your own heart. Best wishes to all of the entries and may you all go deaf and blind in order to fade into the darkness. -
Ya Mud! wtg! I'm so proud of u!
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