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What would you say to someone who has died? How would you word it in a poem?

OK, SOOOO...I'm making another contest with the help of my friend Nicole!

We want poetry about, what you would say in a poem to someone who has passed away?

Wheather it be,
1. what would your last words be to them
2. What you'd said to them if you'd had the chance to say goodbye
3. An apology for a wrong you committed
4. Just a "I miss you" Poem

The most heartfelt poem will get gold and 300 points
The most honest poem will get silver and 10 points
The most heartbreaking will get bronze and 10 points!!


Have fun with it ya'll!!


♥ Always Dani and Nicole



Sorry, No pre-writes, we want originals!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 7, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 10, Bronze: 10
  • Final notes:
    The poems you all entered were very heartfelt and very emotional, especially for me!
    I loved them all!
    Thank you all for entering and making me inspired!
    You all did a fantastic job! Keep up the perfect writes!

    Dani and Nic

Contest Winners

  1. Life
    Life is just too short
    We never know what time we have
    by Carpe Noctem 45 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 28 10:29 PM 2005. In Sad
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Oh How I Wish It Were Different
    Oh how I wish it were so different my precious son
    Your mom is so sad and grieved that you are gone
    by stavykm 21 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 1 10:41 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Still in My Heart
    I know that my life won't be quite the same
    As it was, now without you.
    by Carpe Noctem 27 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 29 1:10 AM 2005. In Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • ScrewAllOfYou
    October 1, 2007
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    Seems like you're filling up on entries already, wish my contest was like that, lol

    If anyone is curious, i have a contest up right now, pretty easy topic.
    http://allpoetry.com/contest/2371640


  • Dillweed
    October 1, 2007
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    hi.

    I entered this, and I think i put all my feeling in it. thanks for posting up this contest, there is no way I could get this out without poetry. again thanks.


  • aeolia
    October 1, 2007
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    Wait, so you're giving out trophies based on how sad a poem is instead of how well it is written and how well the ideas therein are conveyed?


  • vampire of thought
    October 1, 2007
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    I'm considering entering this..possibly. Anyways, I have one that would fit perfectly, its just you want new ones, and I'm lacking inspiration. *sigh*

    The days out of the year I cry the most: Aug. 22, Jan. 15, and Mothers Day.


  • Carpe Noctem
    October 8, 2007
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    Thank you for the trophies and the points. Congrats to the other winners. You all did a fantastic job!!!

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