So, this is my girlfriend Lily's eyes.
I want you to show me what she's looking at using
words. What those beautiful eyes of her are
concentrating on. Don't tell me in your poem exactly
whats she's looking at, make me see it through your
writing. I don't want "She's looking at her cat," or
some shit like that. You know?
Stuff about how shes looking at you, or that shes
looking at the reflection of herself in the mirror.
Or it can be just about eyes in general.
It can be about anything, just not erotica, because I
mean hey, she's my girlfriend and I don't want to
read anything like that if it's about her.
I want to see how creative you can get, show me some
real imgary, because I haven't seen much lately.
Metaphores are a plus, so keep that in mind (not
needed though.)
Pick whatever style you wish; freestyle, rhyming,
whatever. It really doesn't bother me at all.
There's not much else to say really.
Rules:
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*NO STICKY CAPS
*NoNe Of ThIs CrAzY sHiT
*NO EROTICA!!!
*Dont reply to my comment nor rate them (instant DQ)
*And just for fun, put your favorite number in the
Author notes, just so I know you paid attention to
the rules. If not, I'm no longer warning you, just
DQ'ing you.
So, if I recieve enough entries, I will add silver
and bronze. I will add HM's if I get a lot of really
great ones.
So write!
I want you to show me what she's looking at using
words. What those beautiful eyes of her are
concentrating on. Don't tell me in your poem exactly
whats she's looking at, make me see it through your
writing. I don't want "She's looking at her cat," or
some shit like that. You know?
Stuff about how shes looking at you, or that shes
looking at the reflection of herself in the mirror.
Or it can be just about eyes in general.
It can be about anything, just not erotica, because I
mean hey, she's my girlfriend and I don't want to
read anything like that if it's about her.
I want to see how creative you can get, show me some
real imgary, because I haven't seen much lately.
Metaphores are a plus, so keep that in mind (not
needed though.)
Pick whatever style you wish; freestyle, rhyming,
whatever. It really doesn't bother me at all.
There's not much else to say really.
Rules:
------
*NO STICKY CAPS
*NoNe Of ThIs CrAzY sHiT
*NO EROTICA!!!
*Dont reply to my comment nor rate them (instant DQ)
*And just for fun, put your favorite number in the
Author notes, just so I know you paid attention to
the rules. If not, I'm no longer warning you, just
DQ'ing you.
So, if I recieve enough entries, I will add silver
and bronze. I will add HM's if I get a lot of really
great ones.
So write!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 5, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I wished the turnout would've been different, but this is it. Thanks toy uo few that entered, all were lovely poems. Congrats to the winner. Good luck to you all in future contests.
Contest Winners
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Staring blankly through the glass and beyond the trees What does she see? is she thinking of me?• Viewed by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Entries [3]
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Beryl jewels that glimmer closer to this mirror• Viewed by judge.
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Can you see what I see?
That girl in the mirror?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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omg...cant believe you used this picture...grrr....lol..still love you
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lol
sorry hun, but I needed a good topic and your eyes was a good picture. I just love your eyes and I was sure others would too, hope you're not too mad... lol. Love you too my kitten.
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wow, your soo awsome this is the first time i won a gold trophy, this just made my week!
thank you so much, i'm so glad u liked it
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