hmmm... so this is my 2nd contest so bare with me... lol
so ive been feeling a little jealous of my fiancees time. he lives in san diego because he is a marine, so its been difficult to talk to him, he is always busy.
now i know when hes working, he is working, thats not what im jealous about. im jealous about the time he spends with other people when he is not working. when he calls me he is always with other people and he gets off the phone quick cause he cant hear me or he has to go take care of a drunk friend.
so i want you to describe a time for me when you got jealous, how did you feel, what did the jealousy look like, describe it for me using details. how did you handle it, and what was the outcome.
okay so now here are the rules:
1. please no bashing other poets or people
2. no sticky caps it gives me a headache and i will DQ you
3. not a rule but i love rhyme
4. have fun and let that jealousy out
okay so i believe that is it... good luck
-tk
oh and if you have any questions please feel free to ask or comment thanks
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 25, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: wow i have to say how impressed i am with all of you... i couldnt have done better myself... i just want to say congrats to all the winners and great job to all the others... oh and sorry it took so long to judge.... between school and work i barely sleep... GREAT JOB EVERYONE!!! ttyl
-tk
Contest Winners
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by Distorted Clarity 34 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 18 9:06 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Friendship, Jealousy
Honorable mention
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I met her in a playground,
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [14]
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I know what you want and know what you got
And the difference between me and her is a lotby ThatONEweirdChick 23 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 5 11:42 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Longing, Teenage thinking, Lost love, My life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tonight I think you may have done what you said you wouldn't do, / I'm lying here, so hoping not, the clocks approaching two. / I begin to see the thing I feared the most might just well come true / I took• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I heard your laugh
I only felt hateby Cinder 29 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 4:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Is it so hard to give me five
minutes of your time?by Clinically-Cynical 29 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 30 4:34 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Who is she? / What is she to you? / What does she look like? / Is she aware you are mine? / Does she have someone of her own? / Why would sby tigress3737 39 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 30 1:42 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Jealousy, / the desire that / may consume / the soul, / ravaging / everything in its path.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In times that I would loose upon a page
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Fission, fusion and the idiom…
by Robbwindow 26 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 13 11:13 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Hope, Life, Love, Nature, Society, Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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