Everyone has something that bothers them. Eats at them from the inside. At least I know I do. I want poems that show just what happens in the state of depression or the pain you deal with inside. Express your darkests feelings in this contest. Please every entry needs to be in English.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 16, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75
- Final notes: This was a wonderful contest and everyone did very good. I loved all of the poems in this contest but these were defently the best. Great Job Everyone
Contest Winners
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As winter's now upon us-
the sadness that we feel intensifies.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You weren’t there next to me
And I couldn’t stand to be in this world any longer…by Rain-Shot-Rose 102 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 5 8:24 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
It's been a killing streak My depression is on a winning streakby LoveDeprived 31 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 27 6:09 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [55]
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Hard words .. screaming tears ..by whisperd secrets 48 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 27 7:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Walking down the street
Dodging glances from unfamiliar faces
Walking down the street• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You fall in, you have no choice.
Sinking.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i got bored and used my friend as insparation for this poem....is that a bad thing?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"My head is pounding like the beat of
Furious footsteps marching endlessly"• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As The Blood Drips to the Floor / As I sit here on the computer my thoughts wonder / How would it feel to slit my wrists? / Would the pain inside just go away / Would the horror of the day just fade away? / I can’by April Vampi72 27 lines, on Jul 2 1:12 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A maelstrom of sentiments
thrashes within the confines of an empty shellby NeoVersifierGB 30 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 8 9:52 PM 2005. In Angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The minutes of longing are turning to days,
The rain has entwined with her tears.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Views astray, coming across the shadows bare.
Eyes of clay, clouded through the sightless glare.by SpoiledWrott10 32 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 11 12:53 AM 2007. In Contest• Viewed by judge. -
x♥x♥x♥xby SarahEatsAirplane 109 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 12 8:16 PM 2007. In Angst, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Life, Lyrics, Pain, Dirty Pretty• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When I do sleep, I wake to a freshly brewed cup of pain I dream of you, aching to forget, still misery remainsby chelserated 24 lines, on Oct 11 1:42 PM 2007. In Pain• Viewed by judge.
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Sitting in the corner of my room, Alone in the Darkness,• Viewed by judge.
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by Glasyalabolas 55 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 12 12:22 PM 2007. In Pain, Lyrics, Depression, Lost in thought, My own style, Sadness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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the fire in my heart that used to burn has now started to grow cold• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Injuries will come and go / if you live a normal childhood. / Cuts and scrapes and boo-boos, / that mommies kisses make feel good. / / As• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by karma-n-peace 20 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 1 7:33 PM 2007. In Adult, Abuse, Dark, Pain, Addiction, Dedication, Contest• Viewed by judge.
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The shine of the knife The scars on the wrist• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Her Fire / the one burning so brightly / behind her eyes / Full of determination and strength / the blaze that keeps her climbing / long afby Soten-Jaganshi 86 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 28 12:50 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am so damn (tired)
Tears (of) sadnessby voodoo ink 31 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 10 4:55 PM 2007. In pain, depression, fear, sadness, thoughts
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Abusing the person I used to be
Keep her locked up inside• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I wrote this as I thought of the general state of Mankind.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The shower is on
The water hot• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I thought you could be the one who took my heart• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As I run the blade across my wrists, I see the blood start to drip,by SilverRain 18 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 3 11:00 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You walked into my room
and took my cellby Lost-Rose-Petal 47 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 13 2:33 PM 2005. In Abuse• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Butterfly, Butterfly, show me your wings
Your freedom of choice, and your voice- oh it sings.by Erin200 9 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 10 4:28 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i got drunk
just to prove that i could• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Loneliness encompasses my body and soul. Desperately searching for someone to make me whole.by leslielovesthomas 18 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 14 3:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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the shore is footstep-
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It's a hangman's noose,
We'll make a deal,by koppaspider 30 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 6 8:31 PM 2007. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I realize now that I had no pain before you
You were my one true pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My arms burn with my concealed anger
It itches as it heals irritating me furtherby Little-Green-Alien 28 lines, on Apr 6 10:37 AM 2007. In Society's Rejects• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Not trying to dig at someone's heart, are you? This one is right up my alley lately, yet I'm not so sure I can write it down. I'll see what I get out of the conglomeration of feelings I find in my heart and in my head. The two are completely joined these days.
Good luck with your contest. Patricia
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Thank you very much for awarding me the silver,
cheers,
Floorboards.


