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Make me cry

I Want to read a poem and cry
make me cry
it does not matter what it is about i just want to feel the emotion it can be about how you saw a tree to day or saw the cat and the birds and just make it good yeah?


i Will Comment on all Entrys


Thats all

Good luck

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 21, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Amazing!
    all three of these poems made me cry
    i loved evry second of them
    i only had 300 points so only gold got the points but you were all great =D

    keep ip the good work
    xBx

Contest Winners

  1. Daddy, Am I A Hero?
    My son’s name is Justin, He turned twenty one today.
    by Mark Spencer 68 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 20 11:24 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Hope, Pain, Personal, Sad
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. Mummy
    Mummy whats happening to me why can't I move my legs
    by AngelsDemise 55 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 21 1:21 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Dark
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

Entries [17]

1 - 17 of 17
  • my worst nightmare
    nothing really.just said my worst fear
    by ExpectingMommy18 61 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 28 1:12 PM 2006. In Angst, Dark, Sad, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Someone I Know
    His eyes are deep dark green And He loves all that he's seen
    by Vars 14 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 20 10:37 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Rags
    She whimpers as
    She trudges through snow
    by Poemdancer 33 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 30 8:42 PM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Society
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • A good child
    My class consisted of 3 types of people good, popular, and evil i was a good one i just had to be i was the one filled with glee i was the leader, the head of the pack and when evil struck i struck back, and then one day a ne
    by skull8686 0 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 20 11:06 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge.
  • So Beautiful......So Gone
    I pass your room
    The door is ajar so the air wont get stale.
    by lindaburns 105 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 14 6:37 PM 2007. In Contest, Pain, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I'm Sorry Baby
    I wipe the tears from my eyes
    Dry the blood dripping from my lips
    by Cupcrazy 74 lines, 96 comments, on Apr 7 9:56 AM 2006. In Abuse
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Please Say That You Love Me
    Please say that you love me, / even if you don’t. / I will just leave gleefully by hearing that. / And in the distance battlefield, / when
    by Sabir Abdus Samee 13 lines, 44 comments, on Jul 21 8:44 AM 2007. In Feelings, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Recollections: and the lessons learned (edited and reposted))
    by MJ Donnelly 33 lines, 30 comments, on Feb 1 8:30 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Death, Personal, Life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Our Empty Room-A Poem to My Husband
    Forgive me, my husband, for locking you out of this room;Wanting to be alone in winter’s dark womb.Muffling cries, as I look into its phant
    by Carly Pop 25 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 12 11:28 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Afraid to ask
    First, you are afraid to ask / Then when you decided to ask / You don't know how. / When you finally ask, / She doesn't want to answer / S
    by Anastasiya 22 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 21 1:30 AM 2007. In Pain, Abuse, Drugs, Life, Hate, Rape
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • You make me not want me
    I had this for a while and thought I put it on already. Enjoy^^V.
    by redrumdog31 42 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 25 1:46 PM 2007. In Sad, Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • the price i willingly pay
    and it was worth every moment / a memory slips away / and i try to find it / to write about it / to think about it / but it escapes me / but even though i can't remember / i know the sacrifice was worth it / w
    by Misery into Melody 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 21 6:02 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Red Ribbons
    A parcel filled with hope,
    Shining eyes awaiting loyally.
    by boxOFjuice 57 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 19 3:00 AM 2007. In Pain, Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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