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Get Me Out of My Sad Place

I really want to be happy right now, I don't understand why I can't pick myself up and act normal. It's just the way I am, so prone to depression. And I'm not saying that to get attention I am just so overwelmed. So write me something happy, something genuinely happy. Seriously happy. I don't mean something with sunshines and rainbows, something with meaning, metaphorically. Please, I need a serious pick me up cause I am going insane.
No real rules. But if I don't like something or it wasn't what I was looking for I will nicely comment you and remove your piece.
Make me so happy I cry, that's all I really need right now.
Oh and you may enter prewrites but if it gets out of control I'll stop letting them in. I like fresh.

Oh and only one entry per person.
OHHKKKK AAAANNNDDD I WOULD JUST LIKE TO ADD--
please no religious poetry! I know you can be nice without adding God into it or something. PLEASE.(oh and im not much for rhyme either-if you do rhyme please make sure its a GOOD rhyme!!)

Thanks <3 :]

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 1, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Well I thank you all.
    Ya'll made me happy :]
    Gratz to you all.
    You're all winners! :] lol

Contest Winners

  1. Painting the Invisible
    summer day, canary yellow / paint splattered across / overalls and pick-up trucks. / breathing hard, pinpricks of / hollowness shooting up
    by freestallion 41 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 3 12:57 AM 2007. In Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3320254, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Mt. Angel
    Rush of frozen air
    cool my soul with renewal
    by skyviewexpress 27 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 29 2:06 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. When Tranquility Seems Worlds Away
    WHEN TRANQUILITY SEEMS WORLDS AWAY
    When your world is on fire
    by Jeremy0826 55 lines, 18 comments, on Sep 9 1:29 AM 2007. In Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Nature, Thoughts, Inspiration, Encouragement
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. You are always...
    You are always there for me
    No matter what I do
    by Beverlynohime 18 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 17 9:27 PM 2007. In Friend, Friends, Personal, Sweet, cute, happy, times, Thoughts, Love, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Expeditions [2]
    Expeditions of life
    are journeys of entombed knowingness,
    by FransB 16 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 18 7:39 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Life, Pain, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • Follow Me!
    Give me your hand and i'll lead you to place where the sunshines always
    by edit my world. 11 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 19 12:47 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Flyaway
    We'll flyaway to the heavens, / Let the wind be your guide. / Through thick and through thin, / I'll always be by your side. / We'll flyaway to the sunset, / Where beauty shines through
    by and234 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 23 4:48 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • That Night
    by Deepredvelvet 21 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 17 10:17 PM 2007. In Adult, Erotica, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A Simple Drink for Two
    The wine is in the chalice there is malice, there is pain;
    by zorman32 51 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 19 2:35 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Contest, Hope, Humor, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Real
    The Pains Make Me Strong, The Gains Make Me Work Long.
    by kunal1090 28 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 18 4:29 AM 2007. In Hope, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • ForgottenMemories
    September 18, 2007
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    Oh no! I have to write you a poem to make you happy again!


  • everyone1 gold member
    September 30, 2007
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    Thank you for letting me enter your contest!

    On a personal note!

    I will state this... I suffer from a Bi-Polar condition, and for years before the doctors found the right mix of meds for me, I suched my thumb in the dark, in the basement of my life!

    So I say that if God can help this deselate heart! Then my friend, then it is certain, that He can come to you as He did for me, and remove the darkness form you in your life!

    God bless your soul, and may He come to you in your hour of great need, and bring it great joy, and a perfect peace!

    ~ James ~


  • freestallion
    October 1, 2007
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    Aw thank you so much!! Congrats to all the other winners!!