This is my first contest ever and im very excited and hope to have many entries which can be about anything really but fyi i love dark and freeverse i like rhyme but its hard to please me. You guys can read my stuff to learn what i like.
Rules:
you know the general one so why even waste my time.
but if you don't follow the general rules that are in every single contest i will DQ you not if or buts about it.
By the way i will comment every single poem that is a promise and you guys can enter a million poems for all i care the more the merrier.
Rules:
you know the general one so why even waste my time.
but if you don't follow the general rules that are in every single contest i will DQ you not if or buts about it.
By the way i will comment every single poem that is a promise and you guys can enter a million poems for all i care the more the merrier.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 23, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Sorry that it took so long to judge but there were a lot of entries and i couldnt find the time to read them all fairly in a timely manner. But now that the contest is over i really enjoyed reading all the entries and it was very difficult deciding on only 6 award winners but the top 6 were just wonderful writes that were amazingly deserving of their respective awards. Even the HM i felt deserved more. THanks for all of u who entered my very first contest and hope to see u in my next one some time soon.
Contest Winners
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with empathy flowing both forwards and back
I feed from my need, live from need to give back.by Jonathan ROBIN 326 lines, 180 comments, on Mar 18 12:30 PM 2005. In Philosophy of Life, Other, Spiritual. Reward
Gold trophy winner
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Her black wings outstretch in pain crimson drops seeping down• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You words speak to my aching heart / Knowing that I myself have felt the same / And though you think that death will end the pain / There's something that you should know / With life comes heart-ache, pain, diappointby crystallynnbradford 36 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 7 4:37 PM 2007. In Personal, Pain
Bronze trophy winner
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Cars, parked, funeral march-
the wind's returnedby Floorboards 22 lines, 54 comments, on Jan 13 6:56 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Other, Thoughts
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She walked in the light / And then she was gone / Now I wonder the Earth alone again / Waiting for the time to come / When I find another / One so precious, / One so much more like myself / Who hides from the br• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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All Started With A Chocolate Dream
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People tell me I'm pretty They tell me I'm thinby Sticks-And-Stones 30 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 31 8:44 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Sometimes the journey seems like too far to travel when all hope is lost and you want to give in,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Your image hovers
Above my dreaming eyes.by tigress3737 19 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 11 10:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Clinging-to-Life 38 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 17 11:49 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Love.Dream.Believe. 32 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 23 6:36 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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yesterday I crawled across the sun and cast a woman-shaped hole across the earth as I let my edges burn like parchment and
I wondered if aby freestallion 23 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 29 12:51 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Secret Love Affair 31 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 19 8:30 AM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Her plastic walls
Seem indestructable,by littleumpaa88 22 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 14 2:00 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Dead...
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Paper wings caught fire as she came back down to earth,by bonjourbunnie 48 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 25 8:29 PM 2007. In love, fantasy, metaphorical, heartbreak• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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A kiss unlike any other.I have found,it binds me like strong ropes.Forever• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I look out to sea
And feel the wind in my hairby Sticks-And-Stones 14 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 16 3:08 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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This is my poem, and it is, my own opinion
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she was an undiscovered poet,
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You're a [pretty] little i m p e r f e c t i o n / with your [shattered] ego / / and those eyes that could leave / any boy in a trancby juliex-exotic shine 56 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 29 1:25 PM 2007. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Freak is me can't you see? / I,m on a leash set me free / I have a collar that's green and shiny / My dog is big and his name is Tiny /by Hotrod94 13 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 24 4:25 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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in spanish and englishby Misty Goddess 30 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 5 7:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How many tears / Does it take / To wash away / A never ending pain? / Pain that has been there / From birth to death / Breeding and multiplying / At my own instigation / Give mby Glasyalabolas 55 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 12 12:22 PM 2007. In Pain, Lyrics, Depression, Lost in thought, My own style, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Standing atop the mountain / Of insurmountable negativity / A broken jigsaw / That challenges sanity / Put on my smile / As a mask / And never taken to task / By a multitude of indifferenceby Glasyalabolas 50 lines, on Jun 8 12:30 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Hope, Pain, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Glasyalabolas 52 lines, 8 comments, on May 27 5:58 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Dark, Spiritual, Fantasy, My own style, Anger, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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slit my wrists the pale blue linesby Dirty and Broken 17 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 18 8:31 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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A mothers love Is true• Viewed by judge.
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you ask me to look in the mirror you ask what it is i see• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hey again / Sitting on those benches / Of worn green paint, / Chipping and peeling / I say hello / But noone is listening / So scream louder / How are you / And you wheeze at the shiver / That runs down yourby Eots 28 lines, 6 comments, on May 24 9:40 AM 2007. In Teen issues, Longing, Sadness, Pain, Hope, Loss, Love, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The sum of your secrets Would not reveal yourself To anyone,For it is everyone who Knows you, not for your secrets,But for your masque.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Blurred fragments of smoky images.
A twisted run on textures,by Ender Tyberius 80 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 18 4:15 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
under the bright, sparkling moon she waits
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To this day
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by lostdarkness 17 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 13 10:32 AM 2005. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The back of your fingers wipe the tear from my eye, / Slowly caressing my tear stained cheeks, / Finding it hard to talk, / I look at you,by Freakout 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 9 4:03 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Walking the halls
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Your holding me tightly
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What a fool am I What a fool am Iby luna-midnight 36 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 8 8:37 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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he said "i can love you if you want
... i know you're dying toby a gothic romance 93 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 24 3:19 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Forever forgotten Forever enslavedby syrknogard 39 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 27 9:39 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Shedding its skin, but nothing’s underneath,
Fated to steal other’s identities.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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im very happy with the turnout for this contest their is a lot of entries and very good entries so it will take me a good deal of time to comment all of you but i promised i would so i will i just ask for patience i already have my favorites but that shouldnt discourage any of you im a very fickle person. hope that the rest of the entries are as good as the ones ive read so far and to have many more thanks to all for joining my contest im having a blast judging.
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Hi, I was just wondering if this contest is going to be judged soon?
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yeah sorry about how long this has been taking its just so many entries which has also caused me to not be able to comment on all of them like i promised. Sorry about that.
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Cheers for the hms!
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