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Anger - 24 hours

Free verse only.

Yep. No rhyme.

And no sore losers. Get over yourselves.


You may find that:
I'm bitter. I'm an asshole. I'm honest. And possibly even rude.


I like imagery.
And I like metaphor.

It's just the style of poetry I like to read.


Now write.





Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 16, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Everyone did a good job.

    These three were very impressive.

    Stellar job, winners. =)

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3409488, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Crinkled Leaf To Bury
    The mass of carbon you release in the air everyday is overwhelming - in the near future, their may not be any earth. It's our home planet -
    by Asfand 70 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 15 5:11 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Unforgiving
    Raging tides
    crash to shore
    by pattyann4500 22 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 15 1:39 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Anger, Metaphor, Society
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • vampyz
    September 15, 2007
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    Mind of a Minor

    Take a knife and rip it open
    Let the blood flow and feel the burn
    The Devils dance while the Angels mourn
    When it happens that’s when you open the curtain


    It’s the beginning of a new rule
    Where ‘they’ lead and humans are nothing but tools
    No sunlight but the pitch dark sky teamed up with the moon
    This is a tale only wished true by a hopeless fool


    Looking up at this ceiling
    Gazing into this lifeless four walls
    Waiting for no redemption or any healing
    Just lying here, waiting, when everything is dying…


  • wbiro gold member
    September 15, 2007
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    Yay, nothing for me to misconstrue here...! So let me roll up my sleeves, I've a few things I can get angry about, and myself not the least...


  • zillion
    September 15, 2007
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    It's been a while. Hope things have been well on your side of AP. I'll see what I can muster up.

    Khourey


  • deadcolor dreams
    September 15, 2007
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    lol, sounds like you've had a few rough contests.

    • Tangled Angle
      September 15, 2007
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      You should have seen my rhyme one. 3 people put me on their ignore list.

      2 of them, don't even know me, and have never even spoke with me. lol

      1 of them, was just an egotistical loser.. well.. winner.. I gave him HM.

      People are so weird.


      • deadcolor dreams
        September 15, 2007
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        Yeah, sometimes even weirder in real life though.


        • Tangled Angle
          September 15, 2007
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          Lol true!

          Are you going to enter? :

          And how have you been?

          • deadcolor dreams
            September 15, 2007
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            Well, I'm too tired/mellow right now to think of anything angry or spiteful, but I'm going to try. I bascially just got back from the mock trial meets. (it's a school thing)


  • Asfand
    September 15, 2007
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    any specific theme? first I thought 'anger' was the theme, but I dont really think so? Or is it?


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 15, 2007
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    Nono Tyler's a sweetie!


  • Namita
    September 16, 2007
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    No no no no Tyler's soooo not on top 5!!


    He's on the top 2. With me.


  • layla.
    September 16, 2007
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    Awww thanks for the gold. Congrats Mom and Asfand on the win


  • pattyann4500
    September 16, 2007
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    Thank you, Tyler, for the bronze. For me to win bronze in one of your contests is like winning gold in most. Hugs, Patricia

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