i have been feeling down and stressed out, make me feel better...you can be funny or just practical....i don't care just make me feel better about life by showing me there is some one worse off or make me laugh
i have a six month old baby and i work part time i make just enough to pay the sitter and buy dipers...and my boyfriend sleeps all day and works all night...it's a pain in the ass
rules...
because i am alowing as many entries by one person as you chose i will be a stickler for these rules...so read and follow them...
1. no sticky caps...ThEy ArE aNnOyInG!!
2. plz no chat txt...i find this to be annoying as well
3. i like long poems...so 25 or more lines please
4. no stories... they are not poems
5. comment on one of my poems and someone else's in the contest...it's just a nice thing to do and will brighten thier day
6. put at the bottom of your poem the following phrase "you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are gray"
i have a six month old baby and i work part time i make just enough to pay the sitter and buy dipers...and my boyfriend sleeps all day and works all night...it's a pain in the ass
rules...
because i am alowing as many entries by one person as you chose i will be a stickler for these rules...so read and follow them...
1. no sticky caps...ThEy ArE aNnOyInG!!
2. plz no chat txt...i find this to be annoying as well
3. i like long poems...so 25 or more lines please
4. no stories... they are not poems
5. comment on one of my poems and someone else's in the contest...it's just a nice thing to do and will brighten thier day
6. put at the bottom of your poem the following phrase "you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are gray"
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 24, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering and congrats to the winners!
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.
Contest Winners
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Close your eyes and rest your body and mind...
Can you picture my fairytale ending?by Silly Rabbit. 82 lines, 17 comments, on Sep 25 4:44 PM 2007. In Love, Future, Personal.
Silver trophy winner
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Nothing is so comforting than a babies touch• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [39]
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Circadian cerebral rhythms Pound against shining appendagesby TeChNoWC 50 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 7 11:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hang in there sweetie!by islekine 80 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 15 12:54 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I've Walked this World for centuries / And this is What I see / The Blue and Purple Flowers / Blooming by a tree / The Cherry Blossoms dancby Beverlynohime 43 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 22 6:44 PM 2007. In Centuries, World, Society, Thoughts, Weird, Contemporary, Hope, Life, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’ve found a peace, / A peace that only lasts but a while, / A peace which reminds me that of a child. / I’ve found a place, / Where I runby perfectsunset 36 lines, 4 comments, on May 30 5:04 AM 2007. In Childrens• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How did we all come down to this...when will we realize it's what's inside...we've corrupted this world with hate and it's probably too latby Forever-Sorry 54 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 13 7:43 AM 2007. In Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I don't want to dream alone anymore / you've opened my eyes / and electronic whispers / channel our secrets / These words mean something /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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WHEN I STEPPED OUT INTO THE BRIGHT SUNLIGHT, THE SUN CAME ACROSS MY FACE,by wings from god 28 18 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 24 8:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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she's already too far in the fire to be saved again...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She doesn't know what love is...by Forever-Sorry 52 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 13 8:04 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tofu or veggie or maybe nothing in between.
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Relate to Christmas Song "Good King Winsterslaus."• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 36 lines, 21 comments, on Sep 15 11:49 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sing it to the tune of sunshine, but its about my baby... I haven't had her yet... One day I will though.• Commented on by judge.
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I met you on the crossroads
Of a silent, whispering despairby MzDimeDivia 28 lines, 25 comments, on Sep 21 8:28 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Six hours a day devoted to this nothingnessby angryelf6886 14 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 11 10:40 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Out of silence
I say "Truth or Dare?"by angryelf6886 13 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 11 10:07 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My thoughts indulged / My hearts story told / I tried to rewrite / But the endings' still cold / / I tried to fix my faery tale / But only got a lie / Now all the characters watch / As slowly I begin to cby angryelf6886 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 8:31 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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posicles
sweet lolipops
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i hold onto you, we cleave
you are shaking, i dont understand
im trembling, then into sand.by xblakxrosexremainsx 32 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 26 2:54 PM 2007. In Weird, Wasted, Uncategorized, Difficult.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'll be happy to end this day,
with you, (when you make me chill)
only you, (who makes me feel thrill),• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Honestly I’m stumbling
Through honest wordsby Snowblind 41 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 22 12:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sunset’s as bright as the sunrise
And the stars outshine the moonby Snowblind 24 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 22 12:47 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by OnyxtheForsaken 3 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 11 12:06 PM 2007. In Humor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is a sad poem Yeah, one of those.by MusicallyMused 23 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 27 6:45 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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wow Kat, you have a lot of entries so far.

