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I just love alliteration

I just love alliteration. You can use it in so many ways. It can make a poem lazy luxurious, and lovely or it can cause quick controlled chaos. It can really ram reality at you or softly suggest a sunset song. Or you can really get complicated and Try to light the fire with vocalic-alliteration. I tend to prefer the consonantal alliteration, but you may attempt either. I would like poems that use this device, but not overuse. In the spirit of perhaps progressing your perspective and creating community connections please comment on at least one other poem in the contest, and once done include the name of the poem you commented on in your author note box. I am not overly concerned with keeping this anonymous; I just don't have the option of checking that box. HMs maybe added at a later date.


Rules:
in your author note box include this:

"consciously consult your cranium."

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 14, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for entering. Once again I found this contest extremely hard to judge. There is such talent here that I feel torn, debating fiercely with myself as I drag and reorder. Thank you all again for making this such a wonderful contest.

Contest Winners

  1. Pondering pricks do I see in the faces of preoccupied people
    by penman 24 lines, 21 comments, on Nov 28 11:37 PM 2006. In Other
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. We, the literate dedicated entirely to impressing
    ourselves with surrreal props
    by liquidmindforever 40 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 4 10:00 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Humor, Society
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Immense inner entanglements inside / Thoughts that linger on the mind incessantly / Wistful, imaginative, real and illusionary / Happy, sad
    by 2lullabyhaven 28 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 15 11:15 AM 2007. In Contest, Longing, Lost in thought, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. by elemental angel 16 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 12 10:45 AM 2007. In Angst, Thoughts, Pain, Personal, Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Kitchens chaotic chagrin corners me,
    provoking petulant pouts a-plenty
    by Blankscreen2222 67 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 3 11:19 AM 2007. In Kitchen versus countryside. The day the kitchen lost.
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • by SnowshoeOcean 13 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 13 3:00 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The sparrow soars so sweetly The dog does daring deeds
    by Dageek2 8 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 13 3:04 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • All of the adrenaline
    bursts and bubbles in a
    by Taxing Minds 25 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 7 11:37 AM 2006. In Beat, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Please possess my shattered dreams And fly them far from here
    by DeadlyTurnip 13 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 13 8:01 PM 2007. In Love, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Her fulness settles into
    earth’s deepest cravings
    by Everwind Rising 49 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 10 11:18 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • dreamsxcalling
    September 13, 2007
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    Haha my friends and I have a very long ongoing joke about alliteration. Half the time all of our words start with "C" whether they're meant to or not. I'll try to find time to enter. Great idea.


  • penman gold member
    September 14, 2007
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    Thank you for the silver in your contest. Congrats to all the winners.