Title the following poem
don't make it flowery or too obvious, please.
nothing like "political rant" because I don't believe it is a rant
two titles maximum per submission.
one winner = 300 points and credit for the title in the notes.
BAN _____________________!!!
put another tic-mark next to the
gov't planting their abortional seed in
our minds bodies lives society everything
ultimate
trying to dictate
our voices
the steps our feet take
the choices we make
won't be ours for long
just put another chastity belt on the
so-called democracy
they dictate - they bring
they bring
they bring
order to chaos
wind up the key in my back and push me
to turn right then right again the way you want
to make me a wind-up toy that won't talk
back or too loud -
or pull the string for the pre-programmed statements
that offend no big bosses
I gotta write this down
and get it outta me
before the red pen
erases my
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 26, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: This was SO difficult.
Back and forth between "I don't play with dolls" and "Pardon My Voice". I am honestly torn. this is a completely even contest - 50/50 - but I had to pick a winner.
Congratulations, LifeinGrey.
Contest Winners
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"Pardon My Voice"• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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The two titles are the poems body. gotta look at them to see em.• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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nothing kills freedom better than democracy.by rustynite 1 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 13 10:48 PM 2007. In govt. liberty. America, Prison as a growth industry.etc
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [8]
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DICKtators in Far go ciggarette plant Erase my protestby Failuretosociety 4 lines, on Sep 12 11:09 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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I wasn't sure whether or not the "Ban _____!!!" was supposed to serve as a prompt for what the title should be, so I filled the blank in for one of the possible titles, and then created the second title without the 'ban.'&nbsby Pseudononymous 0 lines, on Sep 25 9:29 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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political bull shit its what i call it
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made you think a thought.
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Ashtrays and homophobic gays
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Time For Another Tea Party - Bigger, Better and Unabridged
or The OVER ME in Government Is My DEAD BODY -
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that's a good one - you should enter.
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Thank you for the shiny trophy, and congratulations to other winners. ^-^
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