The Bar Scene (Adult)

It's been too long since I have gone out and gotten shit-faced and ended up in bed with someone I didn't know.

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on September 25, 2007
Rewards: Gold: 300
Final notes:
Thanks to everyone who entered. I got some great entries. The winners all captured a mood that fit with mine. Give them a read.

Contest Winners

Friday Night Odyssey

Friday Night Odyssey
It’s that time of day again,

by NoUseForAName 60 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 23 8:55 PM 2007
Gold trophy winner

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Come Mourning

Hangovers are epitaphs
echoing the short life

by alexandrathegreat 39 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 18 10:02 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Dark, Personal, Weird
Silver trophy winner

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~Barflies & Bitches~

by Fug-azi 69 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 17 12:15 PM 2007. In My own style, Adult, Society, Contest
Bronze trophy winner

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Entries [12]

1 - 12 of 12

All In Fun Danna, My AP Mentor

There was a young girl from the suburbs
who ended up laid at by her curb

by Carly Pop 13 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 11 11:26 PM 2007

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Great Saturday Night

The moon was full Cool breeze flowing

by pruedence 30 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 11 3:51 PM 2007

• Commented on by judge.
The Drinking Poem

THE DRINKING POEM We're all drunk tonight

by darlintlc 31 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 4 4:46 PM 2007. In Contest

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
Party Time

The time has come for a party The biggest the world has seen

by ChrisE 24 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 13 9:36 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Life, Social

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
[ Met you at the local bar ]

Met you at the local bar
It's been such a long time

by cre8tiv-writer 46 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 30 5:24 PM 2007

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what the hell did I drink last night?

Who are you?
I say as I rise,

by ladysunshine 15 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 23 5:06 PM 2007

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Sober Saturday Night

by Master Domtos rose 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 24 4:04 AM 2007. In Adult, Life

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Desperate

Dimpled little arms
wrapped around my neck

by Air Head 34 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 8 3:34 AM 2005. In Personal, Angst

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Sullied Vows

The heat sticks to us
like a promise

by AngieBaby 32 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 1 3:51 AM 2005. In Personal

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By me, right now

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Griswold
September 11, 2007
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Holy Cow Danna!!!! What a contest. I don't know If I can do this or not. Oh, the nasty thoughts chasing through my head right now.
- Danna Hobart
  September 12, 2007
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  Just go with those naughty thoughts
- - Griswold
    September 12, 2007
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    You got it
adios muchachos
September 14, 2007
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Hi Danna
"...with someone I didn't know."

Biblically speaking I'm guessing, right?

Can't get into this contest. I'm expecting to win a pullitzer some day, and they've got enough against me now to send me to prison for thirty years!LOL

Very interesting to say the least, Danna!

Good Luck!

John