Dunno why.
Just want to.

RULES;
x. Choose your BEST Prewrite [That has not recieved an award or that I have read allready.]
x. Spelling, Correct.
x. Minimum words, 10 lines.
x. Topics NOT allowed: Erotica, Religion, Suicide, etc.
x. I LOVE imagery and metaphors. <3
x. Put your username in your authors notes.
x. Only one entry per person.
x. It would be nice if you commented mine, and other contestants poetry.

x. I will comment everyone's piece, eventually.
x. 20 people will go on.
x. 1 week- hurry up.
Thanks. <3
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 17, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 17 people
- Final notes: Wow.
Over half of the entrants, [like 89%] didn't follow the rules.
Really, it wasn't that difficult.
But either way I needed 20 winners so I excused some of the best pieces from their mistake.
Those of you that have won Gold, Silver, Bronze, or an HM, move on to the next Round - here:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2369602
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2369602
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2369602
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2369602
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2369602
So go enter. :]
[Also, Note that the order of HM's is in no particular order.]
Thank you all for entering, it did mean a lot to me and a lot of the reads were very enjoyable.
Good luck with your writing & have fun. <3
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3042280, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3378876, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3160428, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by EtherealMess 27 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 12 6:00 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Hope, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Weird
Honorable mention
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Vessel
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Human lives are of two types, / One is guided by senses. / People who are after pleasure of / Eyes, ears, nose, taste and touch / Are man iby Freelance writer 22 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 24 1:49 AM 2007. In Life, Spiritual, Society, Thoughts
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3191342, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Steeling myself, I set my gaze
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for some reason i'm addicted to poems with parts..• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Accidently dropping
rose coloured spectaclesby Blankscreen2222 57 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 29 6:20 AM 2007. In Hope, Quite possibly a new spectacle situation. My own style, Freewrite
Honorable mention
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Entries [41]
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She floats on by like a butterfly, / Ocassionally people stop and stare, / Look ar her beauty and flawlessness, / They walk on cos she's ju• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Darkness reclaiming,
A battle rages,
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I See The Sadness In Your Eyes,
When They Keep Telling You Lies,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Trent plus pen 29 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 28 7:35 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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An undulating breeze sweeps sun-burnt leaves;
the last breaths of a dying summerby Picnic-Lightning 21 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 8 9:48 PM 2007. In Impressionism• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know a place-
it's not far from here.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hidden from despairing thighs clutching leather,
The willing eyes of a triumphant brown,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Shenton 27 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 22 9:32 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm standing at the crossroads
The intersection of love and hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Inside this cell, empty home.
Face pressed against the bars, I can't take anymore.by Swintha 35 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 1 4:13 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Beer [bottles] all over.. / Dragging me d. / o. /by Griswold 14 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 11 9:35 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Hope, Contest, Inspirational, Abstract, Dirrty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Squadron Leader Liaquat Khan DFC (Distinguished Flying Cross)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm falling apart I'm a complete messby Sticks-And-Stones 29 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 8 8:42 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Behold my emotions, as I walk towards the truth
Withstand my spontaneity, as I break all the rulesby poetic-enigma21 23 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 29 9:19 AM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
she was an undiscovered poet,
and a nightly graveyard walker.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They met one day
while roaming the hallsby blondevamp 97 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 28 6:37 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
About all we've searched so long outside, and that we'll only find within.by masky 23 lines, 35 comments, on Apr 8 11:19 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Life, Lost in thought, Philosophy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A conversion of your best years passed down to me
Thank you for all my days for all days both gray and blue• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I feel the chill
As the shivery draftby Natasha Bradich 24 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 10 11:03 PM 2007. In Sadness, Life, Spiritual, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look in the mirror,
Tell you what I see,by SingLikeNo1sListenin 20 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 27 12:56 PM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Nothing but emotions
Run through this body• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Times we laughed times we cried The time is all gone, now I have to say goodbyeby kimba 13 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 13 7:32 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When outside I went, I would run hard to explore
brby BruiserMadden 62 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 23 6:36 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I watch and wait and dream, / evil things that surround mysteriously- / eating away at my flesh. / / It is the Raven who brings me back- /by FlaviusArrianus 26 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 2:04 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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This is hard already!
Im trying hard to find [decent] write that you havent commented or that ive won something.
haha
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can i wrote something now?
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Haha, I'm sorry.

I comment on almost every new piece by the people on my favorites list, so this my be difficult for you!
But all of your stuff is great, so I'm sure I'll like it. :]
"can i wrote something now?"
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Can i write something new*
sorry babe!
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Haha, I'm sorry. :[
It's prewrites!
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dammnn.
Haha
Ill try find somethin x
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hahaha it was actually hard to find one that fit the requirements. Luckily ive been doing a lot of writting lately, so here it goes
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haha by that I mean you have commented on all my good ones!
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Haha, awe, I'm sorry!
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haha thats cool!
Its a good idea though - get to read some poetry you havent read before.
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Yeah.
I usualy require freshwrites but most poets are too lazy to attempt that I suppose because I hardly ever get any entries. :/
So I decided to do this because I was bored.
And a week for rounds?
lmfao.
I think I'm cutting it down to tonightttt.
I'm being overloaded with them!
Haha.
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hahaha yeah. I thinkm aybe a good trim-down is neccesary

A lot of the time i dunno what my newish writes are like, hence feedback like yours is very helpful
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Like, I dont go "wow ive written a great poem" often.
Because i cant really tell.
I need to see what other people think
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Nahh, that's okay.
I don't either.
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Ahh i have nothing ]: Sucks
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C'mon, you don't have a prewrite that I haven't commented on?
That's all you need.
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well
it was rubbish
but i entered!
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Haha, I'm sure it's not rubbish!
And I am glad you entered, darling.
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You've already read everything of mine,
but I entered anyway
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Good.
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i entered
but its an old one
cause youve read/commented all of my recent/ish ones
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Awe, I'm sure I'll love it.
I love everything by you.
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I want to enter but you've commented on so many of them, or they've won awards.
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Haha, awe, I'm sorry!
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I was lucky, I wrote something a few days ago ^_^
Have fun picking only 20, there's some hella good poets here
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Congratulations to all other winners and thank you for this nice trophy.

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Thank yew for hm babe!
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