SO im not going to lie i was really dissapointed in this i dident really get what i was looking for
but what ever i guess
ill just throw away my points
other then that i really liked a couple of them
the others were not what i was looking for at all
but thanks for entering
I want all your slam poetry.
The kind you want to scream form the top of a building...
I want that spoken word thats not quite a poem..
I want what ever you have that you think will make you win...
The kind that tells it like it is..
Makes you look at things differently..
Swear if you would like I dont care..
I want to feel what you have writen..
When i read it i want to picuter you standing on a stange screaming it
not just reading
but ranting and raveing
It's gotta be performable (not that I'll preform it though, but I'll preform it to myself, and that should be good enough)
There are no rules
Enter what you like
Just make sure its a poem you could slam..
Im not big on rhyme but if its good enough you may win
and if you really wanna get on my good side
do or enter a gay/pride/lesbian/ poem
... i may not comment on all poems...
but what ever i guess
ill just throw away my points
other then that i really liked a couple of them
the others were not what i was looking for at all
but thanks for entering
I want all your slam poetry.
The kind you want to scream form the top of a building...
I want that spoken word thats not quite a poem..
I want what ever you have that you think will make you win...
The kind that tells it like it is..
Makes you look at things differently..
Swear if you would like I dont care..
I want to feel what you have writen..
When i read it i want to picuter you standing on a stange screaming it
not just reading
but ranting and raveing
It's gotta be performable (not that I'll preform it though, but I'll preform it to myself, and that should be good enough)
There are no rules
Enter what you like
Just make sure its a poem you could slam..
Im not big on rhyme but if its good enough you may win
and if you really wanna get on my good side
do or enter a gay/pride/lesbian/ poem
... i may not comment on all poems...
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 27, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: im sorry it took so long to judge stuff came up
thank you all for entering
they were all every good
Contest Winners
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3308978, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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It's just about how people can take life for granted and how we don't even realize we do.by Lyrical Rain 35 lines, 20 comments, on Aug 4 11:04 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Life, Thoughts, Message, Spoken Word• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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I am a sun-swept warrior of the tundra,
I plumb the moors and climb ropeless on the rockface• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Glasyalabolas 70 lines, 4 comments, on May 24 8:10 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Angst, My life, My own style, Anger, Hope, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Its been forever since I saw you last / We were yelling and swearing / Threatening lawsuits / And sure it was the end / I'd never see you again / You'd never speak your poison / At least not in my presence. /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh Tailgater,
Doth thine eye not see my mini Golf?by jkh 26 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 17 6:30 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t need to be
Taken care ofby lilith78 44 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 18 9:00 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
The fountain of life is drying up Too much has gone to be replaced• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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hipocrit
F***k off you mean nothing to me
Your just a hypocrite and im tired of your sh**
I cant believe any thing you say
Cause you slowly kill me every day
You broke me down so now
I don’t know who I am any more
And I don’t know what to fight for
Who ever said this country is free
I hate them all and there your enemy
Stand up only to be put down
It’s hard to fight when there is no start
It’s hard to fight when you have no heart
Every thing has fallen apart
Nothing is real its hard to feel any pain
Any more we fallen so far and lost it all
Thers no point in trying to start again
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glad you saw some promise in my entry; I'd add a little more rhythm to some parts before I'd slam it anywhere... thanks much.
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