This is a pif from Kandy's contest...
This is an easy one, I would
like you all to enter what you
think is your best write
to come out of a quickie contest.
It has to be 50 words or less.
I am looking for powerful
meaning within the poem:
- succinct
- imagery
- metaphor
and presentation.
thanks!
The contest will close after
100 entries, (or when they
stop coming in...lol)
I will be removing poems,
only to keep it organized,
I'll probably just keep about
40-50 poems in at the end.
**I think one poem already got
removed by accident before I read it
that happens sometimes, if it was yours,
please let me know. (or if you removed it)
This is an easy one, I would
like you all to enter what you
think is your best write
to come out of a quickie contest.
It has to be 50 words or less.
I am looking for powerful
meaning within the poem:
- succinct
- imagery
- metaphor
and presentation.
thanks!
The contest will close after
100 entries, (or when they
stop coming in...lol)
I will be removing poems,
only to keep it organized,
I'll probably just keep about
40-50 poems in at the end.
**I think one poem already got
removed by accident before I read it
that happens sometimes, if it was yours,
please let me know. (or if you removed it)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 20, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: Thank you all so much for your entries, I am amazed at the amount of dark poetry into the contest - as this is how people are feeling when they write these quickies,..anyways, the top 22 are all great - I enjoyed reading and commenting on all of the poems...the 10 winners are beautiful poems of how I see this world too, how the world is and will be is how we choose to see it, and a reflection of all we are and project, in poetry too, and so I think a lot of the poems are love/sensual poems, as well as ones of hope, happiness, and light that I chose to be in the finalists...thank you all.
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3259744, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Imagine thought,
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in the incandescent
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by Twins 4 me 25 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 9 5:33 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Internal window / translucent, opaque glass / smudged mirror of introspective / images / creating an optical illusion.by Floorboards 11 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 6 5:29 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Macey Muse 35 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 5 6:21 AM 2007. In short• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Chains laid by guilt
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It’s a boy! / I quit. / I’m gay. / Never again. / I do. / I’m pregnant. / You’re drunk. / HELP! / The winner is… / I don’t know. / It’s cancer. / I got accepted! / It’s over. / She’s dead.by BlueNote27 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 7 3:30 PM 2007. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3050556, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [36]
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by LadyLeviathan 10 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 23 1:53 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Harsh fluorescents'
in the bathroom mirrorby still.she.waits 4 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 5 2:37 AM 2007. In noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
An early morning walk in the forest, Sun filters down through the trees,by MuffinTree 10 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 14 10:25 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I strike like a bolt of coherence,
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I will always love you, forever and ever, I'm yours• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Alone i sit
in the mesmerizing darkby Lilacmoonshine 17 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 7 8:48 AM 2007. In Angst and sad• Commented on by judge. -
by delightfulmess 21 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 30 5:33 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Life, Love, Spiritual, Thoughts, contest 50 words• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Ever sence I was little,
To me he never would belittle.by LaundryGoat 16 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 7 5:17 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Virgoan 12 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 6 7:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Broken by love Shattered by tearsby countrychick06 23 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 10 6:13 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cold breath form her leaves from the ground shape
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Reddened cheeks and puffy eyes
Stuffy nose and tears I cry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hear the crack fall through the air, / turn to look and meet his stare. / Blood running down your cheek- / a bashed and beaten memory. / A whip's kiss and broken prayer. /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Summer blossoms bloom Over time fall onto theby Daizy21 3 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 18 12:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Nightmares elusive as shadows• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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most my quicky poems that dont have a word limit are about 60 words, just over your limit lol! *pouts*. the one i entered isnt great but its the best i have under 50
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Thanks Ms.March...I appreciate all your contests...congrats to all the winners...Rich
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you're welcome
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Congrats to All The Winners Here!
Thank-you so much for this amazing recognition!
I have to agree with you-what we put out is what will find us in this world. So many have no concept of this universal truth. Now, I'm off to read the others at the top as I am a fan of positive writes too. Thank-you for hosting this and for gracing my write with gold. Blue -
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you're welcome and thank you for your lovely poem
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Thank you for hosting Marchie
thank you for honorable...and congratulations to the chosen winners....big mally hug for all the wonderful poets entered...ta da
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Oh! Thank you much for the bronze... U;m glad I re-entered! And thanxx for brightening up my day... good morning!
Candy
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you're welcome, it was a lovely entry, thank you ...and good morning to you, I hope you have a wonderful day, I am happy that I got it off to a good start
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thanks for silver in such a lovely contest.
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you're welcome - thanks for your poem!
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Thank you for hosting & for the HM, Tara. Congratulations, one & all. Be well, Poets & Scribes. Wanda
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you're welcome, and thank you for entering - it's nice to be reading some poetry again from you
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thank you for your appreciation.
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