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Love

Write about love-- any kind. Be original.

I'm accepting prewrites, though I'd certainly prefer if it was a fresh write. Feel free to reserve a spot.

I'll comment on poems that make me want to comment. I reserve the right to offer critique, but you don't need to take my opinion as law.

I tend to like poems with imagery and well-thought-out extended metaphors, but I also have a soft spot for simplicity and straight-forward styles.

Please rhyme ONLY if you are capable of doing it well.

Points will go up if I'm impressed.

Remember: originality is the key here.

Closes at my discretion.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 3, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you for all the submissions to the contest. I got some really good ones from this, and it was interesting to see how everyone wrote about love.

Contest Winners

  1. She is a bittersweet symphony / crashing upon me like waves of turquoise sea / that burst on shores of volcanic rock, / filling me with her
    by Everwind Rising 36 lines, 35 comments, on May 25 11:29 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Spiritual, Personal, Romance
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. I drum a tattoo on your heart / of letters undone and / words that hide / amongst the roving clouds. / The desert punctures my willing toes
    by freestallion 43 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 30 5:18 AM 2007. In Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Delicately I unfolded the sheets
    crisp, white, aroma of you as I
    by LadyLavender 11 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 3 6:07 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. First came the daydream, then came the sweet reality...
    by AutumnsFlame 35 lines, 90 comments, on Mar 30 11:32 PM 2007. In Hope, Fantasy, Love, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Were there room enough / to spread our life / like a blanket on the grass, / I'd show you the patchwork / of our years. / The piece of sati
    by CelticQueen 18 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 25 6:21 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [17]

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  • When he pulls me into his lap, / then wraps his arms around me, / I love it. / When he laughs at me, / even though I wasn't trying to be fu
    by Clear-Cut Crystal 26 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 18 9:47 PM 2007. In love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • You are the reason why i have no bad dreams,
    My protector, my God.
    by HpWICKEDangel 10 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 19 1:43 PM 2007. In Contest, Hope, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Love- / For awhile I forgot what it was / Being in and out of abusive relationships / I had thought about forgetting that four letter word
    by Asylaarix 33 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 29 3:20 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • Scorpio child, of passion and power,
    with ambition growing like a flower.
    by th3sl4y3r 26 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 31 6:42 PM 2007. In love, despair, desire
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • In the darkness of the night a raindrop falls silently to the ground
    by theladybluedevil 15 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 10 12:19 PM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • feeling like you've lost it torn from being used
    by Joy.To.The.World 25 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 2 4:57 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I know you hate me / But that will never stop my love from growing / Maybe deep down / You really love me / You just can't admit it / I see you chasing other girls / As I stand here feeling small and unnoticed
    by a blooming rose 11 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 13 8:47 AM 2007. In Lost love, My life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • I wander to the kitchen, pour the water and the grounds, and start the brew.
    Then I sit down and start another verse about the thrill of l
    by dericlee 18 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 30 1:11 PM 2003. In Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • To You:
    Unattainable girl
    by Bgant84 30 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 8 5:30 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • i was so frustrated/ that they, like some
    wrong puzzle piece, wouldn't fit
    by tigress3737 28 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 31 11:23 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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Comments

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  • Joy.To.The.World
    September 3, 2007
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    can it be like a bad relationship type love if that counts for you


    • saartha
      September 3, 2007
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      So long as it's portrayed originally (I've seen that subject a lot, so be careful), go right ahead.


  • TheWayIllDie
    September 3, 2007
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    where do i enter?

    where do i enter for this?


    • saartha
      September 3, 2007
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      I've extended it, allowing for 10 more entries. Better get your entry in quick =)


    • saartha
      September 3, 2007
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      Whoops, forgot to reset the close date. You should actually be able to enter it now.


  • TheWayIllDie
    September 3, 2007
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    dang it

    damn i missed out...lol ox


  • CelticQueen
    September 4, 2007
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    Thanks for the Honorable Mention in your contest. celtic queen

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