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No Pretense

Options:
A. Write a poem, then post it here.
B. Do something else, then don't tell me about it.


Rules:
1. Don't make me regret not writing any rules.



If I tell you what I don't like about your poem, it's because I liked your poem enough to really think about it, and then had some thoughts. If you don't want to hear someone else's thoughts about your writing, option B might be a good fit for you.


Go.

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You will all get quality commentary, so help me god. I've "judged" this contest, but I am far from finished writing comments. I will come back tomorrow morning (10/13), and bang out a few more.

Thank you all sincerely for entering. What a rush.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 13, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 999, Silver: 99, Bronze: 9
  • Final notes:
    This is only contest #6 for me, and I can honestly say that I've rarely seen so much good stuff posted on the same page. I read them all a dozen times or more, and I am still struggling to say something well-considered about a lot of them. Regrettably, I've not commented everyone yet.
    Here are the trophies, but that's not all I've got to say. Please allow your poems to stick around long enough for me to enjoy saying something about them.

    It makes me feel pretty good that so many good writers chose to show up to this contest. My thanks to all of you.
    ~Morgan

Contest Winners

  1. The gun had no bullets
    Your mind has no refrain
    by horus8 22 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 12 11:39 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by jantastic 40 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 13 2:55 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. if, perchance, we two should meet, on some polluted London street;
    by Barbie 32 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 8 10:35 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Lute 45 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 8 9:41 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Nature, Life
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Virtuous wouldst thou be
    if we, by chance, were two
    by wbiro 42 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 1 7:01 AM 2007. In Love, From Old Poetry
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. He squatted nearly naked beside the muddy edges of the lake;
    by micol 56 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 13 11:12 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. I needed eighteen minutes to finish making the dinner.
    by Blkwidow77 65 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 1 9:17 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Oh! That you could see my bones
    And see that they are hollow,
    by MrsFingleton 36 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 13 8:28 AM 2007. In Tiresome
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [21]

1 - 21 of 21
  • Sometimes days and nights
    are waiting to become whole
    by myrataal 19 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 1 1:21 AM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Acceptance
    • Commented on by judge.
  • For you I play the slut while pretending to be a goddess.
    by AllOuta 40 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 1 12:35 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You treacle smile touches me,
    and then the words come out.
    by neurosine 21 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 1 5:35 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • when?
    the change
    by DK akaLunaticSerene 114 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 2 3:04 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You still drive me crazy and wild,
    provocative thoughts within.
    by Sandygram 22 lines, 30 comments, on Sep 10 7:11 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Life, Other, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • File this in the depths of your iris.
    by the chase 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 13 7:32 PM 2007. In Life, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Along a crimson creek Grows a shriveled bloody rose
    by sanch011 10 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 1 3:44 AM 2007. In Depressed
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My head tipped over,
    you fell out-
    by zochit2me 34 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 1 1:47 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Annalise
    September 1, 2007
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    Bookmarked. I'll probably go with option 1. I have a buncha half-poems scattered around. This looks like a good home for one of them... (after I find the other half, of course).


    • JustBe gold member
      September 1, 2007
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      Excellent.

      Please do ... but don't tell me which poem is yours.

      • Annalise
        September 1, 2007
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        LOL I'll not tell... but I've found that people recognize my writing fairly easy. I'm starting to wonder if I'm too predictable...

  • wbiro gold member
    September 1, 2007
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    reminds me of a contest I held- all I said was "Order a Cup of Latte"...

    you wouldn't believe what consternation and confusion there was! lol I said, "Hey, your the poet..."

  • AllOuta
    September 1, 2007
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    I am so in!

  • JustBe gold member
    September 1, 2007
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    So glad I posted this contest.

    Keep 'em coming. This is going to be a real bitch to judge, and I am looking forward to it.

  • Blkwidow77 silver member
    September 1, 2007
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    'B. Do something else, then don't tell me about it.'

    lol I take it you don't like having people come by and say 'Oh! I'd love to come but I can't because my muse is asleep/dead. But thanx for invite and I'll swing/drop by to read the other great entries'?

    My my. For myself, I would tell those that said that in my contests.. 'Ah, don't worry. I'll hold the contest for you....'

    Hmm.. But it would seem they would stutter and shrink out then.

    People seem not to know, that manners are only good, if you mean them in an honest face, and not if you're just using them to make yourself look good. On the other hand...

    'Rules:
    1. Don't make me regret not writing any rules.'


    ~sigh~ Sometimes you take all the fun out of things Morgan... lol



  • Danna Hobart
    September 2, 2007
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    I love the non-rules. I feel a poem bubbling inside. Maybe it will make it to the surface before the contest is over.
  • ecrivain01 silver member
    September 10, 2007
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    Sorry ...

    but I don't have time to write anything now. Good luck with the contest though.

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 13, 2007
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    Nice Contest

    Congratulation to all the winners. Thanks for hosting. Take care, Sandy

  • Annalise
    October 13, 2007
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    Thank you for the bronze. Congrats to Horus8 and jantastic.

    The poems in this contest are kick-ass. Congrats on an excellent turn-out.

  • jantastic gold member
    October 13, 2007
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    Well, considering the company that I'm familiar with, truly an honour to be deemed trophy-worthy. Thanks Morgan.
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