Yucky Love Stuff (without the yucky)
Write a lovely love poem to someone you love, that expresses the love that you have for the loved one that you love...
okay, here's the fun part...
DON'T use ANY of the words listed below:
love
miss
kiss
hug
caress
touch
skin
fondle
heart
hold
no rhyme
left align
poetic devices
http://www.kyrene.org/schools/brisas/sunda/poets/poetry2.htm (Thank you for the link Zayra!
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(lots of metaphor)
BOOM!
Thank you to Rowan for the points!!!!! I love you!!!!! oops... I mean, I something besides that word you!
And Rowan, who is a pro at the non-yucky yucky love stuff, will help me judge this! She even has a great example below:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3344360
Write a lovely love poem to someone you love, that expresses the love that you have for the loved one that you love...
okay, here's the fun part...
DON'T use ANY of the words listed below:
love
miss
kiss
hug
caress
touch
skin
fondle
heart
hold
no rhyme
left align
poetic devices
http://www.kyrene.org/schools/brisas/sunda/poets/poetry2.htm (Thank you for the link Zayra!
)(lots of metaphor)
BOOM!
Thank you to Rowan for the points!!!!!
I love you!!!!! oops... I mean, I something besides that word you!And Rowan, who is a pro at the non-yucky yucky love stuff, will help me judge this! She even has a great example below:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3344360
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 15, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: So hard to judge... I can't begin to tell you. Rowan has been pretty tied up so I read her comments but I ended up doing the bulk of the judging so... blame me. I loved all of the finalists. Any one of them could win a contest of mine. But, in the end, I had to put it away for a while and come back to it and see which ones hit me the hardest. This is what I came up with. All very worthy and just brilliant.
And to those that didn't make final cut, they were enjoyed as well. It was tough competition and I can't wait to see who wrote what. Of course, some were obvious but some have me stumped and I can't wait to find out who won the gold because I have no idea...
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3344688, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by Annalise 21 lines, 19 comments, on Aug 27 1:53 AM 2007. In Contemporary, My Life, Love Letters
Bronze trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3361968, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3344946, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3348106, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3344578, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3346085, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by Rose Dark Thorn 28 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 28 10:18 PM 2007. In Romance, Inspirational, Freewrite, Abstract, noguest
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3344782, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Entries [22]
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My friends tease me about it.
It makes me blush.• Commented on by judge. -
Now we're worlds apart.
But it's nothing for me to take a trip.• Commented on by judge. -
this was an accident
i didnt mean to fall so hardby bat-bogey 24 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 26 4:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I place your pillow, tight to my face.by islekine 20 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 26 6:52 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by Pamela A Lamppa 31 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 26 9:59 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Whenever I think of you I get butterflies in my stomach• Commented on by judge.
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Sexy & Romantic glitter graphics from S e x i l u v . c o m• Commented on by judge.
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I left notes in your lunch box,by Secret Ink 23 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 31 12:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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..ahhh..
I lub you too.
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i shall be giving this one thought.
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Time is running out... or maybe you're already up there somewhere... anyway... two day warning...
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I am SO on this. lol. Hopefully I'll get it in before you close it
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oh yea!
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bookmarked and I WILL return to enter soon. I am a love poem fanatic so lets see if I can take this challenge.
Amy -
very cool.
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Very cool....
~Lyrical
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Must it be a happy-go-lucky poem?
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not at all...
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I hope that means you have something amazing brewing for this...
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Ah. Thank you for the bronze. Congrats to Muddy and yoopea for their placements.
(and I misspelled almost every word in the above two sentences and had to go back and fix. Man, I work too much.)
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and now my points come to _ _,666...
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ooo... I don't like that... hold on...
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LOL Thank you for the extra point. I think that was the first time my points ever came to that number. It was odd.
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There... now you have 667.
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I have to apologize for missing out on judging this.. totally slipped my mind. I'm suffering from dementia me thinks..lol.
Thank you Cherokee for hosting, and putting up with me.
YOu did an excellent job of judging this one!
K.
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