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How Do You Say Sorry Quickie PIF

PROMPT...

1. "How do you say sorry "


Gold: 300
Silver: 75
Bronze: 50


Hey guys I love imagery and beautiful background.

I just won gold ……..a quickie from Lyre-Bird please PIF


I just wrote this.......


Sorry

Sorry darling for my selfish love
It's not what I meant to do
Sometimes I get so emotional and restless
I just try to keep away from you

But that minute you came by
I look in those eyes once more
I want to ask you to forgive me
And let things be like before



Finding my love Through Storm

I can't leave unless I see you
Even through the storm I'll come
You nor I need not say a single word
But just that look in your eyes I need
To tell me it's ok when I return again



I am so anxious to see what you have to say.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 22, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Honorable mention: 7 people
  • Final notes:
    Hey thanks a million for contributing poems to this contest I love you all so each one has honarable mention 30 points. I must say I love all the entries they were just perfectly written.


    An Apology............gold
    Unchanged Heart.......silver
    Pushed too Far........Bronze

Contest Winners

  1. An apology
    I wish I'd not hung up the phone I didn't want to do it
    by cricketjeff 18 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 20 4:57 AM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Unchained heart
    by getsbetter 25 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 20 1:46 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. pushed too far
    Timing is off, Things gone wrong,
    by katie-jo 13 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 3:57 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. I'm sorry (2)
    I’m sorry I’m not perfect, But neither are you,
    by xTomorrowx 24 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 19 10:00 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Burning candle
    It’s hard to say I love you
    after everything you do
    by Entwining Beauty 34 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 19 3:25 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Nature, Other, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. apology
    Dear Jane, As I've been away from you, I've had a lot of time to think. I know I haven't been able to realize in the past how deeply my attitude, actions/words have been making you uncomfortable. I have been of
    by sublimewriter 11 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 19 9:41 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. my story
    I gaze upon your picture, the story will unfold
    by trace3grls 51 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 20 7:25 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Sorry So Sorry
    by Three Doves 33 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 20 4:14 PM 2007. In Contest, Life, Love, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 17, 2007
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    I'm confused. Title says phot inspired, but then there is this really long prompt, but no photo!

  • trace3grls
    August 20, 2007
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    im not sure if this is what you want but i thought i would give it a try....


  • getsbetter
    August 22, 2007
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    Thank you so much for the placing, and the comments have been wonderful. Congrats to the other winners, I had a hard time doing this one and walked away several times but came back to it to finish it up. Again, thank you friends...GETS