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i dare you...

to try to keep my attention for as long as possible lol

don't delete your entry... i've had two pieces deleted already. don't do it. you can enter millions of times. and its anonymous. i'm not going to care.

seriously, i'm hyper and get bored really easily. whoever keeps me focused for the longest time, wins ^_^

sounds easy?
wrong.

enter as many times as you like, with as many prewrites as you like.

oh and keep it under 5,000 lines. my attention span isn't going to last that long!

one rule: put line numbers at the start of each line.
eg:
1 bored
2 to
3 death
4 someone entertain me

murder, torture, erotica, dark, symbolism and center align is more likely to keep me focused. have a blinking background, and i'll only last the title ^_^

points will go up if necessary

have fun...

so far (so you know what you're up against, and you know what they are if its rated adult)....

GOLD s&m, trains, and other things: 85 lines.
SILVER convicted of evil: 68 lines.
BRONZE first time: 60 lines.
1ST HM homeless: 56 lines.
2ND HM pulling saturday's: 52 lines.
3RD HM adam's final goodbye: 45 lines.
4TH HM delicate substance: 24 lines.
5TH HM morass of anonymity: 24 lines.
6TH HM black innocence: 24 lines.
7TH HM stimulating confessions: 23 lines.
18TH HM burning desire (erotic): 22 lines.
19TH HM chaotic sky: 22 lines.
10TH HM forever lost: 21 lines.
11TH HM born in shadows: 17 lines.
12TH HM preparing the feast: 16 lines.
13TH HM pigs and magistrates: 14 lines.
14TH HM uniquely brutal: 14 lines.
15TH HM defecate on me, sweetums: 13 lines.
16TH HM no sympathy for you: 11 lines.
17TH HM a. is. for. alice.: 9 lines.
18TH HM break away: 8 lines.
19TH HM summer. fall. winter. spring: 8 lines.
20TH HM she flows blood red: 5 lines.
21ST HM 12 lines or less: 4 lines.

if you see a piece entered in the contest, but not in this list, i've either
a. not read it or
b. it doesn't have line numbers.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 19, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 21 people
  • Final notes:
    see the contest for the order of hms.

    well done to all who followed the rules (nine entries are not in the finalists list; they did not have line numbers).

    oh and i fucked up the numbers (we're all adults here...) but it is in order - that's how short my attention span can be; i count to seven and get bored lol

    congrats to all.

Contest Winners

  1. by Tattboyspet 90 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 17 3:47 AM 2007. In Adult, Erotica, Thoughts, Fun
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3256013, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. The rain was pouring, thunder in the distance
    Her tattered coat offered no resistance
    by evo-mx5 69 lines, 28 comments, on Feb 28 2:23 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. by Fug-azi 75 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 4 4:49 PM 2006. In Adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. by Fug-azi 65 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 24 7:49 AM 2006. In My own style, Adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Hello Adam. / Why are you crying? / Your tears are going to cause a flood. / Hello Adam. / Why are you dying? / Your bleeding heart still w
    by Fallen Under Light 44 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 22 10:26 AM 2007. In Goodbyes, Goodbyes, and some more Goodbyes.
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3305920, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. by Fug-azi 44 lines, 43 comments, on Aug 21 1:31 PM 2006. In Sad, Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. by phoenixonfire 48 lines, 33 comments, on Jun 12 8:30 AM 2007. In Angst, Whirlwind of emotions, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Forever Lost / Where for are you, / My wayward friend? / For I hath sought you out, / But to no avail. / My heart longs for your kind spiri
    by RoseBlossom100 54 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 1 6:12 PM 2007. In Pain, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. by Dmonik 19 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 17 8:36 AM 2007. In Contest, Dark, Weird, Adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. by elemental angel 63 lines, 25 comments, on Jan 16 4:46 AM 2007. In Erotica, Adult, Erotic, Erotica!
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. by Billythekid 62 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 30 10:54 AM 2006. In Lyrics, Adult humor
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3271530, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  15. A. Is. For. Alice. / Secured in ropes that were tied. / They kept her in a cell / And every time she cried / She was punished with the belt
    by Fallen Under Light 114 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 27 10:20 AM 2007. In Read it and find out.
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3290800, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  17. Winter moon light
    Gives a beautiful sight
    by RoseBlossom100 24 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 6 4:31 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  18. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3311706, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  19. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3142224, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Tattboyspet
    August 16, 2007
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    lmao - u go girl!!!!!!!!!! ~shaking heads~ there are no words for you ...


  • Fallen Under Light
    August 16, 2007
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    lines numbers? i don't understand it??

  • Fallen Under Light
    August 16, 2007
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    okay I get it... let me go and fix it on my prewrite


  • Fallen Under Light
    August 16, 2007
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    okay I am trying to understand exactly how this contest works... so the person that submits the poem that you read for the longest wins??

  • Fallen Under Light
    August 16, 2007
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    ok so whos winning so far?

  • Fallen Under Light
    August 16, 2007
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    wow. thats me then. I have beat dwellingindarkness? wow. I can't believe that.

  • Fallen Under Light
    August 16, 2007
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    wow. thanks. lol


  • Fug-azi
    August 17, 2007
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    Oh well I did my best, no way I can get 85 lines, the one I entered is the longest piece I have ... Just have to hope I hang on to 3rd.

    Great contest BTW

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