This contest is about sadness.
I was listening to this song, by Evanescence (good enough)
and It made me think; I want to melt into the floor boars so badly,
evaporate- fly.
be something more than what I am;
♥
I want beautiful pieces
Screwed up little pieces of paper, crushed in your pocket]
I don't want
Cutting poems
Or anything gory
I want
the feeling of leaving the body
thoughts of suicide
breath escaping and floating to the moon.
Just sadness.
♥
If you enter anything Cliche' sweethearts. I'll DQ it because you obv didn't listen to me.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 22, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I loved the entires this contest got,
besides the one person who's been entering Erotic writes: which I might add is a bit obvious that they weren't welcome by the contest name AND from what I wanted from the entries.
Besides that I really enjoyed running this!
Thank you to the winners.
Gold: Everthing Unwritten
Silver:Knots (a peek inside)
Bronze: One-Night-Motel
Thank you guys!
<3
Contest Winners
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“You know how they say once you've hit the lowest place to go there's nowhere left to go but up? That's a lie; sure you can't go down but yby Hell In Harmony 6 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 8 5:24 PM 2007. In Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Angst
Gold trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3299398, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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I danced on your grave
And found I was unableby Atrophya 74 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 20 4:40 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I write these lyrics through
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Sometimes I feel:
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Did you really think it would turn out this way. Nothing but regret && pain.by MelissahhMidnite 22 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 15 4:50 AM 2007. In Angst, Personal, Thoughts, Life, Dirty Pretty.• Commented on by judge.
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Wasting time Avoid the meltdownby Jasmine Rayne 66 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 15 8:40 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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by WishMeAway--x 55 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 16 12:26 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I cried last night to remember how it felt / To finally break loose again. / (And oh, how terrible it felt..) / I laid my head on my pillowby SarahEatsAirplane 97 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 8 6:48 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Love, Pain, Sad, Lost love, Emo, Loss, Suicide, Guilt• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I was never happier ever than I was at that moment
Love filled my being to my heart’s contentby bubbasamuel 23 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 10 5:07 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I love your contest ideas bbydoll. I'll try to come up with something good enough to enter, otherwise I'll just have to read the entries.
I hope you get what you're looking for.
ILY
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i like this contest, deary!
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I just entered something. I hope it's good enough bbydoll ♥ ilysfm
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I just changed my entry. I had two and wasn't sure which one to enter. If you hate it I can try the other one.
ILY princess
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i am sorry to ask, and hope i don't come across sounding like a bitch, but may i inquire as to why my poem was the only poem in the contest that didn't get a comment? sorry to be annoying just feel like knowing what's wrong with it so i can fix it up. thank you for your time
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Not atall,
I'm sorry.
If it makes a difference I shall comment soon but every entry was read.
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