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Insomnia

Insomnia is your prompt. I prefer you use it as a metaphor.

Poetry only, no prose.

No rhyme.

Use imagery.

Don't be cliche.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 2, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    You guys all did great. Each of your poems touched me in some way. Thanks for your entries, and please keep your eyes open for more of my contests.

Contest Winners

  1. The world has kept me up for years
    far back as this boomer can remember
    by Carly Pop 27 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 14 5:35 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Black circles under sunken eyes
    Are rewards to the poet’s mind...
    by second-born 15 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 17 8:44 AM 2007. In Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. your love
    (a butterfly) flits
    by Mirthryl 18 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 21 9:16 PM 2007. In Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Insomnia Sheep asleep
    by Billbard 2 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 14 8:08 AM 2007. In Humor.
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. War, raging on around me / Attempting to find a place / To hide / Even though I'm safe in my bed / This is all a dream gone from bad / To w
    by The Reapers Angel 22 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 20 3:06 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. strobe lights and hairline fractures in filaments
    by Exodus 26 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 15 5:48 PM 2007. In Sleep Deprived Insanity, Thoughts, Wierd, Psh.
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Amalgamating pages of soon to be published poems,
    by marc creamore 25 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 15 10:34 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2941644, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  9. / Sitting alone in the light / The ray of sunlight trickles through the cell window / A flow of sedative through my veins / Living in an e
    by TheRoughDraft 21 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 26 1:54 PM 2007. In Dark, Other, Spiritual, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [17]

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  • Climbing internal walls constructed of slippery
    by Kahliya 31 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 14 8:55 AM 2007. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • each step is raging on me like the depths of dreams
    a nightmare gone wrong
    by SignedSincerlyMe 29 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 14 9:10 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Im awake I want to drop
    by disenchanted-vampire 21 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 14 2:26 PM 2007. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • night comes again and im left to dance the dance of the sleepless
    no more sleeping pills to force me into dreamless sleep
    by Devils Reject 13 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 14 2:39 PM 2007. In Contest, Self
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Its 4am and im pacing back and forth
    staring at the sheets. feeling the sweetness of
    by edit my world. 17 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 1 10:43 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Inspired by that feeling you get when you are really tired and sleep is about to take you. Or (as my daughter says) by the relationship bet
    by lindaburns 21 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 21 1:47 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • One step in the dark
    I still move
    by Improv Machinery 25 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 27 9:37 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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Comments

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  • The Reapers Angel
    August 14, 2007
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    How many times can one poet enter?


  • Exodus gold member
    August 15, 2007
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    Wow, I just finished writing a piece on insomnia and then I found this. Timing!


  • Rakerman1
    August 21, 2007
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    Why dont you allow rhyme?


    • Danna Hobart
      August 21, 2007
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      I recently allowed rhyme in one of my contests, and I still haven't recovered. The problem is that 99% of the people who write rhyme on this website, do not know how to write it well, and so I ended up with a bunch of bad poems in the contest, and I really don't have a lot of patience for reading through a bunch of bad poems. I start getting pissed off and leave mean remarks, and then feelings get hurt, so I just decided to avoid that and not allow rhyme.

      • Rakerman1
        August 21, 2007
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        I think you just got the wrong rhymers in your contest. Granted there are quite a few who cant rhyme as well as there are quite a few who cant write free verse, however, to say 99% cant might be stretching it a bit. In any case I respect your rules. Have a great day


  • DolphinLass silver member
    August 23, 2007
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    great idea for contest good luck all its a shame as a sufferer of insomnia i missed seeing this till it closed


  • masterblaster gold member
    September 4, 2007
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    Congratulations to the winners, Di

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