ok...just gimme something good!i haven't gotten many love poems...i want something like a love gone wrong poem. ya, that sounds good. but, you can submit anything. this is my fourth contest, and i hope it turns out well. i don't have the time to list options and things. this is going to have to end kind of soon, since i don't want to have to worry about it and school at the same time at first,so sorry guys. alright, so just go ahead and submit whatever you think is good. also, this is the first of my contests that is allowing writes that are kind of happy..like they don't have to be dark. so enter!
♥thanks,dolls♥
Jess
♥thanks,dolls♥
Jess
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 25, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: wow. im soooo sorry it took so long for me to judge!i kept extending the judging date...sorry about that...i had soo much to do. with school starting monday and all. im sorry!!well...i did have a bit of a problem placing the finalists...i really wouldve rather given a fourth trophy instead of just honorable mention.i hope you guys are happy with the way i judged it, i tried my best to be fair!i think im really happy with my winners though...to my honorable mention, i will [when i figure out how] send you 20 more points. i wont do this in ANY of my other contests, but it's just fair here for different reasons. thanks so much for all your entries and im sorry that i didnt comment on them all. if id had more time, i definitely wouldve. but, as it so seems, i dotn have much of that these days!well thanks guys, and have a good one!
♥
Jess
Contest Winners
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You were just my friend
and I had to let you goby Stingersinger53 47 lines, 26 comments, on Mar 1 7:08 PM 2006. In Sad, Love, Hope
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Gold trophy winner
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"This isn't even clear, doesn't tell the why, this is an incomplete..." / There needs no reason / No logic with holes, like moth-eaten canopies / For this urge to /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Mirror Mirror on the wall, / who's the ugliest of them all? / I think I left my dignity / somewhere between the last two boys / [somewhere over the rainbow] / skipping&jumping like a 12 year old / sayingby LucyLightning 38 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 2:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I will be gone
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Sleeping beauty was awaken with a magical kiss, Away on a white pony they road into a heavenly bliss,by sparkling-assassin 46 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 5 1:40 PM 2007. In \• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you were seventeen / i was fifthteen / those were just numbers / not reasons to keep us apart / you told me you loved me / that we were ment to be / i was young / and deeply in love with you / i mov• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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satin darned; / butterflies silks / filling pen with colour / weaving from the heart / appliqueing two turtle doves / send to you today / sby Entwining Beauty 19 lines, 1 comment, on May 18 2:18 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Life...Is long and endless. What's the point of it all?by Happy Emo in Love 28 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 12 4:11 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Other, Pain, Suicide, Death, Angry, Depressed, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He sits there, on the other side of this screen Can't see my reactions, can't even see my face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by a strange girl 39 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 8 2:42 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The wind was howling like forever / I fed those fires that smoked and burned / The words we spoke were lost in the ashes /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Theres nothing in the world left for me, As i pull the gun up to my head,by scottiedog4ever 12 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 11 8:12 PM 2007. In Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Again tonight I lie awake, / more sobs with every breath I take. / Will the pain subside at the break of day? / Or am I doomed to remain this way? / Choking back each thought and dream, / wiping away each• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I thought we had it all a family that we shared,
But slowly you came distant, started not to care
by trace3grls 18 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 7 4:51 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Every breathe is as though amoungst the living• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My world is a deep dark red stream of glistening blood. / Everything looks, explosive, frightening and deadly, / As if I am the only blood• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Will you hold my hand, / As we walk through them golden gates, / Just our fingers lingering, / It's getting kinda late. / The gates are clo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Drip.......Drip.......Drip
Drip, drip, drip.... goes the sound of me...by Happy Emo in Love 9 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 12 3:04 PM 2007. In Suicide, Dark, Pain, Death, Depression, Emo, Personal, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's a feeling of hatred. A feeling of sorrow.by Happy Emo in Love 20 lines, on Aug 12 4:29 PM 2007. In Pain, Depression, Sad, Dark, Suicide, Death, Thoughts, Goodbyes, Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dead trees are old and big.
Scary, yet wise with age.by Happy Emo in Love 32 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 12 5:17 PM 2007. In Weird, Other, Thoughts, Dark, Teenage thinking, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Tick...Tick...Tick Time goes by so slowby Happy Emo in Love 35 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 14 5:02 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Other, Dark, Lost in thought, Personal, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Ferocity of wind has bruised my face, / frozen ground rips skin right from my feet, / brutality in winter’s cold embrace, / still, throughby Intravenous Jesus 17 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 31 7:29 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As you pull me close
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It's not so easy having the feelings I do tossing and turning feeling confused• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In my dreams you and I were together
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by xXEndless-PainXx 25 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 31 6:18 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I can't deal with this, / I can take it no more. / My body spins around, / I'm like a broken jigsaw. / You took my hand strongly, / You took my heart away. / My mind says i'm sorry, / I'm like a hungry birds preby bootybaby 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 20 10:57 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You simply have diminished my love for anyone
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At times, I know the words to say thanks for what you have done for me
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House from Hell / To• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The mild image of rolling grasslands, the fine moisture of morning dew
Water so cool and calmby DeejayQuik 34 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 18 10:09 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Sadness, Anger, Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I walk down the street, looking down with short
glances. What had i just done? My hands, covered inby edit my world. 10 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 19 1:36 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by lunagirl15 30 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 15 3:39 AM 2007. In . . . . . . .• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Good luck with your contest! xxx
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Thank you for the HM! It was a great contest and believe it or not ALOT of contest take alot longer for them to judge then this one. You did a fine job!
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