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Can't take me home

Prompt inspired.
No rules.

"These moments as beautiful as they are, are evil when they're are gone" 
 
 
 
P.S I deserve right to DQ pre-writes that I think are irrelevant. 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 16, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thankies for entries, brilliant words.
    Xx

Contest Winners

  1. Redeeming Eden
    There was something deeper in the hurricane eye
    by Hadji Murad 95 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 1:28 AM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Impossible Creed
    What becomes the fermented creed?
    empty in my shallow veins,
    by amaranthine lover 16 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 8 12:21 AM 2007. In Abstract, Contemporary, Fantasy, Contest, Dark, noguest
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [7]

1 - 7 of 7
  • Crushed Purpose
    Gone ashamed
    The light loosened
    by Cerulean Sunrise 10 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 8 12:32 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Percentage
    I cannot ask you to exchange fresh bread for stale crackers / but then, I don't have to ask now do I? / cuz you're on hands & knees, shit eating grin / apologizing eyes, WHY?! / Mainlining caffeine to keep up the good
    by freeduck 16 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 7:22 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Slip Away
    For this pain in my veins since you left me behind
    Alone in the icy cold depth of my own mind
    by Lady Nightshade 44 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 16 3:40 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Dark, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A poem of poison and death
    My world is a deep dark red stream of glistening blood. / Everything looks, explosive, frightening and deadly, / As if I am the only blood
    by DeepinRage 14 lines, 20 comments, on May 23 10:14 AM 2007. In Broken Love, Pain, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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Comments

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  • Acidanthra
    August 8, 2007
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    I'll be back!


  • Griswold gold member
    August 8, 2007
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    we will see


  • Exodus gold member
    August 9, 2007
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    I have to know who that quote is by, I've heard it before but my damn brain won't place it!


  • Hadji Murad
    August 16, 2007
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    Thank you for the gold. Congratulations to the other winners and great job to all.

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