Let me tell you what’s been going on.
A while back I told my ex girlfriend that she should stop calling me because I didn't want to be friends, and that virtually we never really were.
This of course was a lie. I said this so that she would leave me be and find something new for herself. And a little selfishly so, I did it so I would get over her.
I failed.
I know realize that she is the only reason for me to live.
Write a poem that shows me you understand the love, the pain, the heartache, the sadness, and the utter confusion I am going through.
Need more clarification? http://allpoetry.com/poem/3276674
All forms of poetry will be accepted, but read some of my poems to see what I like. I will be judging this so basically what I like will win.
~:UPDATE:~
Pre-writes now allowed! But they must apply to situation
A while back I told my ex girlfriend that she should stop calling me because I didn't want to be friends, and that virtually we never really were.
This of course was a lie. I said this so that she would leave me be and find something new for herself. And a little selfishly so, I did it so I would get over her.
I failed.
I know realize that she is the only reason for me to live.
Write a poem that shows me you understand the love, the pain, the heartache, the sadness, and the utter confusion I am going through.
Need more clarification? http://allpoetry.com/poem/3276674
All forms of poetry will be accepted, but read some of my poems to see what I like. I will be judging this so basically what I like will win.
~:UPDATE:~
Pre-writes now allowed! But they must apply to situation
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 12, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: Ladies and Gentlemen, I'm sorry i did not get to this sooner, work schedule has been a pain. I did my best to comment on everybodies piec, i apologize if I did not comment on yours, i was on a bit of a deadline.
Judging was very hard, there were alot of ties that had to be broken. one of the hardest contests that I've had to judge. but i had fun doing it and i thank everyone who entered, i hope you all had fun as well, I am so pleased to see how many people understood what i was going through.
Thank You all for entering, congradulations to the winners, and better luck next time to everyone else, every poem was well written.
Contest Winners
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How can i explain, my biggest regret in life / I was not your friend, your lover or your wife / I acted out my anger, took it out on you / No Iam left broken my heart feeling blue / I didnt give us a chance, I though• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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We fought, I screamed,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3278640, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3278504, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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It took me long enough to find out but I’m out of excuses. Don’t have anymore thoughts.by BeautifulXxDisaster 37 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 3 4:54 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Other, Hope, Sad, In Question• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I could never understand
which path to take, to make me a better man,by Glasyalabolas 36 lines, 4 comments, on May 20 4:06 AM 2007. In Personal, Love, Sad, Pain, My life, Depression, Sadness, Lost love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I have a great poem that fit this but its a prewrite, O well.
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you guys win......put in your pre-writes
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still can't enter.
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Too bad, I have the perfect prewritten poem for this contest- well it is exactly what I was going through when I wrote it about my friend, who had hurt me, and I loved her so much, but didn't know how to forgive her. I wish you well!
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