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The Desert

No, I am not talking about an ice cream treat. I am talking about cactus and tumbleweeds. Don't simply describe the desert to me. I just have to look out my window to see it. I want you to breathe life into it, use it as a metaphor, show me the desert like nobody has ever seen the desert before.

Now for the rules:

No rhyme.

Poetry only, no prose, please.

If you really want to win, your poem will be full of imagery, metaphor, symbol and allusion.

Thanks!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 24, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    This is one of my favorite contests so far because there were so many high quality entries. It was a really tough desicion, but thank you all for entering, and I hope to see you in my future contests.

Contest Winners

  1. by MuddyKing 30 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 6 10:10 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Society, Contemporary, Nature
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. I saw the wet light
    in your eyes
    by Sonja 29 lines, 51 comments, on Nov 15 1:41 PM 2006. In Nature, Love, Contemporary
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by hoodoolover 31 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 6 7:26 PM 2006. In Nature
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3211468, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. aeons ago drought ridden lands
    by between slices 51 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 7 9:19 AM 2007. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Cactus cuts, sun heats,
    Mirages form, the night cools,
    by Carly Pop 2 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 8 4:41 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [11]

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  • by Friesian 31 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 6 9:21 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Parched under a pitiless sun, this landscape shrivels the heart
    by Bad Bill 14 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 6 9:56 AM 2007. In Nature, Pain
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by getsbetter 26 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 6 10:12 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • he is warm in body only. with lips so dry
    by nickiwickiwack 21 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 15 3:36 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Chuck Johnson silver member
    August 6, 2007
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    Desert

    No Rhyme? I would have entered this one..

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/420755

    Good contest, have fun!


  • hartofsilver
    August 7, 2007
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    I've been hoping to find one of your contests that I can write for (I haven't written anything in a LONG time except for that 3 second birthday poem lol), and I think this might finally be the one! I'll see what I can do

    Kayla*


  • Sonja
    August 24, 2007
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    Dear Dana, than you for a silver you dig out of my desert. I am glad that you like this poem.
    Congratulations to all other winners too.


  • MuddyKing
    August 24, 2007
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    thank you for the gold and congrats to the other winners
    peace Muddy

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