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PIF - 48 HOURS - FRUITY

 

 

 

 

I won Mary Cat's PIF contest, so I'm paying it forwards

 

 

here are the prompts

 

10 entries

10 exotic fruits to pick from - reserve your spot, when all ten are gone - THEY ARE GONE

No more than 70 words - make them count

Left align

No end-line rhyme please

please use any other form of poetic device to make it work

 

 

here is a link to see the fruits

you can include a picture if you like:

 

 http://www.foodsubs.com/Fruittroex.html



 

And the fruit's name must appear once in the poem,  DO NOT include the FRUIT'S NAME in title

- make it work!

 

 

 

1 = Pepino melon -

 

2 = Rambutan - TAKEN

 

3 = guava- TAKEN

 

4 = tamarillo - TAKEN

 

5 = jack fruit - TAKEN

 

6 = mamey sapote - TAKEN

 

7 = mangosteen - TAKEN

 

8 = akee - TAKEN

 

9 = loog than = TAKEN

 

10 = jujube = TAKEN

 

 

 

 



 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 4, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75
  • Final notes:
    thanks to everyone

    many thanks to the winners

    I know Elaine's was over the word limit I set, but the sheer poignancy and the clever way she used the fruit's name in her piece made this one the gold

    again

    thanks to all

    Gill
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3261976, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. by -ButterflyCuts- 32 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 2 6:12 AM 2007. In Weird, Dark, Fruity, Life
    Silver trophy winner
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  • raspberry Greeters member
    August 2, 2007
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    awwww... thought raspberry would be here !!!! anyways.. a nice contest idea..


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    August 2, 2007
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    I'd love to, but when does it cloose ? xxxx


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    August 2, 2007
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    lol- 48 hours, i see it now


  • Malabu
    August 2, 2007
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    yummy contest

    I can only imagin, its fruitful delights


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    August 2, 2007
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    it says they are gone.. but there are only six entries?
    i always miss the good ones...
    *sniffle* lol


  • Heart Sutra
    August 2, 2007
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    Lovely fruit picture! The colors are gorgeous!

  • Heart Sutra
    August 2, 2007
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    I see that the practice is more common to reserve a spot these days in contests but unfortunately I have a very very very long work day in front of me, so I have to write it now or never. Good luck to everyone in the comp! Nice idea Gill.


  • NoIQ gold member
    August 2, 2007
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    "loog than"? What the hell is a loog than? That sounds like something a Manchester City fan would say after another disastrous meeting with Man U, coupled with the need for several Boddington's to cope. You know, something like:

    "Damn thit, I can't the-lieve Man Cithy loog than to f-ing Man U. We thalways loog to Man U. Damn that Becktham, and damn that Alexth Fergoogsoog...."


    • NurseChilly gold member
      August 2, 2007
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      ahhahahah

      snorts

      golly if i wasn't so damned tired.. i'd pee my pants with laughter at that one... roflmao

      you need a damned good slappin' boy!!!

      lolololol


  • J.J. Sass
    August 2, 2007
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    Oh this is yummy! If I had seen this sooner I'd have definitely taken "ackee" - it being my national dish and all. In fact, a few of those things are more regular than exotic to me.. ah, the taste of the Caribbean.
    Best wishes with this one!
    Stacy


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    Congrats to Elaine, Jess and Zayra -well done, poets. Thanks for hosting, Gil - it was kind of fun, lol !

    ~ Nicolette

    • NurseChilly gold member
      August 4, 2007
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      thanks Nicci...

      don't think I'll be doing another contest for a while... didn't really go as i thought it would

      plus one person took a spot and never wrote for it

      anyways

      onwards and upwards


  • Cat gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    A wonderful contest - thick with inspiration and some wonderful writes..

    m

  • -ButterflyCuts-
    August 4, 2007
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    Gosh. I didn't even expect to place at all !!

    Thanks so much Gilly, and congratulations to elaine and zayra and everyone else..

    xxx love jess

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