I don't care about your form.
I don't care about your anything but the feeling.
Now, that said; I want it expressed in a poetic way.
Not just:
I feel blue.
My shoe
Is untied
I think I just died.
You know, I really am sorry for your shoe. But It doesn't belong in my poetry contest, mmkay?
Thanks for dropping by.
Enter up to three.
Only one can be a pre-write.
And I WILL check.
I don't care about your anything but the feeling.
Now, that said; I want it expressed in a poetic way.
Not just:
I feel blue.
My shoe
Is untied
I think I just died.
You know, I really am sorry for your shoe. But It doesn't belong in my poetry contest, mmkay?
Thanks for dropping by.
Enter up to three.
Only one can be a pre-write.
And I WILL check.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 8, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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by LaurenLightning--x 49 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 31 5:17 PM 2007. In Angryy Me...
Gold trophy winner
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Mosh. Datta. Dayadhvam. Damyata. / I-Mosh / Under starlight / exists the silent valley / Under Orion / between the wasteland / and Elysium• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Splitting deep / the trunks of you / fire leaps / toward soul's escape / and lemon lollipops / lap about / in playful meander / amber breezby ten thousand cicadas 36 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 31 12:07 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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absolute sweeping
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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i am taking off this little mask i wear... it's hurting my face.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I beg of him to hear my call / Before I fall / Out of his sight /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Mother sky opened her
Mouth for me, slight,by Vernal 13 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 1 4:33 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
I like to sit and cry sometimes / There is something delightfully self-indulgent / About self-pity and self-disgust / Resulting in some kind of twisted smugness / That you know just how awful your life is / Or howby chugglepuff 42 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 13 2:15 PM 2007. In Humor, Sad, Sadness, Emo, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This pain isn’t physical, Yet it hurts to the boneby theg 20 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 1 5:07 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Loss, Loneliness, Depression, Sadness• Viewed by judge.
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The candle flickers, once more, / once more, / as a desperate scream / is silenced / And she knows not / what hurts the most, / the bruises• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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[Hunny Hunny: / I won't cross these streets until you hold my hand] / Diving in for this kiss / I never thought it'd turn to this / [wading in shower water & secret rhymes] / I used to fear the closeness o• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Heliotrope of harsh dejection
Falling uneven in drops of redby Cerulean Sunrise 19 lines, 18 comments, on Aug 1 5:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. -
Under the fluorescent bulbs / Her eyes changed / From a crystalline blue to a soft gray. / Remarkably like the withering of a flower, / Hi• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A grid of phantom memories haunts
The lose dust of desireby Cerulean Sunrise 73 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 18 9:07 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A rose unfurled
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time for ill-equipped / muscles shoe-laced to brittle bones / to try holding the world again / blistering, / cracked, / & bleeding / hauntiby EverxEnding 47 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 29 3:42 AM 2007. In Abstract, Angst, Pain, Thoughts, Depression
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-It was a night to remember. -I dressed up as a little baby-doll for you with cocaine snow falling thin.by xXLucid-CatalystXx 10 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 1 7:25 PM 2007. In Contest• Commented on by judge.
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wind whispers over solitary fields / and lonely roads along solemn woods / (sanctuary of doe and owl) / like a dream running through the trby Everwind Rising 23 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 22 2:42 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The sorrowful faces / of the family and guests...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Sometimes not even tears
can was away her pain.by de-ja-vu 40 lines, on Aug 1 8:25 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Dancing Marionette 23 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 1 9:39 PM 2007. In Personal• Viewed by judge.
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Golden Reflections / Emanating From the full moon / Enveloping my soul / With your steady gaze / All that's left / Is the chalice / Waiting to take you in / Periwinkle Snowflakes / Floating above my head• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I feel distressed from the memories deep inside my chestby xcoldxtruthx 14 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 1 10:33 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Tender to the touch bruises, old tears dry as ice. How isby edit my world. 24 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 15 9:57 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Do you hear her / And the words she has to say / Do you hear her / As she walks away / Chorus: / Do you hear her silence / Do you hear her words / Do you hear the cries / Of this young girl /by Samantha-. 42 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 21 2:22 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Music Inspirationnnnnby Ryno 46 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 29 10:03 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I kept my mouth closed tightby NastyNickie 43 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 1 9:45 AM 2007. In Anger, Lost love, Romance, Emo, Personal., Inspirational, Escape, Self, Happiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In these calm quiet sweet / hours of early dawn, / I awoke and found you / sitting in the garden. / Albeit your face pale, / I can see your• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Prisoned in my tormented state Is this to be my real true fateby prisoner2121 9 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 1 2:02 PM 2007. In pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This wood The thicket warbles in despair,by hey incendiary 64 lines, on Sep 7 3:37 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When I feel all aloneby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 1 2:09 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The earth is so rich None can make it richer• Viewed by judge.
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Little felt animals line my sisters shelvesby vitamin.M 11 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 16 10:47 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Follow me down into my spiral decent towards hell. I've never been good at saying no. Satin sheet staind skin never felt better, and the pattern you left on my heart won't fade. If tears could be fatal we'd both be long gone• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When I'm ready to run
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Oh gone those days when the Third World was but a secret of malicious neglect,by marc creamore 70 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 5 10:51 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I clutch your childhood close
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A thousand hates may make their final stand / but none will conquer this, our single love / Though neither takes the blood off of my hands / the latter serves to mask it like a glove / My violent past has nearlyby Intravenous Jesus 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 23 9:40 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We walked together in the garden of my dreams last night. / Soft earth met our light footsteps as we made our way toward a place called Homby Amanda1 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 19 3:50 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I remember the moon
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Upon awakening,
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Breath comes in heavy pants
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Hazy, the sight before me
the blur of death has taken meby n2dayuwilldie 25 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 21 11:46 PM 2007. In suicide• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Reclaiming my creative imagination Freedom at lastby Improv Machinery 20 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 16 6:37 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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In time, everything you have
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I long for the blade just onceby burdenbytruth 32 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 16 9:18 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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The corridors are crowded / The walls are painted white / The opinions are clouded / They believe they know whats right. / Conform to the norm / They say to me on repeat, / But rather than transform or deforby DeepDarkDesire 54 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 12:21 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Thoughts, Life, Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm dying, Bleeding on the inside out• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I hate you all of you, you made my life bad
you thought you could take my innoncence, left a little girl sadby trace3grls 24 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 5 7:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"You know, I really am sorry for your shoe. But It doesn't belong in my poetry contest, mmkay?"
lmao. this looks like a good one. -
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Yep, it's going to be interesting reading Danielle's bitchy comments about how many people really will write poetry that poorly. This certainly will be an interesting contest, with a lot of bad entries.
Perhaps you will be awesome and excite Danielle with a good entry?
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Let the barrage of emo, amateur poets using poetry as a placebo begin.
I'm sorry Danielle, you're going to read a lot of baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad poetry.
Or you can throw your hands in the air and either let Amunet judge it for you, or remove enough entries to get four entries and then remove the contest?
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I will definitely enter two fresh writes. Good luck with the contest, and good luck to anyone who enters!
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BOOKMARKED!
And I'll get back to you on that contest. School starts in a couple days and I have to figure out how much of a pain it's going to be. -
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Come back if you hadn't. It's supposed to be open.
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Ha- you're going to be a busy bee with this contest. Thirty-four entries, and it's only been open for three hours?
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XD. Why is this fucking closed? I am a MASOCHIST. I WANT THOUSANDS OF ENTRIES
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Because you drew the entry limit at 60, maybe? ... Try setting it at zero. See if that reopens the contest; you sexy sunshine woman.
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Fixed. Thanks. I'm a blonde underneath all the evil.
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Awesome contest. BOOKMARKED. -
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... You are an outstanding poet; I loved your poem at the top (short, succinct):
I feel blue.
My shoe
Is untied
I think I just died.
I will continue this if I feel justice is paid.
My eye
Just let
A tear
On a fly.
Tye fly
Is drowning
In a cup
I think it's giving a hiccup
The fly
Is dead
And we're both ahead
Looking
Lost and lonely
With no-one else
The fly, (and me)
Are dead:
In the afte-er-life.
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such brilliant talent you have. -_-
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i like this contest, cant wait to see the results....
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ROFLLLLLLLLLL 155 entries. HAHAHAHAHA, are you going to get a cojudge?
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-_- I hope so. You offering? I'm only going to comment on the finalists. Because DAYUMN. I didn't expect such an outcry of...."art"
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Titter. Yes! Everyone has FELLLLLLT poetry. Everyone's writing about slit wrists... I'd wish they'd press harder against their skin.
I'll cojudge, snookie, if you want me to. I'll be a bitch on comments though, just so you know.
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I feel blue.
My shoe
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Shit, you got a lot of damn poems to read here dont you? I suppose I might find one that will fit your criteria. We will see. *bookmarked*
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MHM.
You should.
I want to see how many I can read before I die.
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LMAO
This is one reason why I would not run prewrite contest...169 and still growing...I wonder if I should add to this madness...I think after you read all these poems...a poem of torture will be the felt poem in your very next life...
Mal -
Im in this contest!
I really think I have a good chanch of winning! im hopeing I do it took me forever to think of it as it brought out all of my emotions! If u want to read it its titled Dream of you -
Woes ME!
Oh, woe, woe, woe, my poem has failed.
jk
Thanks for hosting contests man!
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