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♥[Addiction]♥ What sucks you in?

Write about an addiction.

A serious addiction.

Drugs. Love. Sex. A song. A person. An event. An object.

I don't care. Just make it powerful, use good grammar, and make me addicted to your passion. Make me addicted to your sin. Feel no shame, and let out that one thing that makes you feel sick with delight.

Rules are simple:

No CAPS or sticky caps. No rhyming. 10 - 20 lines. Be brilliant, and let's get addicted.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 30, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Amazing.

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3252628, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Empty stomachs && Pages of numbers
    You left me marking numbers / in that little black book / && trying to balance one column with the next. / It's controlled environments, /
    by Vashman 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 6:11 AM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Ciggggs. and weed
    Inhale, hold it, release and be free. / My head was spinning with so much thoughts, / They are finally forgotten with one drag in. / I'm relaxed, brave, open, and crazy, / I'll open up to you and I bet you'll like thi
    by BurnBrandMemory 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 12:33 PM 2007. In Personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. The Devil's Breath
    The getting, the using, / and the getting more. / The worries, the fear, / the pain and the despair. / Brick by brick you build a wall, / w
    by blondone 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 27 7:39 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [18]

1 - 18 of 18
  • All This Blame
    I'm trying, I'm failing, I can't do this anymore / Dying to forget, I have no choices / Failling so miserably, to make it all right / But w
    by ClaustrophobicJoy 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 5:08 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • my addiction
    daarkness / the touch on my skin / the noise noone else can hear / it caresses / it envelops / it rids me off my fear / darkness / it emptys me inside / making me pure / cleansing me / free from thoug
    by Enter-wnderland 22 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 20 5:13 AM 2007. In darkness, fear, love, trust
    • Commented on by judge.
  • [ Weary knees can fall to bring ]
    Weary knees can fall to bring / The state that never escapes from / So much lost, already gone / The noise from inside / Has me shaking / Sink lower now to bring / Sink deeper now / I've never had such a
    by AquaandRed 14 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 5:15 AM 2007. In Dark, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Oxygen Of You
    Struggling to breathe / Cutting off my air / Gasping for one last breath / To know that you're still there / Reaching into nothing / Clawing at blank space / Desperate to see, to touch / Your distant fading
    by Ilma 49 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 3:36 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Pop back another
    Oh the joy I get from that little pill, / Just one to get me to my happy place. / You scream and yell at me for nothing, / I just pop another one back. / It's all so funny while I'm high, / And you blame y
    by tinyalien13 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 3:44 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Tap Tap Tap
    by Kristen Corpse 25 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 20 8:02 PM 2007. In Other, Personal, Addiction
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Through my Streams Of Red
    Just a little bit, / A little pill of you, / Just enough to get me hooked, / Even though it's so see through. / Futile, that's the word, / Resisting you is such, / Pointless, have you heard? / I need that l
    by Tiggs 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 6:47 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My Little Secret
    Five soul sucking days of files, / The brutality of repetition. / Late nights, red eyed and weary. / I must keep the house of cards up. / I
    by Bad Mojo7 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 21 12:11 AM 2007. In Alcoholism, contemporary, dark, life, other, pain, personal, sad, thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Addiction Rules Me
    I started, / now I cant stop / Part of me wants to, / But the other won’t let me / Addiction rules me / I’ve let it get in my way / I can’t let this continue / It will stop right now / I don’t need this / I
    by EnemyOfAll 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 21 2:59 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Life
    by rainyday woman 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 25 11:05 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Thoughts, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    July 20, 2007
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    Ohh you know im entering bby

    ^-^

    xx
    *bookmark*


  • Trial and Error
    July 21, 2007
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    I should so enter...
    But I won't win
    <3


  • Immortal Moonlight
    July 22, 2007
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    well i entered.. dont think i did so hot, but i did it nonetheless <3


  • Immortal Moonlight
    July 22, 2007
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    nvm


  • Co-Co-Cola
    July 30, 2007
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    holy cow you weren't kidding!!


    • Salt Therapy
      July 30, 2007
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      I wasn't! I was just about to judge but I was looking for something grand still, and I saw that, and wow!!


      • Co-Co-Cola
        July 30, 2007
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        x3

        thanks for the gold
        seriously
        thank you thank you thank you thank you
        :3
        you're too nice

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