Again I apologize. I've just gotten really busy so I won't be able to comment all your entries. Everything that I have read in this contest has been amazing and it'll be tough to jugde but I apologize for not being able to comment you all individually.
I only have a couple of rules
1) Do not write in l33t speak or "gangsta" I will delete you.
2)I will try to comment all items submitted. Do not bug me to comment, especially because I'm out of town for 2 and a half days.
3) Please no erotica. It's disgusting and I don't care to read it.
4) Follow rules 1-3
That's it. Go nuts. Write about whatever your little heart desires.
I only have a couple of rules
1) Do not write in l33t speak or "gangsta" I will delete you.
2)I will try to comment all items submitted. Do not bug me to comment, especially because I'm out of town for 2 and a half days.
3) Please no erotica. It's disgusting and I don't care to read it.
4) Follow rules 1-3
That's it. Go nuts. Write about whatever your little heart desires.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 23, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 70, Bronze: 60, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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I drum a tattoo on your heart / of letters undone and / words that hide / amongst the roving clouds. / The desert punctures my willing toes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The musical clergy sits at the table / with thoughts of laughter that imtitates the art / of our being. / When we talk each has its own sto• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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franz ferdinand pounds in my ears; i / let a pale hand dangle out the window; / my gold-red hair, illuminated with the / southern sun, flieby aeolia 46 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 14 8:18 PM 2007. In california, musings, thoughts, personal, philosophical
Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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Eyes dancing across glassy threads, / Bubbles floating around our heads. / I am scared, but you are near. / Whisper secrets in my ear. / Dancing plates and weeping cats / Fill the room in piles and stacks. /• Commented on by judge.
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I cry, i never thought it meant that much i never thought i / would think of this. / When i cry,i cry for you i cry for you because the love that / i have keep from you. I see you hurt i see you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Twilight, / Sweet escape from the realm of the living / When power thirsts inside / Drawing feet to tread / Agile, / Reticent, / &n• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Why, oh why must life be this way? / My, oh my have I mistake upon mistake / Dangling round’ my mind / Like clouds held above the lake / Go• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by And Hyetal 26 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 19 2:01 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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I love to walk beside the sea. / To here the waves relaxing me. /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Captured Pincess / i am one / Samurai Savior / i have none / In dungon / i can't see / Fuji sun / bleeds for me /by Pixie Girl 8 lines, on Jul 17 8:02 PM 2007. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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the cold of night wont fade away, / its been cold since you left today. / though in the distance away you go / its in this time my love will grow. / the memory of you wont go away, / nor will the colour fade toby raVen light 25 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 15 6:04 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I confidentially sit with a lush accent, an exotic setting / Who’s a delightful addition to my life, the one to compete / With a strange fervor which is as wrong as tempting / The very same one who’s as shrewder as incby LordSam 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 8 3:52 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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does life have to be so unkindby JadalaStar 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 7 9:51 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you smiled and sat down behind me in class / we started to talk / like we have done so many times before / rock music plays in the back groby blondevamp 39 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 24 12:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by My Darkness 15 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 3 7:44 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Beneath a spreading willow tree...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am your mirror / I reflect you so clearly / But when you don't like your reflection / I pay the price / Now shattered glass / I still reflect / You feel I am to blame / But I am just doing what come naturallyby LadyOfFate 10 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 15 1:32 AM 2007. In Weird, Personal, Abstract, Sadness, Freewrite, My own style, Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Another day goes by
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Religion this, religion that, / They judge her, in a rage. / She’s called the root of all evil, / The reason wars are waged! / Lives were taken, in our Lord’s name, / Too numerous to say. / The Crusades wereby BadOldPuddyTat 144 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 26 10:25 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Destroyed and devastated / What rumors can wrought / Faults lay with the accusor / It's all for naught / The memories all fade / With the h• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Please read from start to finish or else you'll miss the key aspect of it.by Demonikvampire 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 5 1:25 AM 2007. In Personal, Metaphorical, Decipherable, Open, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Fool me once, shame on you / Fool me twice, shame on me / [baby, we are an unsung melody] / scribbles left on your arms / & dots freckled across my chest / baby, i'm such a lovely little mess /by LucyLightning 43 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 10 2:49 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My hands tremble to the tune of what / lies beneath tons of slate-gray marble, / illuminating misted realms in etherical / ascent, whilst p• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My young lifes born so innocent and sweet, / I wait for the future and the people i meet, / My eyes barely open theres no hair on my head, / Hes going to be gorgeous my parents said. / Three mby Rhymz 87 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 19 12:01 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As they spill onto the page with every curve and stroke, / with feelings and impressions that are not meant to be spoken, / my passion and• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Those words he spoke / Those words I heard / Cut deep into my skin / Into my soul,into my heart / Hurting me with with every vengence in itby lexie like woah 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 4:14 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In hope of whimpering clouds still not within reach.
Humbled for unknowning minds suck the ground as a future theiving leach.by whatamanycando 43 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 9:35 PM 2007. In Nature, Pain, Spiritual, Thoughts, Sadness, Longing, Anger, Inspirational, Message• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Don't cha' have any feelings man? / No! Ma'am no feelings / You should feel ashamed man? / Yes, your words send me reeling. / How could you cheat me? / That's really damn easy / I can also teach you / If yo• Viewed by judge.
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The rose of red like blood filled veins, / Lay still and innocent with it's own pain. / Lying on top this book of words, the rose has it'sby VirginiaDarling 36 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 8 4:51 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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the sun is blue, cant you see, right down there, under that tree / you bit my thumb, what the **** / ill eat you now, im getting quite hungry / whats that you say, you taste quite salty, well lets go now / to the• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Oh the walls are high, / The crops are green, / And not a dragon in sight! / The sunlight gleams, / On silver spears, / Sharpened in the suby Horseartist7 35 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 12 10:39 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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And I remember, / The night the clouds froze, / And all their swirls were set in stone. / We were in the strawberry tree, / Adorned in sticky red, / And the moon kept blinking, / But only when I closed my eye• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You don't belong now, / You feel so alone. / No one will listen, / Only you can understand your fear. / What can you do- / No one sees theby BringintheSunshine 23 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 30 7:30 PM 2007. In Love, Hope, Personal, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Mum, when angels cry then all's not well. / when angels cry no one can tell. / You see angel tears are special tears. / Thy're made to wipe away your fears. / Mum, when angels cry then someone's sad. / when angby hammy66 39 lines, on Jul 31 1:56 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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In this time of darkness / Let me hold your hand / Only we can conquer this and / Vier away to the light / Everlasting love awaits us there• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Look at me happy as can be!!! / Look inside me, what do you see?? / It hurts so bad. / I feel so sad. / A clown can never cry, but on the inside slowly dies. / Why!! / Why am i to hurt so bad?? / I please people• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm waiting for the rain to fall / and wash away my memories of you / I’m waiting for this pain / To go with it to / You hurt me / More th• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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gazing in the mirror / i hate what i see / imperfection at its worst / i wish i had a face like hers / my face is dull and my skin is pale• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Your rising terror knows no bitter end / there is no death that any god can send / no fractures found profound enough to mend / no love, no joy, no strength left here to lend / no trust nor lust for enemy nor friendby Intravenous Jesus 35 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 11 7:58 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Searing heat beats down / Life hides from relentless sun / Waiting for cool night / ****************************************************• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Love of a Bullet 5 lines, 24 comments, on Apr 25 11:49 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You make me feel used, / Is that supposed to be a bad thing? / If so, what's wrong with me? / Why do i so enjoy being used by You? / As i ramble through this second hand store, / i look around, there are clothe• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We all have gory thoughts sometimes... but what happens when they don't go away?by AutumnsFlame 69 lines, 31 comments, on Jul 31 5:47 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Thank you for the comment
-Bella
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You're welcome
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if u want me to, i can donate some points to you right quick so that you can add them to the contest..
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Congrats to the winners
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