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Kill me with your words, 'quickie'

I want to feel your words. I want to really feel them. I want them to make me cry or scream or rage. I want intense. I want powerful sadness or anger. I want you to kill me with your words.
I don't want anything cliched or cookie-cutter. Cutting and suicide is fine, but if it sounds like something Evanescence would write, I DON'T WANT IT.
Think you can handle it? Enter. Don't think you can handle it? Leave.

The dreaded rules.
1. NOTHING adult. I'm too young to read it.
2. Swearing is fine, but if it doesn't add to the poem, there's no point in it.
3. You all know the rule, no StIcKy cRaP.
4. One per person.
5. Proper spelling is encouraged. It's called spell check, people. eye dont wana reed terrable spullin.
6. You have to put "I hope this makes you cry" in your author comments.
7. Anyone who doesn't obey any of these rules will automatically be DQed without warning and without a chance to reenter.



NOTE: Whoever wrote 'Deeper and Deeper,' I can't read it because it's an adult piece. Please remove it and feel free to enter another.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 20, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 78, Bronze: 22
  • Final notes:
    I'm really proud at the turnout. I liked or loved all of your pieces! There were a few who got mad at me because I DQed them for not following the rules--how DARE I--but besides that, this was a really good contest to judge. Keep writing you guys!

Contest Winners

  1. He Let His Daughter know
    x.
    False realities
    by Vashman 43 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 5 6:38 AM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Death, Depression, Sadness, Lost love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Deeper and Deeper
    Blood surrounds the blade instanly, / but still it cuts / Deeper and Deeper. / The familliar feeling comes, / and an insane smaile spreads
    by Wonderland-Crumpets 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 30 1:43 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Other, Sadness, Anger, Loss
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Dead
    I’m the perfect one they say
    But I’m just so tired of trying
    by HangingSoul 57 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 3 11:37 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Dark, Contemporary
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [7]

1 - 7 of 7
  • Gaze
    This gaze / falls to the floor / like the tears that follow / it no more / I am nothing / I am no one / I am all that you see / but yet nothing of me remains / Nothing is real / Nothing stays still / No
    by vierna 15 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 15 5:05 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Just Me
    Tell me, did I disappoint you today; / Living life, going my way? / Did I crush any more of your dreams last night; / When you brought me t
    by inked-destiny 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 11 5:21 AM 2007. In sad, anger, disappointment, pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • A Boy's Diary
    by Mr.X 36 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 17 10:21 PM 2002. In Personal, Angst
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Dare You Confront....
    by Glasyalabolas 39 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 2 1:49 PM 2007. In Angry, Anger, My own style, rage, agression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • vierna
    July 19, 2007
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    I hope this makes you cry...

    ...because I can't cry anymore