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The Slain Dreamer

Dear writers, I bid you welcome to this latest contest of mine.

I came about writing this contest for a reason of the highest importance. I started writing on this website when I was 13 years old. Before this, I had only a blooming love for the expressive word. As a budding writer and poet, I came into this community wide eyed and waiting for something wonderful to happen. And it did. I was hooked, and wrote constantly. Two years ago I had to leave for college at 16, and since then I have left my page exactly how it was two years ago.

One rainy day I decided to log into my long gone realm of the written arts. And here is where I found the keys to this contest. As a young writer, getting going is the most important part of your career. And just like in the real world, you need the assets to do so. From my days of old, I have 5000 dusty points waiting to be given away to those who could truly use it most. Before this, I would just give hundreds of points away at random, but I think this would be a better way of doing things.

A brief set of requirements before you venture on, dear readers:

1. I would prefer applicants to be between the ages of 13-25 years old. Right now I would like to focus on writers who are the most impressionable and in the prime of their creativity.

2. (Pre-write rule taken out)

3. Although I am a compassionate and understanding person, I will not be giving sickly sweet reviews. Your goal is to learn through your writing, and an honest critique is the only way to accomplish it. Please do not feel completely hopeless if your work returns with a less than perfect critique. Trust me, when you get older and look back on your work it will be the honest comments that you will appreciate most.

That wasn't too painful I hope. Now on to the theme.

I would like you to draw your inspiration from forms of art. Pick out your favourite song or painting and tell me a story through your words. If you plan on writing a poem, I'm looking for more of a ballad. If you decide to write a story, give me just that. I find that the most inspirational pictures come from the artists at deviantart.com. Scroll through the hundreds of beautiful works and find one that speaks to you. Tell me the background of the subject in the picture through poetry or story.

What I like: Alright, yes I am fond of the darker themes. Lost loves, deaths, fantasy, loss, murder etc.
Or fine, write about happy things. Just don't make me gag too much.

What I do not like: I recall in my days being on this site going through hundreds of really crap poems. We have come to know these as the emo poems. I am completely banning suicide from this contest unless you think you can write about it with such romance and passion that it would make me jump out of my seat. What I mean is, I really don't want any first person suicides. If you decide to kill of a character like that, go right ahead.

A few last words...
-I want to see your characters shine in this one. Show me how real they are. Give me details.
-It would be very helpful to know the name of the song or the link to whatever picture you have decided to use. How am I supposed to judge your entry without it?
-Please be respectful of others
-Swearing is fine, just make it tasteful. Same thing goes for adult themes. Be creative.
-Since things have really changed alot since the last time I was here, will someone please tell me if I am doing something wrong.

Now go. I cannot bear to keep your minds hostage any longer. Soar into your stories. Give me passion. Good luck.


(Picture by Tobias Zeising of deviantart)
-Ayla

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 20, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Congrats one and all

Contest Winners

  1. Listen lassies to my story,
    laddies’ lend your fervent ears,
    by Arrianna MacEwan 97 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 30 9:57 PM 2006. In Dark, Fantasy, Life, Love, Personal, Sad
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Every day on my way to college I walk past a restaurant called the Texas Lone Star. Now it's sited on an excellent corner location in a ve
    by DragonBlue 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 3:03 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Hope, Life, Other, Society, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Above the cliffs like balustrades of God's justice and hope
    the white horse appeared and spread it's gothic wings
    by Georges 51 lines, 38 comments, on Jun 10 9:26 AM 2004. In Spiritual, Dark, Hope
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. As a young man sits in solitude a voice whispers from behind,
    by gothicviking 52 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 12 12:35 PM 2007. In Sad, Fantasy, Life, death
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3291938, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. There was always pain with my silence, / nobody understood that. / In different shades I have tasted pain, / red, blue and green. / And none was there to share my pain. / I wrote letters to me as no one was to write
    by Sabir Abdus Samee 13 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 24 8:32 AM 2007. In Pain, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. painted orifice, / window's grim, / cast reflections of a memory, / we dare not reminisce of in any other place. / a million tears, / broke
    by Gay-Militant 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 2:26 PM 2007. In Dark, Angst, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • Riftkin gold member
    July 19, 2007
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    this is great and I wish you good luck, but I am well above 25 and no where near 13 again

    My poems when I am inspire to write the good ones that is, are more of a story that holds the readers.

    Good luck to you all, and have fun.


  • Lady Eventide
    July 19, 2007
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    I will be bookmarking and returning.


  • Whisper Trinity
    July 19, 2007
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    good luck to all who enter and Ive bookmarked it so if I have time I will enter it as well


  • Sarah957
    July 19, 2007
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    Ah, sorry to see too late that I dont fit into your age requirements. I didnt see either that it was a contest until the page opened. You might want to click on contest when you are choosing the catagories your poem fits into so people know that before they click. I wish you luck with your contest though!


  • DrunktankLullaby
    August 6, 2007
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    ohh this looks promising.
    will be returning shortly.

    oh and btw, you have it so that you ARE accepting prewritten entries, but your rules say you don't want them. just thought I'd point it out in case you'd pushed a wrong button and wanted to change it.


  • Max Ritvo
    August 6, 2007
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    Well...

    I wrote a poem inspired by a song literally one day ago- and seeing as how prewrites are now allowed, I was imagining that perhaps you changed your mind in regards to that rule. If you haven't- let me know and I will remove my poem. In the mean time, I somehow think it might move you.


    • Ayla YellowRose
      August 8, 2007
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      Yes I did change my mind about that one. Sometimes people are not inclined to write a fresh piece but oh well, a day old will do just fine.


  • gothicviking
    August 13, 2007
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    Death Became Him

    was inspired by a painting that i saw in on a website.. the one that you listed up there.... i went back to find it and i cant find it! I was scrolling through when i saw it i forgot to bookmark it!!! ahhh.. the painting was of the angel of death...


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    September 20, 2007
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    Thanks so much for the gold. I appreciate it. I carried that white heather in wedding boquet three weeks ago


  • Georges silver member
    September 21, 2007
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    Thanks for the bronze trophy, much appreciated and welcomed. Congratulations to the other winners and to all that entered. Great contest.
    Georges.

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