Ok, so i want your best poems, that you can give me, about broken hearts, or getting revenge on an ex, or heck you can even make it be a cinderalla type of story, and have a broken heart with a knight in shining armor to rescure you. Or why no one understands why you like the guy you do. (in my case, i still like my ex and he still likes me, but he breaks my heart alot, and i tell my friends about it, so then they believe hes bad for me, because all they hear about is the bad, not the good/cute things he does).
Either Give me reason to cry, or become even more angry. lol.
Give me, ideas on revenge to my stupid ex, or make me believe theres still hope (i like the idea of theres still hope a little bit more) Or just give me your love story. Make me happy, make me sad. make me smile with evilness(?). Just gimme your best.
Rules-
1. no sTiCkY cApS
2. try not to cuss or use fowl language. (its ok in some cases)
3. Have fun. But dont be too sad writing it. lol
4. Make sure its your best
GoOd LuCk! haha
Either Give me reason to cry, or become even more angry. lol.
Give me, ideas on revenge to my stupid ex, or make me believe theres still hope (i like the idea of theres still hope a little bit more) Or just give me your love story. Make me happy, make me sad. make me smile with evilness(?). Just gimme your best.
Rules-
1. no sTiCkY cApS
2. try not to cuss or use fowl language. (its ok in some cases)
3. Have fun. But dont be too sad writing it. lol
4. Make sure its your best
GoOd LuCk! haha
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 5, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: wonderful poems everyone... great job!
Contest Winners
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Can you feel my empty soul, the way it cries at night?
My arms empty, so is the space to my right.by PassionsPromise 30 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 1 12:07 AM 2007. In sad, hurt, letting go
Gold trophy winner
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I can die / This very moment / If you'll just hold me / In your mighty arms / I am the one / Who twist and then / On my lonely bed / Missing your every touch / Things were so good / We were always• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Is this where we existed, / between the lines of I do? / The words that you spoke, / were they between the lines / too? / Thirteen years of our life, I / thought true, only existed / between the linesby Rebicmel 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 4:45 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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The flames of love should never fade, / The heart will learn from it's mistake. / You take what you've learn and will trade, / The worst of the days. / I can't see the way of the dark anymore• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You are the traction on my shoes / keeping me from sliding down. / You are my favorite pillow / and you keep my feet warm. / You are my magic Eightball / because you have all the answers. / You will• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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She dumped me cause she / found a better man. / I did everything for her / I even quit my lifes work for her. / I gave her everything in me / even sold my grandfathers clock / so she could be happy. /• Commented on by judge.
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How can you say you love me / While you're making me feel this way / You talk to me like I'm worthless / It only gets worse every day / Lovby DenyMyLove 18 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 19 12:05 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Contest, My own style, My life, Longing, Sadness, Love• Commented on by judge.
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Where is your heart? / Have I lost my place within it? / Our empty conversations leave me wanting more. / Something to love; Something to realate. / Just throw me away. / Don't leave me with false hope of having baby kainani 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 19 1:30 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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You broke my future heart / when your anger touched my face / You commited an act / which I can never erase / But you can. / Cut off your h• Commented on by judge.
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When you came into my life again it was for the last time. If breaking hearts was a criminal offence that would be your crime. Cant beliveby Xmjx 30 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 4:59 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Once we were happy, happier than a fairytale in a book. You took our happiness and turned it upside down. I loved you, and as much as you loved me can you now understand how hard it is for me to believe? You treated me like Cby JackSkellington 0 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 7:08 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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reading this contest, it reminds of of my 17 year old daughter and her (finally) ex boyfriend. they were together for 2 years and went through the same stuff and the same stuff you said about, they hear about all the bad stuff, not the cute, nice stuff. finally though, she did see the light and realized mom was right after all
best of luck with your contest and in relationships. be well and be blessed
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great contest, i hope to enter but im working on my way with words..
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posted wrong place eek. Nice contest -
Thank you for the sliver cup. And congrats to all others.
Take care,
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