well this is a contest about mirror, for example if this isnt clear enough go and read this poem of mine
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3121506
[[please comment on it]]
I dont care what the mirror does, it just must have something to do with mirrors... oh you can enter more than once feel free to
[[HINT: I love dark poems and poems that DONT rhyme]]
rules:
Nothing under 15 lines, or anything over 35... well try not to go to much over, if you must go over...
spelling counts, and put mirror mirror in the authors box and make the font purple and back ground black so i know you read the rules.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3121506
[[please comment on it]]
I dont care what the mirror does, it just must have something to do with mirrors... oh you can enter more than once feel free to
[[HINT: I love dark poems and poems that DONT rhyme]]
rules:
Nothing under 15 lines, or anything over 35... well try not to go to much over, if you must go over...
spelling counts, and put mirror mirror in the authors box and make the font purple and back ground black so i know you read the rules.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 1, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: May I say, You all gave me many entries to judge. Most of them was worthy of a prize but I couldn't give everyone a prize. I felt that I made the right choice, and gave the ones a place that I though deserved it very well. They did a good job. I honestly didn't think I would get this many entries. I got many good ones though. They varied, and that is good. From A mirror talking about an image to a mirror talking about drugs... that is good though as I said. Variation is a good thing in life. So I shall Say Contgrats to all of you. Even The ones that didn't recive a prize you did a excellent job as well. I want to say good job in this contest, you all deserved it. And I wish you the best of luck in all your future contests as well.
Much love,
beauitfuldisasterxx
Contest Winners
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Mirror Mirror on the wall, Points out all of my fucking flaws.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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A pale figure moves from the shadows,
Wearing a white gown adorned with lace,by Mrs-Gollihue 34 lines, 5 comments, on May 31 3:43 PM 2006. In Personal, Other, Dark
Silver trophy winner
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Mirror, mirror on the wall, / Is that my face I see? / Mirror, mirror on the wall, / Do you worship me? / Mirror, mirror on the wall, / You point out all my flaws. / Mirror, mirror on the wall, /by Mrs-Gollihue 34 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 31 11:58 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad
Bronze trophy winner
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I look in the mirror, / and all I see is a girl. / Tears spilling down her cheeks, / nose and eyes red from all the crying. / I look in the mirror, / and hope to see a girl smile in there, / but that n• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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The Girl in the Mirrorby NooNiThEWitcH 19 lines, 44 comments, on Jul 17 12:24 PM 2006. In Weird, Personal
Honorable mention
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i can sense your hatred / i can feel your pain / nothing to loose..and nothing to gain / youve touched me and now im new / i hate everything, and i hate myself too / cant get up and go outside / i feel dead..im no• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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Sweet reflection of mine, why the long face? / I haven't bruised up myself, don't feel this way. It's killing me. / Did it ever occur to you, you look better than the real side? / you have Heaven on your side, while I a• Commented on by judge.
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The mirror / Shows me things / I don't want to see / Tells me things / I don't want to hear / The mirror / Hides the beauty deep inside / Fby whatever666 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 3:15 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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"Mirror mirror on the wall / I am my mothers child / After all..."• Commented on by judge.
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Mirror Mirror / W. Peter Sanci July 18 / 2007 / Mirror mirror on the wall, whose that guy staring at me there. / Sometimes I don’t even know who I am looking back at me, and then• Commented on by judge.
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Hello [Gorgeous] / you used to be much prettier / >>what the [f][u][c][k] happened to you / Why can't you turn && face me baby? / I [want,by rawrbby 23 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 12 12:15 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I sat in a church after what I had done,I criedat the altar,I had killed my only love.
I looked to the sky through a stained glass windowby angels and demons 3 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 4 8:59 AM 2007. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The mirror reflects the image of a woman looking for herself / She closes her eyes / Slowly allowing them to open she is unable to relize w• Commented on by judge.
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Has anyone ever felt this way? / Have you ever had a decent day, / that you felt that you, / wern't to blame, / for everything, that happens' / outside of your way. / Or have you ever felt that everyone' /by Shirley Shaw 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 18 5:12 PM 2007. In Dark, Abuse, Thoughts, Sad, Personal, Society, Judging Others, Falsly-Accused, Betrayed..• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I LOOK IN THE MIRROR AND WHAT DO I SEE .
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by The Reapers Angel 13 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 14 3:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am the mirror of my father / a stolen face-- inherited / from generations past / Unoriginal, his eyes / belonging to the father / before• Commented on by judge.
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I am yet another reflection of myself, / a recursive self reference of an image / caught in tow parallel, plane mirrors / facings each othe• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Here I stand in front of you
Please look at meby Wolf Mistress 18 lines, 6 comments, on May 27 5:28 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Fantasy, Titles Challenge Group
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My / Intimate / Reflection / Reflection / Of / Reality.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Looking into the mirror,
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A song about wanting someone so much it nearly kills you.by Lady Nightshade 42 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 15 6:57 AM 2006. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I look into the mirror, and what do I see? / A filial daughter, / Obedient and loving; / A lovely girl, / Growing into a beautiful woman; / A faithful friend, / Understanding and willing to share,by LuciferLight 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 7:10 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I peer i peer in the mirror, my hair is gray but it seems like it was only yesterday when i was running and spinning around and away but now is today that i look old and gray to think my youth went away and i know that i'm noby skull8686 0 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 3:48 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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My feet they take one step and then another
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Mirror, mirror / On the wall / Why do you / Hate me so? / I dress in / All my best / Yet you show / Ugliness / Throwing sticks / And / Hurling stones / The face you bounce back / Kills my soul / Mirby Improv Machinery 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 5 1:54 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Mirror, mirror / On the wall / Why do you / Hate me so? / I dress in / All my best / Yet you show / Ugliness / Throwing sticks / And / Hurling stones / The face you bounce back / Kills my soul / Mirby Improv Machinery 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 5 1:54 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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“It’s all just smoke and mirrors” / says the man in the mirror with a cigarette / He grins and laughs at me / as I do the same / “It’s allby Intravenous Jesus 44 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 16 9:33 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She looks in the mirror, starring at her reflection. / Deprived of happiness, she is filled with pain and affliction. / The mirror cracks, it starts to scream at her face. / The pieces shatter to the floor, unable to beby Fallen Under Light 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 19 9:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Look past the silver of the mirror to the dark backing
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dive with your soul into the mirror's clear waters
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And the sun shone darkly, at the edge of the universe
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The thing in the corner
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I have one on a mirror, after I find it again I will be back with it. LOL
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great contest!
i have 1 poem, but since its only 13 lines ill enter something new. -
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enter the poem its only 2 lines under, i wont dq it go for it
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I have entered a poem.. I have another one but it is 46 lines
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go a head and enter this one also, i just hate them when they are like 50 lines unless they are really interesting
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my oher poem is 41 lines..
i had to remove it
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tis alright im not to picky if its only like 6 lines over go a head and reenter it
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hmmm, i was just looking through, and there is alot of people who enter prewrites.
i have maybe once, and i never will again, because if you think,
really, what is the point to entering a compition if you enter something old?
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Thanks for the HM and for the contest
Well done winners!! La x 
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my goodness, this is really a long list of poetry!!! congrats to all the winners and no-winners
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