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I Want More Family (prewrites allowed)

Well I want to make this fun, so I'm going to do something a little different.

I want you to give me a poem that describes you the best. If you're loving but secretive, explain it to me. If you're a badass but really sweet to your loved ones, then tell me. whoever the real you is, I want to know.
OR
write me a poem about why you want to be in my family. like a sister poem, or a dad poem or something.. if you've chosen your place as whoever then write about it.. but im telling you now, im going to choose parents wisely.. i want to know who my parents really are - im not just going to say "YEAH! I want to be your daughter!" - im going to think long and hard.. anyways -

if you pick the first one then I will decide what part of the family i want you as... or if you want to pick a place we'll negotiate... i guess.. idk..

one thing i really want everyone to do though is AP mail me and tell me about yourself - that way we can really get to know each other and I'll WANT you in my family.

Everyone gets in my family when you enter this contest, and everyone will get a trophy.

Rules are pretty simple:
no erotica (unless you want to be my lover/ secret love/ sex toy)

have fun

And eventually AP mail me

oooooooh yeah, one more little thing... AP sn in your AN plz


You dont have to read this but you'll get a better perspective of what im looking for:

Girls
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aunts
sisters
mom
grandmas
step mom
daughters
god mothers
girlfriend or
wife
secret love
fairy god mother

Guys
---------
uncles
brothers
dad
grandpas
step dad
sons
god fathers
boyfriend or
husband
secret love
pet

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 20, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 20 people
  • Final notes:
    wow... just wow.. my emotions are really high right now - thank you all for wanting to be in my family.. the top 3 people are in order for who started and havent stopped talking to me, those are the people that i see want to be in my family the most.. plus their poems were pretty good.. - really good to me.. anyways, the other entries are scattered because im not placing you by picking favorites, so the HMs are in random order.. you could've been 4th and been stuck in 20th, idk.. anyways, i will be leaving comments on your poem to tell you where i decided to put you in my family, and if you want to be maybe a brother instead of an uncle, then i can arrange that..
    love you all-
    rose

    p.s. - please AP mail me

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3207844, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. This is a big comitment / But something I shall take / For you / I would be lots of help / And not a broken-down snake /
    by Judo 17 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 16 11:11 AM 2007. In Hope, Willing
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Dear Sister, / Every time I speak with you / I realize there is so much more / than anyone can ever see. / I wonder, do I see different thi
    by sublimewriter 37 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 19 1:15 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3190034, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. I tried to write a cutsie quip filled piece, but I can't write humor. So, stated plainly I would like to join your ap family so I may have more than one person to consistently comment on my poetry, and for me to do the
    by Deindichter 0 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 10:17 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. I sit in the corner, / My head down to the world. / Thoughts of suicide, / Roll through my brain. / But in this cruel place, / How can one
    by Poetic Skater11 28 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 5 6:00 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Teenage thinking, Teen issues
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2947250, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. Through all my existance / They explain what to do. / I take notice and nod. / and though I fabricated false steps, / and though I caused d
    by Anfractuous 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 2 11:07 PM 2007. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. I hear you load and clear, / Whispering your needs and desires, / Sensuously into my devouring ear, / I know I can give you what you need,
    by adarkling 13 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 17 10:16 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. I've never had a sister, someone to take care of / I've never had someone to be there for and love / Having a sister could brighten my day
    by LunaAmara 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 18 10:43 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Passionate / Outrageous / Eager as a beaver / Treasure hunter / Dancin' fool / Oops I did it again / Not afraid to try new things / Too hot to handle / Kept a journal for many years / Nervous to the hilt
    by Poetdontknowit 13 lines, 5 comments, on May 5 2:10 PM 2007. In Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Brittany is / a person who is lost / unknowing / uncontrollably hopeless / Left without help / Friends deserted me / When I was honest / Every scar has a story / But not every story has an ending / I c
    by MagazinesFall 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 2 2:28 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, My Life, Hurt, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3207812, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  14. Error: Unable to find finalist item 1930634, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  15. If love was real it would look like this.
    by DarkestAngel68 45 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 1:00 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Happiness
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  16. I'm just drawn to you / and your beautiful face / it's like I've none you forever / and nobody can take your place / my heart has gone out
    by everthesame 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 1:50 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  17. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ /
    by LadyLeviathan 25 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 18 1:55 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  18. I am an arsenic disaster
    .beauty.queen.
    by Dancing Marionette 24 lines, 18 comments, on Apr 18 5:44 PM 2007. In dirty pretty
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  19. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2732096, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  20. by PaiigeBARBIE 33 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 4:37 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  21. It didn't take an army to convince her that her world as she knew it had came to a screaching halt,that nothing would ever be the same agai
    by TexasMomma 79 lines, 30 comments, on Jul 18 4:06 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Pain, Love, Life, Hope, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  22. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2124279, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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